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PassionateMasochist — Reaching Out.
Published: 2012-09-07 06:16:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 848; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 6
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Description I'm reaching out with my hands
Expecting you my love to embrace me,
But when I close my hand and see that you
Have not yet grasped on,
It hurts.

With every time I open my hand
To this painful empty feeling,
It tears this hole in my heart open
Letting it fill in with sadness,
And letting it become deeper.

So I let my nails grow out
Not expecting for anyone to latch on,
Continuing to grasp this desolate air
I find my self falling down in despair,
But then I see you reaching out
To grab my lonely hand out from the dark,
But alas I cut you,
I lost the sense of caring,
My nails and my heart,
Have become too sharp for this hand to hold on.
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Comments: 25

candygirl101010 [2012-11-22 03:18:48 +0000 UTC]

i love ur poetry its all sad nd romantic *holdhand* u can hold my had if u wish i like the pain if u hurt me ile thx u <3 lolz soz i weerd

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prettyflour [2012-10-27 22:36:57 +0000 UTC]

This has been featured in my journal!

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PassionateMasochist In reply to prettyflour [2012-10-27 22:41:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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coyotemissy [2012-10-24 04:54:25 +0000 UTC]

It is intense and nicely written.

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CrimsonSmolder [2012-09-15 13:36:52 +0000 UTC]

INTENSE I LOVE IT !

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PassionateMasochist In reply to CrimsonSmolder [2012-09-15 20:52:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3 <3 <3 <3

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ScarlyRose [2012-09-15 02:04:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow really good! I feel I can relate to this. Great

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PassionateMasochist In reply to ScarlyRose [2012-09-15 03:08:04 +0000 UTC]

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lilandy676 [2012-09-15 01:34:28 +0000 UTC]

awesome poem!

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PassionateMasochist In reply to lilandy676 [2012-09-15 01:38:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks :3 <3

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lilandy676 In reply to PassionateMasochist [2012-09-15 01:43:54 +0000 UTC]

yw ur rly good <3

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RuothildeMoonblood [2012-09-09 07:09:30 +0000 UTC]

this bringsback unwanted thoughts

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PassionateMasochist In reply to RuothildeMoonblood [2012-09-09 07:12:01 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry

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Shasta-Rose [2012-09-09 04:01:10 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely written and I love the extended metaphor and imagery evoked.

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PassionateMasochist In reply to Shasta-Rose [2012-09-09 04:04:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, but whats evoked mean? XD

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superm81 In reply to PassionateMasochist [2012-09-12 12:18:09 +0000 UTC]

evoked means what it brings out. They mean the imagery your poem brings someone to feel and see. sorry idk if they already answered; just thought id help lol

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PassionateMasochist In reply to superm81 [2012-09-12 15:39:05 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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LaCabezaDelCastor [2012-09-07 23:06:22 +0000 UTC]

Great work! It really grabs my attention! Kudos!

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PassionateMasochist In reply to LaCabezaDelCastor [2012-09-08 00:15:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again. XD

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kyokomogami333 [2012-09-07 23:04:38 +0000 UTC]

wow. this is so nice

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PassionateMasochist In reply to kyokomogami333 [2012-09-08 00:15:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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kyokomogami333 In reply to PassionateMasochist [2012-09-08 00:21:08 +0000 UTC]

super welcome!

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gothchick913 [2012-09-07 20:29:24 +0000 UTC]

this is awesome but are you ok?

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PassionateMasochist In reply to gothchick913 [2012-09-07 20:30:07 +0000 UTC]

Yeah XD

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gothchick913 In reply to PassionateMasochist [2012-09-07 20:32:00 +0000 UTC]

ok, just wanted to make sure

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