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onehelloflevi — [Tachibana Makoto x Reader] Date...?
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Published: 2014-11-12 10:07:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 14122; Favourites: 210; Downloads: 0
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Your eyes searched frantically for them. You were five minutes late and even though you apologized to them through text, you couldn’t let them wait for you any longer. You stretched your neck and stood at your tippy toes to get a better look at the people. The amusement park was jam-packed today, making it hard to search for them.

 

Then you saw him. Makoto was staring intently at his phone and then he looked around as if searching for someone too. You ran towards him, bumping with some people along the way, muttering a “sorry” to everyone of them. Just then, Makoto noticed you and gave you a smile, waving his hand a little. When you reached him, you put a hand to your chest and let out a heavy breath. All that bumping and running made you tired.After you regained your breathing, you looked up to see Makoto still smiling at you.

 

“Where is everybody?”

 

You both asked at the same time. The confusion was spread on both your features.

 

“Gou said that all of you were here already...” you said as you recalled what the burgundy-haired girl told you a few moments ago.

 

“That’s not what she texted me.” Makoto showed you his phone.

 

We’ll be a little late. I’m with [Name] and the others. Just wait there ^^

 

You stared dumbfounded at Gou’s text message to Makoto. You reached for your own phone and dialled Gou’s number. Cannot be reached, straight to voice mail. Nagisa’s, voice mail. Rei’s, voice mail. Haru’s, voice mail.

 

“What is going on here?” you muttered as you tried to call them again one by one. Could it possibly...

 

“Were we set-up?”

 

As soon as you heard Makoto’s question, you stiffened. You inwardly cursed Gou. Telling her that you like Makoto was a mistake. Of course, this was a set-up.

 

“Seems like it,” you answered as calmly as possible,”do you want to go home?”

 

“Do you want to?” Makoto’s smile faltered. “I would like to stay since we’re here already but if you want to go home, it’s fine. I’ll just---“

 

“No no no. It’s totally fine with me, too.” You stopped his rambling. “Let’s enjoy this day and make them regret that they’re not here.”

 

When you said that, Makoto’s smile returned. “So where should we go first?”

 

The both of you walked aimlessly at the park. The place was too crowded and the lines on the attractions were just too long except for one. Makoto read the sign “Night of Terror” and he smiled awkwardly at you. “Are you sure you want to get in there, [Name]? There are lots of others to choose from...”

 

“But the lines are too long.” You whined. “If you don’t want to we can find...”

 

“No, it’s okay.” An awkward laugh.

 

“Are you sure?” You asked in which he answered with a nod.

 

You stretched out your hand and jokingly said, “Here you can hold my hand if you’re scared.”

 

He grasped your hand and muttered a “thank you”. You didn’t expect him to actually hold your hand. The warmth he was giving spread through you, gathering to your face, your heartbeat racing. You were too surprised that you were only snapped away from your thoughts when the park attendant asked if you were going in.

 

Makoto swallowed hard, beads of cold sweat formed in his temple as you two walked further inside. The place was too dark for his liking, the red lights not giving him comfort. Only the feel of your hand and the sound of your breathing calmed him down.

 

You lost count of the number of apologies he had given you. For every time a “ghost” appears, he would squeeze your hand tightly and he was worried that he might’ve hurt you. You would reassure him every time that he wasn’t. When you reached the exit, Makoto released your hand and you immediately felt a sense of longing. But it didn’t took long because he held your hand again, his cheeks stained pink. A look of bewilderment crossed your face and upon noticing it Makoto quickly explained, “It would be better to hold your hand, right? So we won’t lose each other...”

 

Won’t lose each other? “Makoto... I...”

 

“...since there are a lot of people here, it would be hard if we get separated.” Makoto finished, his finger scratching his cheek.

 

You almost confessed. You wanted to slam your face on the wall and disappear. “Ahaha... right...”

 

After sometime, you were able to find an empty bench. You immediately plopped down, your feet a little sore from all the walking. Makoto, on the other hand, seem okay. He released your hand and stood up. “Wait here for a moment, [Name].”

 

“Where are you going?”

 

He turned his gaze away from you and you followed his eyes to a beeline leading to an ice-cream stall. Realizing that he’s planning to buy the ice cream alone, you began to stand up. “I’ll go with you.”

 

“No” Makoto gently pushed you down, “your feet probably hurts. I’ll buy for the two us.”

 

How in the world will you be able to say no to that face? When you sighed in defeat, he smiled and patted your head. You watched him until he was no longer on sight, the mass of people blocking your view.

Your cellphone rang. Gou-chan.

 

“Where are you Gou?! I swear I’ll kill you when ---“

 

“Relax, [Name]-chan! Why are you so upset with me?” Gou’s voice feigned hurt.

 

“Whatever, Gou.”

 

“Did Mako-chan already asked [Name]-chan out?” you heard Nagisa’s chirpy voice.

 

 “Sorry for the wait.”

 

You looked up and see that Makoto had already returned. Two ice cream cones were in his hand, vanilla and [favourite flavour]. You didn’t remember telling him what your favourite flavour was. You quickly pocketed your phone and took one of the ice creams from his hand.

 

“It’s dripping.”

 

Your eyes were trained to the scene in front of you, Makoto licking the ice cream off his hand and fingers. And as if you were in some sort of trance, you didn’t notice that Makoto was eyeing the melting ice cream on your hand as well. The moment you felt his warm tongue on your fingers, you shuddered and blushed a million shades of red. “M...Mako?”

 

Acting like what he did was completely normal, Makoto gave you a smile. “[Favourite flavour] tastes good.”

 

You nodded and concentrated on eating your ice cream. Maybe ice cream will calm your heart.

 

“This feels like a date. Doesn’t it, [Name]?” Makoto stated all of a sudden.

 

“A... what?!” You stared dumbfounded at him. Does he know?

 

He let out a soft chuckle at your reaction but a blush was on his face. “I promise to treat you to a better date next time we go out.”

 

You could only stare at him, remembering what Nagisa asked. “Did Mako-chan already asked [Name]-chan out?” Your heart hammered at your chest and your mind was going black. Is it possible that he...

 

When you didn’t answer, Makoto quickly added, “If it’s okay with you, of course.”

 

“I... I would love to, Mako.” Your heart fluttered as the happiness inside you swirled.

 

He gave you a quick peck on the forehead, smiling gently at you.  He took your hand and intertwined his fingers to yours.

 

So as to not  lose each other...



The ice cream scene was inspired by this www.pixiv.net/member_illust.ph…
"Sorry for the wait. Here you go." "It's dripping" -> That's what the Japanese message means in the pic.
If I'm wrong kindly tell me ^u^ My kanji is still meh.

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Comments: 50

HeartStar2002 [2015-10-21 04:29:16 +0000 UTC]

MY KOKORO. AHDKDL THIS IS SO CUTE AWHHWKEKF.
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS AGJSKFK. ; /)w(\ ;

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AntoinetteLennard [2015-04-02 10:24:28 +0000 UTC]

     

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WhiteShiningDragon [2015-03-24 02:50:18 +0000 UTC]

KYAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! SO ADORABLE!!!!    I love Makoto so much!!!! X3

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Angie120000 [2015-01-25 20:56:31 +0000 UTC]

Kawaii     

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onehelloflevi In reply to Angie120000 [2015-02-05 04:48:35 +0000 UTC]

makoto is the perf boyfriend material

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Angie120000 In reply to onehelloflevi [2015-02-05 06:23:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! Every girl I know that watched Free! tells me the same. One time, I wanted to rp with a friend this anime and at the bf part we both were choosing Makoto XDDDD

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sleepyheroprince [2014-12-04 06:17:34 +0000 UTC]

Aw this is adorable! I love Rin-chan, but Makoto is too adorable to forget! ^-^ I love it~

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onehelloflevi In reply to sleepyheroprince [2014-12-05 00:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Riiight? riiiight?!
Makoto is like the perfect husband/boyfriend material imo 
(Sorry Rin! I still love you okay) XDD

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sleepyheroprince In reply to onehelloflevi [2014-12-05 00:39:57 +0000 UTC]

Yesh -.- he's really sweet and cute and the way he gets scared is perfect and ohnoIthinki'mfallingforMakosomeonehelpme! My sister would kill me if I tried to steal Mako-chan.. O.o
XD Rin-rin will always be my sweetie though~

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Fangirl-otaku [2014-11-23 17:59:34 +0000 UTC]

You do not own Makoto?
oh but I do..I wish.
we all should own a Mako in our lives.. He's just.. a*melts into fangirl oblivion* 
thank you this is adorable and cute and everything fluffy??my heart cannot deal with this writer-chan! 

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onehelloflevi In reply to Fangirl-otaku [2014-11-28 13:00:55 +0000 UTC]

We need our very own personal Makoto, ne? ;v;

Thank you so much for commenting <3

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Fangirl-otaku In reply to onehelloflevi [2014-12-01 09:23:31 +0000 UTC]

You're more than welcome, I enjoyed myself the entire time ~_~ 
Hai, I wish he was on sale 👌😍

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LeandersLuckyLady [2014-11-20 03:40:15 +0000 UTC]

Sighhhhhhh... Why can't he be real???

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onehelloflevi In reply to LeandersLuckyLady [2014-11-20 15:30:41 +0000 UTC]

i knooow
every girl needs a makoto in their lives <33

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LeandersLuckyLady In reply to onehelloflevi [2014-11-20 21:24:00 +0000 UTC]

Yes yes we do so very badly!!!!

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TheNobodyofaSOLDIER [2014-11-14 05:44:05 +0000 UTC]

Awww, so cute! I loved it! <3 Makoto's such a cutie.

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onehelloflevi In reply to TheNobodyofaSOLDIER [2014-11-14 14:07:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you!
i really think that Mako's an ideal boyfriend material ;v;
like every girl needs a Makoto <33

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Insane-In-A-Good-Way [2014-11-13 22:59:14 +0000 UTC]

goddammit mako you were in on this... now i just feel stupid! but i love you and the writer at the same time <3

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onehelloflevi In reply to Insane-In-A-Good-Way [2014-11-14 14:06:11 +0000 UTC]

thank you for commenting dear <3
i love you too ;v;
and Mako loves you too <33

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Insane-In-A-Good-Way In reply to onehelloflevi [2014-11-14 14:18:07 +0000 UTC]

hugs /)._./) you deserve hugs /)._./)

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onehelloflevi In reply to Insane-In-A-Good-Way [2014-11-14 14:38:35 +0000 UTC]

thank you *hugs you tightly*
i love hugs <33

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Insane-In-A-Good-Way In reply to onehelloflevi [2014-11-15 02:13:55 +0000 UTC]

i am the queen of giving virtual hugs /)._./)

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onehelloflevi In reply to Insane-In-A-Good-Way [2014-11-15 14:28:34 +0000 UTC]

then I would be happy to serve you my queen *bows dramatically*<33
and give/take virtual hugs ;v;

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Insane-In-A-Good-Way In reply to onehelloflevi [2014-11-15 21:12:29 +0000 UTC]

TAKE IT!

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sodaselkie [2014-11-13 08:42:44 +0000 UTC]

hehHEEHEHEHEH
HEH

cute with a little naughty hint
hEH

 

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onehelloflevi In reply to sodaselkie [2014-11-13 10:41:19 +0000 UTC]

sods help
i'm falling in love with makoto
i dont know what to do
;v;

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sodaselkie In reply to onehelloflevi [2014-11-13 10:43:21 +0000 UTC]

you can't stop it
makoto is perf husband material 
so like
i don't blame you
 

DIK TOO BOMB

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onehelloflevi In reply to sodaselkie [2014-11-14 13:51:44 +0000 UTC]

yes he is
every girl (or boy?) needs a makoto in their laifu ;v;

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Insane-In-A-Good-Way In reply to sodaselkie [2014-11-13 22:59:54 +0000 UTC]

amen ._./)

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xxNordicFlagsxx [2014-11-12 22:43:06 +0000 UTC]

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onehelloflevi In reply to xxNordicFlagsxx [2014-11-12 23:15:34 +0000 UTC]

 

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Absolute-Emperor [2014-11-12 13:51:59 +0000 UTC]

asdfghjkl
this was just-- He's so-- I can't--   
It's so damn cute!
Next to Haru, Makoto is definitely my fave <3
I love it. I love it. I love it.
I can't express how much I love it!
This story's amazing. You are amazing, Sei.

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onehelloflevi In reply to Absolute-Emperor [2014-11-12 23:14:28 +0000 UTC]

i haven't written cutesy stuffs for a while now
and Makoto is just perfect c:

YES LOVE MAKOTO LOVE HIIIM! ;v;

Thank you!
no YOU'RE amazing, Wolfy <33 ;w;

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Absolute-Emperor In reply to onehelloflevi [2014-11-14 15:33:50 +0000 UTC]

He's just so adorable x3

I LOVE HIM <3
He's also gonna be voiced by Johnny Bosch, I can die happy ; w ;

You're welcome! <3
Hush, we're both amazing!
But you're even more amazing

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onehelloflevi In reply to Absolute-Emperor [2014-11-15 13:55:20 +0000 UTC]

yes he is!

well... to tell you the truth...
i don't really watch dubbed anime oops
BUT I KNOW JOHHNY BOSCH!!
Because he lend his voice to some of my favorite gaming characters in final fantasy, gods eater etc soooo ;v;
Ah~ I'm so happy that someone as good as him will give Makoto his english voice ;v;

let's agree that we're equally amazing and
makoto is super amazing

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Absolute-Emperor In reply to onehelloflevi [2014-11-16 02:12:01 +0000 UTC]


I watch it in Japanese first 
and then change to english just to compare xP
although Japanese is always better xD

Haru and Rin are being voiced by Todd Habberkorn and Vic Mignogna
and while I like the VAs, I don't think they're perfect for Sharky and Dolphin here ; ;

yes, we are 
Makoto and his amazing back muscles <3

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lnfluenze [2014-11-12 11:54:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm supposed to be writing my research paper, but.. BUT YOUR FANFIC CAUGHT MY ATTENTION AND I JUST HAD TO READ IT. I feel so guilty. 
But totally worth it. The set up/plot of the story is seriously cute, scaredy Makoto and all. Oh oh oh and I actually got flustered (whoa, that's a first in a while) when I read the icecream part. Damnit Tachibana! The guy doesn't need words to swoon fangirls like me.   
Anywaysss, great job, Author-san!  

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onehelloflevi In reply to lnfluenze [2014-11-12 23:12:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you for taking your time to comment ;v;

Ah~ I understand ;v; I was supposed to do my homework too but I wrote this instead. Talk about priorities orz 

Makoto is perfect, isn't he? Just his presence alone can turn our knees to jelly ;v; The icecream part tho, I'm so glad I included it <33

Thank you so much! <33

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lnfluenze In reply to onehelloflevi [2014-11-13 01:10:16 +0000 UTC]

Right?! Lol, it's okay. I managed to finish it anyway.
Oh god yes. Makoto's power to attract fangirls is so strong that I actually dreamt about him at one point. Or two.. -cough-

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onehelloflevi In reply to lnfluenze [2014-11-13 06:54:09 +0000 UTC]

Y..you dreamt about him?! I've never dreamt of my beloved bishies ever. I'm so jealous ;v;

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lnfluenze In reply to onehelloflevi [2014-11-13 07:24:40 +0000 UTC]

Yesz omg. I was seriously glad in the morning that I managed not to forget the dream. ;w; Only bishies I've ever dreamed about is Makoto and Jin from Samurai Champloo. Both of which I've had huge anime crushes on lel. Dude, you should listen to Makoto audio from tumblr before you sleep. Maybe that'll work. ouo

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onehelloflevi In reply to lnfluenze [2014-11-14 13:51:07 +0000 UTC]

Make your dreams into a fanfic !! ;v;
Makoto has an audio thingy?! omfg I've never heard that yet *goes to tumblr to search for it*

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lnfluenze In reply to onehelloflevi [2014-11-14 17:38:58 +0000 UTC]

But.. my dreams are always so weird. ;3;
Even if its WITH Makoto. But maybeeee I'll do it. =w= AND WHAT?! I'd have thought that was the first thing you'd have listened to, LOL. The Yandere Makoto ones makes my spine crawl.. in a good way of course. Cx

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onehelloflevi In reply to lnfluenze [2014-11-15 13:57:58 +0000 UTC]

YOU SHOULD! I would be happy to read it ;w;

oh wait
i think I've heard of the Yandere Makoto one ...
is it the one from a Hakuoki drama cd?
I'm a Hakuoki fan so I end up imagining the actual Hakuoki character saying those lines, instead of Mako-chan ;^;

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lnfluenze In reply to onehelloflevi [2014-11-15 18:33:01 +0000 UTC]

Ahah, well then I shall! And I had the worst nightmare last night and so I thought I'd turn that into a fanfic too haha.
And omfg. YES! It's that one! Well, I heard like 3 of em, hurrhurr.
I haven't seen the anime yet. Got too absorbed in FREE! Lol.

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onehelloflevi In reply to lnfluenze [2014-11-18 07:18:31 +0000 UTC]

I haven't watched Hakuoki yet too. I became a fan by playing the otome game *blushes*

just imagining Mako-chan going full yandere *shivers in a good way*
Is it weird that I'm totally okay with it? XDDD Yandere is supposed to be scary~

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lnfluenze In reply to onehelloflevi [2014-11-18 07:53:18 +0000 UTC]

There, there. I sorta did that too. I became a fan of D-gray Man from reading fanfics of it. ;D;

Weird.. WEIRD? No way, dude. As long as it's Makoto, nothing is ever wrong. Cause.. it's Makoto. I mean.. How can you resist that?! >  

 Hehehe..

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onehelloflevi In reply to lnfluenze [2014-11-19 04:50:54 +0000 UTC]

Nope. There's no way I'll be able to resist. If I can stare at Makoto's back and abs glory without having a nosebleed or a little heart attack, I will start questioning my taste in men. *giggles*

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lnfluenze In reply to onehelloflevi [2014-11-20 04:50:07 +0000 UTC]

Same here, man. Same here. Then again, realistically speaking, if I like someone, I like them. I doubt I'll ever find my real life Makoto. ;u;

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onehelloflevi In reply to lnfluenze [2014-11-20 14:41:14 +0000 UTC]

Why not? Believe in your dreams! In our case, Makoto is our dream! XDD

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