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Published: 2010-04-14 14:08:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 20312; Favourites: 1347; Downloads: 0
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since i can't seem to write much.i decided to make another typography piece.
i think this one is weird maybe. i was just having fun (:
it says:
this is the sound of our bones settling against each other
so that your hand fits into mine
our hearts are shifting and collecting in the spaces between us
so that each beat bring us closer to where we're supposed to be:
together.
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Hello!
As part of a Found Poetry: Titles as Art project brought to us by =SilverInkblot and found in our new group, #TheTitlePage , I have used the title of this lovely deviation in a poem here:
Treading the Horizon
Thank you so much!
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This deviation has been featured here . Itβs just a little showcase in my journal so itβs not much, but I thought you did an awesome job. ^^
Your words have such a smooth rhythm to them and they're very fresh. Sometimes I read this and think to myself 'I want to have a moment like that!' haha 
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Oh my gosh.
this is like the smartest way of reading XD.
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ah. i love this comment. thank you <3
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very beautiful... that's really meaningful and very powerful... nice job well done
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thank you!!
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thank you.
and he really wasn't. i have the feeling i was but it doesn't matter anymore.
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it happens. so far, i've realized that's the only way we have to learn, anyway...at least you can say you still have a nice piece of typography
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You've pretty much just made me fall in love with typography... 
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EEE. this makes me feel accomplished.
thanks right back at you <3
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captures the tense affection of young hearts
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I always love your typography; keep up the beautiful work with the words that make me smile C:
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This piece is visually and emotionally deep...Placing the words as you did...to fit together as if on purpose...
Very well done.
You do write "much" and well! The visualization just served to make the penetration somehow deeper, more intimate!
Well done!
Blessings
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I love this poem, especially the typography part. Very inspiring, I must try it!
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Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) and has been selected as our βPick of the Dayβ. It is featured in a news article [link] and on our main page.
Keep writing and keep creating.
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Apart from having a wonderful visual presence this poem
contains the essence of togetherness. With words that portray the yearning one feels around that special someone.
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I want to comment but I seriously can't find the words to describe how I feel about this piece.
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awh. well you definitely said enough.
thank you so much.
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haha, thank youuu. (: i do too.
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The design is quite simple, but the message is crystal clear this way; personally, I like a more detailed and scrambled design, so that I look at it as a challenge when trying to understand the message, and by the time I get to the end of it, it feels so much better when you think of the message and interpret it... Anyways,
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haha, so you like the challenge? (: that's cute.
sometimes, i can't think of enough to say to make the bigger ones.
plus it takes a lotttt longer buuut i think i like the more complex more also. (:
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I always enjoy something that challenges me intellectually meaning, this is just how I am
Even if there isn't enough to say, you can spend some time trying to think of various ways of expressing yourself, until you find the one you consider it fits the best
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thank you! <3
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i'm so glad.
thank you so much. (:
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thank you so much. <3
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you're quite welcome, Paperheart I love your work.
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I don't think it's weird at all.
I like it a lot! 
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thank you!
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thanks so much. <3
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i ADORE your typography pieces. may i ask, is it ok if i use this as a formspring background??
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sure sure. i don't mind as long as you don't intend to pretend like you made it. (:
thank you.
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i neverever do xD
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thanks so much.
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Eh, the background's kind of dull and unimpressive up close.
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nothing ever is so beautiful up close.
(ps. this piece is hardly about the background. it's really not supposed to be so impressive as to take away from the typography)
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It could have just been on a white background or had some kind of colorful glyph under it. Don't get me wrong, the typography is good, I'm just distracted by the background; and that might just be my preference.
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thank you!
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