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Phoenix-FireMage — Little Troublemakers
Published: 2013-08-18 00:22:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 4405; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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Description Nick and his gang were always getting into trouble. That was an accepted part of life, as natural as gravity or hiding from the humans. On the night of this story, they had decided to do something particularly daring and stupid. They had decided to get a closer look at the human boy, Zach. A much closer look. After they were certain he had fallen asleep, the five young Rattan snuck into his room and clambered up the sheets onto his bed.
“Are you sure this is quite safe?” asked Rico, the youngest and most timid member of the gang.

“Course it’s safe,” said Nick. “He’s a deep sleeper; he won’t wake up.”

Slowly, they walked up his chest, their feet sinking into the soft blanket. Finally, they reached his face. “Wow,” breathed Louis, Nick’s second in command. “He sure looks different up close.”

Just then, Zach rolled onto his side, sending the small intruders tumbling down next to him. They all let out varied exclamations of surprise and annoyance as they landed in a pile on the bed. The human’s eyelids flickered, and despite their uncomfortable positions, all five Rattan froze, going so far as to even hold their breath. Luckily, Zach merely turned his face into the pillow and lay still once more.

Growing brave once more, the Rattan boys climbed up the nearly vertical slope to his shoulder, whispering to each other along the way. However, when they were only partway up, the ground beneath them moved once more as Zach turned over to his other side, and they all tumbled down again. This time, his hand flopped over as well, and, as chance would have it, landed atop of Nick. The fingers curled around him and he was brought closer, as though the sleeping human thought he was a teddy bear.

“Help me!” Nick called, quite terrified. Timidly, his gang approached the enormous hand.

“What do we do?” one of them asked.

“Get him to let go somehow!”

They tried to pry his fingers open, but instead he curled them in even more firmly.

“Let’s try tickling him,” Rico suggested. “That always works on m-… er, on my little sister.”

“Tickle him?” Ruff repeated.

“It could work,” Nick said. “Try it!”

Rico crept up to Zach’s face, turned around, and began to tickle him under the nose with the tuft of fur at the end of his tail. The human wrinkled his nose and made a number of faces, and, finally, let go of Nick to brush away the annoyance, who scrambled to get out of the way before he too was caught.

The five Rattan climbed very quickly down the sheets to the floor, and hurried out the door into the hallway, where they clambered back through the opening in the wall.

“Let’s not ever do that again,” Louis said. “That was a little bit too much excitement.”

The others had to agree.
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Comments: 32

darkfoxprime [2014-04-24 19:52:33 +0000 UTC]

I like it.   Now I need to go read the main story.

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to darkfoxprime [2014-04-24 20:51:40 +0000 UTC]

Okay.

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AbusedPrivilege [2014-04-22 13:42:37 +0000 UTC]

Wasn't aware of this story 'til now, but it was a nice short little read!

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to AbusedPrivilege [2014-04-22 20:53:51 +0000 UTC]

Glad you liked it!

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Redangermeiser1994 [2014-04-22 00:36:45 +0000 UTC]

Gave it a real name eh?

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to Redangermeiser1994 [2014-04-22 00:46:46 +0000 UTC]

Yep!

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Redangermeiser1994 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2014-04-22 01:10:55 +0000 UTC]

I still find it so funny...especially since Zach was just pretending the whole time.

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to Redangermeiser1994 [2014-04-22 01:17:42 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, me too.

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Redangermeiser1994 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2014-04-22 01:22:59 +0000 UTC]

You going to continue the story?

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to Redangermeiser1994 [2014-04-22 01:50:13 +0000 UTC]

I should...

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Redangermeiser1994 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2014-04-22 01:51:53 +0000 UTC]

Do you need help to get the idea's flowing?

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to Redangermeiser1994 [2014-04-22 01:53:05 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps...

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Redangermeiser1994 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2014-04-22 01:55:51 +0000 UTC]

Well, what do you have so far? Since we left off that is?

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to Redangermeiser1994 [2014-04-22 22:49:04 +0000 UTC]

Um... absolutely nothing...

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Redangermeiser1994 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2014-04-22 22:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Eh!? Really?

Hmm...well...what if another of his friends is in danger? And this time it's a bit more dire? Like the mother finding one instead of the father?

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to Redangermeiser1994 [2014-04-22 22:57:32 +0000 UTC]

Uhm... that really would be an emergency. But I don't think they're ready for that just yet.

Hm... what if another cat happened? Like a stray cat or something? Or a rat?

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Redangermeiser1994 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2014-04-22 23:01:58 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...another cat would be more noticeable, so I think they would avoid it easily, but a rat might be another story, so why not the rat?

Of course...who would get attacked? Chess? Nick? Someone else?

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to Redangermeiser1994 [2014-04-22 23:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Hm... good question... Maybe this would be a good time to bring in a character who's been around longer than Nick but hasn't ever shown up. Also, her little sister. Maybe a preschool field trip ran into rats?

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Redangermeiser1994 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2014-04-22 23:16:16 +0000 UTC]

Someone new, a little sister, and a field trip ransacked by rats all sound interesting, but where would Zach fit in? Like was he in his rattan form and traveling with them when it happened? Or did he just come across them by pure stroke of luck? Maybe someone actually ran to get him to help?

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to Redangermeiser1994 [2014-04-22 23:20:48 +0000 UTC]

Well, he'll be a Rattan at the time... maybe he was chaperoning or tagging along? Or just nearby?

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Redangermeiser1994 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2014-04-22 23:25:46 +0000 UTC]

Some people would be afraid of him right? So maybe just tagging along or happened to be close by when everything goes down?

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to Redangermeiser1994 [2014-04-22 23:28:01 +0000 UTC]

Hardly anyone knows he's secretly a human. I have it figured out now. Thanks for brainstorming with me!

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Redangermeiser1994 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2014-04-22 23:30:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome~
Have fun making your next story!

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to Redangermeiser1994 [2014-04-22 23:31:41 +0000 UTC]

All right, I will!

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waterstar70 [2013-08-25 06:21:57 +0000 UTC]

Awesome work! Keep it up!

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to waterstar70 [2013-08-25 14:33:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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waterstar70 In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2013-08-26 00:41:20 +0000 UTC]

Yup!!

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to waterstar70 [2013-08-26 00:44:19 +0000 UTC]


Really, I'm glad you liked it.

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FrancisJeremyXavyer [2013-08-18 00:39:12 +0000 UTC]

This is a cute story! Interaction! Will there be more?

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to FrancisJeremyXavyer [2013-08-18 01:08:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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FrancisJeremyXavyer In reply to Phoenix-FireMage [2013-08-18 03:35:06 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Phoenix-FireMage In reply to FrancisJeremyXavyer [2013-08-18 00:54:15 +0000 UTC]

More to this particular story? I doubt it. More interaction? For sure.

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