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Phoenix-Lord — Egypt Burning VIII

Published: 2007-02-21 12:37:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 2494; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 17
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Description Okay so I started this whole series back in September!
Yay!!! I finished it!!

If you are new to this story here is a link to the first one:
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Egypt Buring VIII



Anubis climbed the stairs to the Chamber of Judgment. He knew that Ammut would be there. Around his neck the Ka Crystal of Shai’nefer still dangled. Osiris had pleaded with him to help Isis, to save her from Ammut. However he had also warned that Ammut was not to be harmed. He had then vanished.

The Jackal God was unsure if he would be able to restrain himself when he faced his traitorous Servant. His blood was boiling with rage at the thought of what she had done, and his teeth thirsted for revenge for Shai’nefer’s death.

Stepping into the grand Chamber Anubis scanned the ornate room with his glowing green eyes. Ammut was sitting on the floor with the Scales before her. Scattered around her were the nearly countless Ka Crystals that Rehema and the others had collected for her.

Upon the Scale was a bright silver Ka Crystal being weighed against a glowing white feather. Anubis’s blood froze as he saw how unevenly tipped the Scale was. He gasped as he realized that the Crystal belonged to Isis herself.

Ammut looked up sharply. Tears were streaming from her golden reptilian eyes. She leapt to her feet and ran to Anubis. She threw herself into his powerful arms and wept bitterly against the soft fur of his chest.

“Oh, Father...what have I done?” Ammut whimpered in misery. “Mother Isis...she has not passed the Test! How can this be, how can the most pure and innocent among us fail?”

Anubis instinctively embraced the creature he had given life to from the desert sands. She shook with her tears as he smoothed out her lion mane with his padded hand. He realized that Osiris had been right, something more was happening here. Ammut was not the heartless creature he feared her to be.

“Hush, Child.”

“I can not do it, I can eat her Soul.” Ammut wailed. “She is more deserving of peace than any of the others! What sin could she possibly be punished for?”

“It is not sin that weighs upon Mother Isis’s heart, my Child.” Anubis said gently. “It is sorrow that binds her to this world.”

“Sorrow?”

“Yes. You have only recently tasted Love, in the soul of your Mortal. It is not something you understand, and that is my fault.”

“I do not understand.”

“I did not create you to Love, and I did not think you would ever find it. But I was naive. It found you and you’ve been completely transformed by it.”

“I have changed from a beast into a Monster!” Ammut cried.

“No...you are a True Child of Egypt now. Mother Egypt wanted this to happen, Osiris has told me so and I believe him now.”

“Mother Egypt wishes to destroy Mother Isis?!” Ammut gasped in terror.

“She wishes only to reunite her two favored Children.”

“How? How can Isis be returned to Osiris after what I have done?”

“Break the Crystal.”

“But...I do not know what will happen if I do!”

“I do not know for sure either, but I feel in my own Soul that it is the only way to free her.”

Ammut nodded, tears still slipping down her scaled face. She stepped over to the scale and lifted up the delicate necklace. She stared at the glittering Crystal for a moment and then dashed it upon the marble floor.

Anubis held his breath as he watched. The silver within the Crystal rose up from the floor in an increasingly violent whirlwind of mist. Ammut backed away, seeking shelter in Anubis’s arms once more.

From the mist a blue and yellow flame sprang to life. The flame spread into the wings of a great bird. The rest of the pale silver mist solidified and the sprit of Isis stood before them. She was so beautiful to behold that tears slipped from Anubis’s eyes.

“Ammut Soul Eater,” Isis said softly “Anubis Lord of the Dead...the last Children of Egypt.”

Ammut fell to her knees, weeping bitterly once more.

“Forgive me, Mother Isis!”

Isis stepped closer and knelt down in front of the miserable creature. She brushed her ghostly winged hand under Ammut’s toothy jaw. Ammut gazed up at her, trembling with fright.

“Do not be afraid, Child.” Isis smiled. “All of this has happened for a reason.”

“Are we truly being punished for failing the Mortals?” Anubis asked respectfully.

“We have failed more than the Mortals...we have failed ourselves and one another.”

“I don’t understand.” Anubis admitted.

“As the centuries have rolled by the Children of Egypt have strayed so far from their Path that we have completely lost our way. We have let Power and Greed over come Love and Mercy. Even you, Lord of the Dead, were being forced to hide your pure Love for Shai’nefer. Mother Egypt wishes to call us Home so that we might have peace once more.”

“How can you know this?”

“She had told me.”

“What does she wish of us now?” Anubis asked humbly.

“Break the Crystals, free her Children to the world Inbetween where they can hear her call.” Isis instructed.

With those words Osiris appeared. Isis’s entire image brightened as she ran to him. She enveloped him in her translucent wings and he took her into his arms. For a moment they seemed to become one and then with a swirl of wind they vanished.

Anubis left Ammut on her knees and stepped up to pile of Souls that lay trapped in their crystalline prisons. He held his hands above them and closed his eyes. With the power of his will he sent a shock wave down upon them that turned the Crystals to shards.

From the sparkling dust the multi coloured sprits rose as one, swirling, mixing, and separating again. They did not take form as Isis had. They heard the call of Mother Egypt and they went to her. When it was over Anubis and Ammut were alone.

“What is to become of us, my Lord?” Ammut asked.

“Your Fate at this moment must be yours to choose, for Isis did not instruct me to kill you. I also feel that your heart will always belong to the Mortals not the Gods.”

“I...I can not continue my work.”

“Perhaps you can if you truly understand it.” Anubis said with a sad smile. “Osiris told me something that I had never thought of. He told me that the Souls you eat are not destroyed.”

“What?”

“All those who fail the Test fail because they are not *ready* for the Afterlife, not necessarily because they are undeserving of it. Your Mortal Failed not because he was so burdened with sin, but because he had not finished what he had started. You are not the Ammut the Soul Eater...you are Ammut the Gateway to Rebirth. You are the true caretaker of the Dead.”

“What of you? Will you stay to help me?”

“No...you no longer need me. I have my own path to follow.”

Anubis walked up to his golden throne and picked up a silver dagger that he kept there. He turned and smiled at Ammut before sinking the knife into his exposed stomach. Ammut gasped as he cut the Scarab that allowed him to ender the Shadowlands from his belly.

Anubis tossed the gory Amulet to Ammut, she would need it now. Falling to his knees Anubis reached up to his throat and ripped the Ka Crystal he wore free of its chain. With his last breath he crushed the bright green Crystal in his powerful grip.

From the shards of the Crystal Shai’nefer rose once again. Having passed into the Spirit World Anubis stood once again, a figure of dark shimmering purple. Shai’nefer cried out in joy and wrapped her slender arms around his neck. Anubis smiled and embraced her tightly. From the shadows Rehema and Kafele materialized and came to sit at their Master’s feet.

Reunited once more they followed the others Home.

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Comments: 46

dathwampeer [2009-01-23 07:14:13 +0000 UTC]

i love the colours

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Luthlaya [2008-07-19 15:28:18 +0000 UTC]

Aaahww!

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MusicSci-FiGal [2007-07-09 23:04:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Nice picture.

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Wandering-Lemming [2007-03-15 18:29:30 +0000 UTC]

With a surfboard, and without the wings...this would be a really cool female silver surfer....


As it stands...this is absolutely beautiful. I've not read the prose underneath it yet, but I will. Very nice work.

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to Wandering-Lemming [2007-03-18 00:28:28 +0000 UTC]

THanks! Silver surfer chick would rule! Heehee.

Don't worry about read it, it's a whole long story with like eight chapters.

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Wandering-Lemming In reply to Phoenix-Lord [2007-03-19 14:34:25 +0000 UTC]

If I don't read it, it makes me a hypacrite. I've been talking with and we aggree that literary works aren't given enough attention...so it'll get read...but with 61 items in my inbox...I can't say how soon it'll be! *grin*

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to Wandering-Lemming [2007-03-19 16:24:18 +0000 UTC]

Heehee. You are funny. It hard to get noticed with literary works because let's face it, there is sooo much of it and it takes so much time to find anything that you like.

If you do decide to read it would be best if you read it at my other account because all of the chapters are linked together. You can find a break down of it in the front page journal on that page

But don't worry about being a hypocrite. I don't mind if people just look at the pretty pictures!

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Wandering-Lemming In reply to Phoenix-Lord [2007-03-21 15:58:15 +0000 UTC]

ooooooo, look at da pretty pictures!

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to Wandering-Lemming [2007-03-22 12:18:14 +0000 UTC]

Heehee. That's all I ask!

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Silverbaneblood [2007-02-28 07:27:47 +0000 UTC]

Awesome. I shall have to read the whole series---probably after school is over for the semester though! Sorry I can't give this a more in depth comment. I really should get some sleep.

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to Silverbaneblood [2007-02-28 19:00:50 +0000 UTC]

I don't need an in depth comment, it's nice just to know you like it.

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Moonpriestess987 [2007-02-27 01:00:33 +0000 UTC]

Loved the story, It was great! also love the last picture here, beautiful!

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to Moonpriestess987 [2007-02-28 19:01:26 +0000 UTC]

THank you! I enjoyed writing/drawing this very much.

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Skyedancer [2007-02-22 06:51:52 +0000 UTC]

beautiful job on both the pic and story. the end of the story almost brought tears to my eyes and it also shows that Anubus isn't evil but trying to be fair in his dealings with all the souls that pass through his hands.

the pic stands on it's own and is simply beautiful. a definate fav

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to Skyedancer [2007-02-22 22:18:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you soooo much. I'm very pleased that you liked my version of Anubis, I think people fear death because they simply don't understand it.

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Skyedancer In reply to Phoenix-Lord [2007-02-22 23:53:25 +0000 UTC]

hehehehe death isn't to be feared it's the gateway to the next life. you should read my "Thoughts About Death" poem it'll give you an idea of how I think and what I think death really is ^_^ oh and I'm watching you now I hope you don't mind I'm really impressed with your artwork ^_^

if you're taking requests would you mind taking Thoughts and give it an Egyptian theme pic??

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to Skyedancer [2007-02-25 17:01:52 +0000 UTC]

I am on the bandwagon of rebirth myself. And of course I don't mind ya watching me!

I'm kind of up to me eyeballs in stuff right now as far as requests go, but send me a link to Thoughts (I couldn't find it...perhaps I'm blind) in case I get struck to do something.

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Skyedancer In reply to Phoenix-Lord [2007-02-25 17:31:33 +0000 UTC]

here is the link ^_^

[link]

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Foxfairy24 [2007-02-22 02:04:58 +0000 UTC]

Ah, finally, the ending! I like how it was so perfect, the closure... You managed to explain everything without smashing it into a gigantic block of explanation.

Ah, your other account is where you've been at lately? I was wondering why I wasn't seeing too much from you... Seemed to have dropped off the face of the earth

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to Foxfairy24 [2007-02-22 22:17:21 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...I've been a bad girl and I've been putting more energy into my writting acount (hangs head in shame).

I'm glad that you liked the ending! I do hate huge chunks of 'exspliantion' text...

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Kecharana [2007-02-21 21:40:35 +0000 UTC]

aww..and who is that critter there on the pic?

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to Kecharana [2007-02-22 22:16:07 +0000 UTC]

That is lady Isis!

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Kecharana In reply to Phoenix-Lord [2007-02-24 16:06:50 +0000 UTC]

well i didnt know.sheesh ._.

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Phoenix-Cry In reply to Kecharana [2007-02-25 01:13:45 +0000 UTC]

I wasn't yell'en at ya...I was just excited. Calm down.

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Kecharana In reply to Phoenix-Cry [2007-02-25 02:11:12 +0000 UTC]

you wwere giggling ._.

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Phoenix-Cry In reply to Kecharana [2007-02-25 02:17:58 +0000 UTC]

Yup!

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Kecharana In reply to Phoenix-Cry [2007-02-25 02:21:54 +0000 UTC]

-_-

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x-marks-the-spot [2007-02-21 19:06:35 +0000 UTC]

Innnnteresting! I was actually just wondering when we'd see more of this again, a great finish, I must say! And a creative story!

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to x-marks-the-spot [2007-02-22 22:14:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'v been avoid it...but I don't know why.

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Ravens-Eye-Studio [2007-02-21 17:49:32 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous and awe-inspiring...this gave me chills. i think it is one of your best works...EVER!

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to Ravens-Eye-Studio [2007-02-21 18:04:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you soooooooo much!!!

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Apophis906 [2007-02-21 17:04:38 +0000 UTC]

lol, you know I have to comment here as well. Just such a cool story you finished.

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to Apophis906 [2007-02-21 18:02:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! I finished! Doing the happy dance !

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Apophis906 In reply to Phoenix-Lord [2007-02-21 19:34:54 +0000 UTC]

yay

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LeonaWindrider [2007-02-21 16:30:00 +0000 UTC]

First, I love the picture -- now that you've got that new scanner the picture is vibrant and the colors you've chosen are almost iridescent.

Second, I was really happy to see Anubis and Shai’nefer reunite, as she seemed so innocent to me that I could never see her being damned, and it's sweet to envision the Lord of the Underworld in love I also wanted to say what a great overall story this has been; such an inventive one that the Eater of Souls would come to understand the sting of love in her heart -- the idea of her evolving from a beast of the sand to a goddess struggling to understand the concept of mercy is such a good one.

This was worth the wait!

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to LeonaWindrider [2007-02-21 18:02:05 +0000 UTC]

Awe! Your kind words make me blush!!

Since the story had so much death and sowrow I really wanted to end it on a 'happier' note. I also really wanted to make Anubis the 'good guy', to the point where he couldn't even blame Ammut for what she had done when he saw her tears. Death is so feared by people because they don't understand it, I wanted the Lord of the Dead to be equally misunderstood!

Thank you sooooo much for the wonderful comments and the continuing support of my writting!!

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TonksLupin [2007-02-21 15:53:33 +0000 UTC]

That is a beutiful picture! Simply stunning! I love how colorful the wings are! And the figure is perfectly preportioned!

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to TonksLupin [2007-02-21 17:58:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! The wings were sooo much fun to do! And I've been working hard on my human stuff!

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TonksLupin In reply to Phoenix-Lord [2007-02-21 23:31:22 +0000 UTC]

Well your human stuff rocks! ^^
Yes wings are alot of fun, I totally agree!

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Luntary [2007-02-21 14:03:14 +0000 UTC]

wooooooooo!!!!!!
reallly incredible!!!!

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to Luntary [2007-02-21 17:58:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ! I'm glad ya like it!

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Luntary In reply to Phoenix-Lord [2007-02-21 20:05:34 +0000 UTC]

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ladyroll [2007-02-21 13:17:21 +0000 UTC]

great!

Great picture!

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to ladyroll [2007-02-21 17:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Maeix2 [2007-02-21 13:02:34 +0000 UTC]

I seem to be commenting only on your other account lately, so just thought I'd stop by and say this is a great pic and anyone who sees it should go read the story

allright back to for me

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Phoenix-Lord In reply to Maeix2 [2007-02-21 17:57:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Don't worry...I've been using the other account more lately. I even let my subscription slip over here. I'm a bad girl.

Thanks for the story pimpage!

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