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i forgot where'd i put the files and here we are, one of my watcher remind me of this old file , and probably would gonna finish this pieces and the morrigan.
was quite busy with my own game projects
edit : working on it for 10 minutes and make some major changes , pose updates
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First off, I think its a really good piece if you look at the whole thing.
However, If you go into the details, her shoulder blades, her hips and her face, it doesn't fit her body. Her hips are a little too small, and her shoulder blade seems awkard. I like the way you color her body, with different shadings. But you might want to work on the details with reference to a real human.
You might also wanna include a background, that would leave a greater impact on me, because if i were to see this picture once, and someone about it later, i wouldn't remember a single thing.
It looks really good at a glance, its a really good try!
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WIP means Work In Progress. That's why there's no background.Ā
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I know what that means... But I'm just giving advice to add a background.
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Overall a great start, and I have some hopefully helpful thoughts to contribute:
As mentioned in the other critique, the pose looks very compact and awkward- i think the main cause for that is the canvas-right arm and hand, it's coming too far forward onto her abdominal/hip area. Moving the hand/forearm to the canvas right a little might improve things!
My other big thing that I noticed, is that I feel her face is too wide-set. Like, the features are spread out too far. I'm not entirely sure how much to move them all in by, but it might be worth examining.
Other than that I look forward to seeing the continuation of this piece or one like it in the future.
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Honestly, I think out of all your Tifa pieces, this one is the poorest. Your others are great, but the pose in this one is just skewed and you didn't create the foreshortening effect very well (of her top half being closer to the viewer than her bottom half).
Other than that, it's a great piece, but it's very awkward to look at, and Tifa looks like she's feeling kinda awkward too (including her shoulders, which look way too "hunched up" and in her face for that kind of pose).
Tifa honestly looks like she's cramped and sort of in pain. It's just a very awkward pose. I suggest that when doing poses like this that you don't quite have down yet, take a photo of yourself doing this pose (or use another model like a friend if that's easier) and then you can see what it actually looks like from that above view so you have something to work off of.
Or you can search online for these kinds of above poses. There are /hundreds/ of references out there, I'm sure you could find at least -one- that would help.
This drawing is great, but it's just the awkwardness of looking at this pose that's bringing it down in quality. Get some references, or make some your own if you have to, and practice practice practice. Above views can be challenging, but once you get them down, your drawings will look so much more dynamic and pleasing to the eye e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
Other than that, great job. Keep up the awesome work!
- Uzuki Cheverie
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What do you use to draw with? Like on the computer
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love the facial expression, and the body language, keep it up
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Truly magnificent, the colour and drawing technique certainly make her pop out, love how her pose brings out a more feminine strong sexually appealing nature to her while also displaying her strength. Absolutely wonderful work the shading and colour coordination. Great job.
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You changed the color of the eye~ 
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You really like Tifa!Ā It seems you're constantly drawing her?
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Own, great painting!
Can I use it as a reference? *----------------------*
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her arms are perfectly fine, pose is stable. enjoyable to the eye. thumbs up chap
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Agreed, her left arm (our right) seems to be laying on her...stomach? It is kind of awkward..
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Yes, it seems so. If her left hand would be at her waist, I think it'd look natural.
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+1 to this comment.
It's a great painting, though--that one hand is the only thing that looks out of place. (:
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thanks for you guys feedback ! would fix / change things up later
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Curious, do you ever do speed painting videos or anything??
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Looks awesome cant wait to see another picture of Tifa from you.Ā
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First of all: I like it! But I also have some critique which I hope helps you.
I think the pose is a little awkward. Her left hand should be more on her hip bone than on her belly. Also her thigh becomes as thin as her arms, maybe even a little thinner which is weird even for anime/game anatomy. Oh, and if you look at some naked women or in short skirts you'll see that the inner thigh is not flat but also rounds a little, even on skinny people.
I can't really tell if the hair is supposed to be in front of her right arm or behind it. If it is in front it falls kind of unnatural but if it's in the back & doesn't cover up the arm then the arm is really thin compared to the left one.
I hope this helps!
To the face: It's absolutely loverly, I like it a lot. The flow of the upper lid is beautifully done and her lips look feminine but not overly pink-ish or too big like some sort of a rubber boat. 
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Why not put this in an actual critique? Lol it seems quite helpful!
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I tried but my computer won't let me enter anything in the critique Text Box. No idea why. :/
I'm glad it's helpful though!
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Aww...
Still is helpful. Hopefully the artist will see it.
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