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darkfoxprime [2014-04-24 19:52:33 +0000 UTC]
I like it. Now I need to go read the main story.
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Redangermeiser1994 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2014-04-22 01:10:55 +0000 UTC]
I still find it so funny...especially since Zach was just pretending the whole time.
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Redangermeiser1994 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2014-04-22 22:55:25 +0000 UTC]
Eh!? Really?
Hmm...well...what if another of his friends is in danger? And this time it's a bit more dire? Like the mother finding one instead of the father?
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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to Redangermeiser1994 [2014-04-22 22:57:32 +0000 UTC]
Uhm... that really would be an emergency. But I don't think they're ready for that just yet.
Hm... what if another cat happened? Like a stray cat or something? Or a rat?
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Redangermeiser1994 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2014-04-22 23:01:58 +0000 UTC]
Hmm...another cat would be more noticeable, so I think they would avoid it easily, but a rat might be another story, so why not the rat?
Of course...who would get attacked? Chess? Nick? Someone else?
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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to Redangermeiser1994 [2014-04-22 23:08:13 +0000 UTC]
Hm... good question... Maybe this would be a good time to bring in a character who's been around longer than Nick but hasn't ever shown up. Also, her little sister. Maybe a preschool field trip ran into rats?
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Redangermeiser1994 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2014-04-22 23:16:16 +0000 UTC]
Someone new, a little sister, and a field trip ransacked by rats all sound interesting, but where would Zach fit in? Like was he in his rattan form and traveling with them when it happened? Or did he just come across them by pure stroke of luck? Maybe someone actually ran to get him to help?
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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to Redangermeiser1994 [2014-04-22 23:20:48 +0000 UTC]
Well, he'll be a Rattan at the time... maybe he was chaperoning or tagging along? Or just nearby?
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Redangermeiser1994 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2014-04-22 23:25:46 +0000 UTC]
Some people would be afraid of him right? So maybe just tagging along or happened to be close by when everything goes down?
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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to Redangermeiser1994 [2014-04-22 23:28:01 +0000 UTC]
Hardly anyone knows he's secretly a human. I have it figured out now. Thanks for brainstorming with me!
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FrancisJeremyXavyer [2013-08-18 00:39:12 +0000 UTC]
This is a cute story! Interaction! Will there be more?
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