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Jacob-Digital-Art [2013-02-27 23:46:41 +0000 UTC]

This is a great picture! I love modeling alleyways. There's so much fun to be had! It looks almost perfect. I say almost because straight away the paint bucket and paint on the floor looks wrong to me. Maybe if the paint wasn't such a bright colour and the paint on the ground looked more like it was seeping into the cracks rather than just sitting on top ... But other than that. Love it!

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Loreathan [2013-01-29 20:54:48 +0000 UTC]

Hey I did a similar project many years ago, it is on my old account, here it is [link]

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peka444 [2013-01-08 16:28:31 +0000 UTC]

Your critique is very constructive. Thank you Trent!

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chopperking [2013-01-08 15:15:49 +0000 UTC]

IMHO/Critique:
Con:
Assuming your goal is to make it even more realistic I would suggest a depth of field based modification:
1) The depth of field change between the foreground tipped over can, and the upright mid-ground can, and its adjoining paper garbage is too strong. I'd suggest less blur on the foreground can, and slightly more on the mid-ground objects mentioned above.

Pro:
I like the lighting, mist/haze into the background, and the puddle's ripples and reflections in particular.
Nice work.
I hope you are not offended by my critique, I wouldn't take the time to write it if I didn't like your work.

best wishes,
Trent

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