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Published: 2012-06-16 13:54:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2297; Favourites: 95; Downloads: 118
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The another request forI hope you like it ^^
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Okay, well theres some problems with this.
1. The proportions seem to be off, I mean if Bon-bon gets up from that swing she'll be bigger than Lyra.
2. The Hips on Lyra, their slightly off and it makes her look like she's been cut in half. Also their hips are for bipedal rather then quad pedal in this piece.
3. Originality is very poor for this, Lyra dipping bon-bon, seen it already. Now Bon-bon dipping Lyra there's an idea.
4. Lyra's eyes, their expression is very strange (Rape face). Also again with the disproportions in the face, Lyra's muzzle is small than Bon-bon's.
5. Tails, now I know tails give a lot of artist grief but well they are just messed up in this picture. Also again with the hips not matching with the tail on Lyra.
Side note. It looks like Bon-bon is falling rather than Lyra dipping her.
Don't take it personally, there's potential here. You can become better, so don't despair and try again.
FF A.K.A JT
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Looks like Lyra really swept Bon Bon off her feet this time!
Why is Bon Bon her normal white colour on one side, and kinda yellowish off white on the other side? Was this intentional?
In conclusion, here's a couple of UB40 songs to go with this picture:
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For the color I use references.
The songs of UB40 are cool.
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