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Zeck143 [2015-03-30 17:08:32 +0000 UTC]
Ah, Β wanted to mention that if you brand or burn someone's neck, it cauterizes the blood.
She would be dead from the blood in her neck boiling and a vein or artery bursting open or otherwise being fused shut.
She'd be dead in less than 10 minutes.
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littlehusky16 [2015-01-16 20:16:27 +0000 UTC]
By any chance have you seenthe movie "taken" ?...
Becaise wow that was creepily good...
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WannaBeATomato [2014-07-02 17:37:35 +0000 UTC]
The link won't work
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Ophelias-Last-Kiss In reply to WannaBeATomato [2014-07-02 21:15:42 +0000 UTC]
I know. My story has been... reported and deleted. I already sent a ticket, but didn't get a response yet. That was 14 days ago...uhm...yes.
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WannaBeATomato In reply to Ophelias-Last-Kiss [2014-07-03 19:28:55 +0000 UTC]
Oh. Well I hope you get your story back. I don't get how people get offended if they know what they're about to read
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Prettytearsfly [2014-04-05 02:31:00 +0000 UTC]
Will there be a part 2?
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sy62697 [2014-03-25 18:25:23 +0000 UTC]
Sorry about not commenting on this earlier xD
I love it to death! I know the whole idea behind it isn't the most moral, but it's good to keep in mind that this is a fanfiction, where anything can happen. And that ending! I had my nose to the screen the whole time, and then the ending hit. It was wonderful. I definitely think that a part two would be fantastic!
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flyinhawaiian33 [2014-03-22 02:04:46 +0000 UTC]
Okkay future help dont take drinks fromanyone but the bartender
2. Stay away from guys you dont know especially if thee from outta town
IT doesnt hurt to make new friends just dont take drinks from them riht away
NEVER LET A MAN TREAT YOU LIKE YOUR NOT WORTH IT BECAUSE GUESS WHAT YOU ARE!!!!
If a man treats you like that well he is a low life and dosnt deserve you
Get a good wack on him like mabey with i dont know a baseball bat or 2 by 4 even perferable a beer bottle knocks thm unconsious
Great story by the way hope you continue
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MischievousKisune [2014-03-20 03:57:29 +0000 UTC]
I love it there should be a part to it's so sweet
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Ophelias-Last-Kiss In reply to MischievousKisune [2014-03-20 12:50:04 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I didn't expect anyone to call this sweet xD I've accepted a commission to write a second part, but don't expect it too soon.
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Cherry3hedgie [2014-03-20 01:24:19 +0000 UTC]
you should make a second part! This had a cute eding to it, so I appreciate that even someone like 2p! Ivan can have feelings for someone ^^
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Ophelias-Last-Kiss In reply to Cherry3hedgie [2014-03-20 12:52:40 +0000 UTC]
He's just human after all. I really think all this "You belong to me alone"-stuff is just a great fear of loosing the ones he likes.
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Cherry3hedgie In reply to Ophelias-Last-Kiss [2014-03-21 02:27:24 +0000 UTC]
aww.... <3 I never thought of it that way
*doesn't even have an affection for him anyway*
that just makes it cuter ^^
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zetsu11 [2014-03-18 05:04:21 +0000 UTC]
This was amazing! Part two please please please!
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izzytehwolf [2014-03-17 10:21:13 +0000 UTC]
I loved it!! Part 2 plz!!
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katcraft455 [2014-03-17 04:17:26 +0000 UTC]
Is there maybe a possibility of a part 2? *wink wink* *nudge nudge*
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EtiHeline In reply to katcraft455 [2014-03-17 05:55:31 +0000 UTC]
Less than discrete, but I agree. There definitely should be one.
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Ophelias-Last-Kiss In reply to EtiHeline [2014-03-17 11:50:58 +0000 UTC]
This was a request and took me long to write, and I have never written a part 2 for anything I wrote so far. So I wouldn't count on it, sorry.
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Amber-Emerald [2014-03-17 03:55:51 +0000 UTC]
Omg! This is awesome! >W< Please make a part 2!!! Please, I'll even pay you in points.
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Ophelias-Last-Kiss In reply to Amber-Emerald [2014-03-17 11:50:04 +0000 UTC]
You can leave me an offer for a commission in one of my journals, but I have to warn you: I'm more than busy with university-stuff right now, so even if I can make up a part 2 it would take some time. A lot of it, probably.
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Amber-Emerald In reply to Ophelias-Last-Kiss [2014-03-17 15:18:37 +0000 UTC]
Okay. Don't worry about getting it done right away. I understand with all the university stuff and what not. ^-^
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THEFOXSAYSHI [2014-03-17 03:04:41 +0000 UTC]
I probably would have stared creepy at everyone with a blank expression, then sad random words so they would think I am inane, and just a.let me go or b.kill me right then and there...Β
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Ophelias-Last-Kiss In reply to THEFOXSAYSHI [2014-03-17 11:47:54 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that's a way to get out of this mess, too. I would probably have been the one that got punched in the stomach for spitting on one of the kidnappers. ^^
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THEFOXSAYSHI In reply to Ophelias-Last-Kiss [2014-03-18 03:14:13 +0000 UTC]
ha, my friend read this and she yelled (in the middle of class) "AW HELL NAW!!!!!"
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MapleVodkaandPandas [2014-03-17 02:39:20 +0000 UTC]
I really like this, and would love a part two
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MapleVodkaandPandas In reply to MapleVodkaandPandas [2014-03-17 03:02:44 +0000 UTC]
This is also one of the very few if not the only Russia fix I've read where his last name is actually spelled right! Thank you!
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Gem-paw [2014-03-17 01:08:44 +0000 UTC]
will there be a part two?
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Cherishedgirl99 [2014-03-17 01:03:20 +0000 UTC]
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
ds:.....really?
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LinkinPark9449 [2014-03-17 01:01:01 +0000 UTC]
This was very good!!
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