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Published: 2005-03-08 04:38:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Suddenly I look to my side.
There you are, staring at me
with your brown yet lonely eyes.
The emotion behind your gaze
Scares me, excites me, saddens me,
hates, all at the same time.

In that stare a story is told,
encased inside a million tears
who look for a part of their existence.
You ask why?

Because I could be the best writer,
Alive or death, and still you wouldn't love me.
Because I could be the msot intelligent
in the universe, even more you wouldn't appreciate me.
because I could be the most handsome
in the world, and deeper still you wouldn't accept me.

There are tears on your eyes
And I cannot stop mine.
A sudden rush of madness overcomes me
then the mirror breaks under my fist
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Comments: 2

GothikMerlinna [2005-03-24 02:21:08 +0000 UTC]

no hay palabras!! demasiado bueno para decirte algo! ojala yo pudiera escribir asi! como ice un gran autor por ahi analizar la poesia es igual que decir que bello es el cuerpo humano despues de practicarle una autopsia!! Y este poema es mucho de ti creo asiq ue nada dire solo que me encanto!

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outside-the-verse In reply to GothikMerlinna [2005-03-24 20:16:39 +0000 UTC]

Well...
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IF the poem is titled "about me".... I think that gives you a good insight on what it is... oh I dont know.. ABOUT!

HEHEHE I'm just kidding. Thank you for your comment. And the fav.

See you around.

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