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4thDoctorJellyBabies [2018-06-27 19:50:35 +0000 UTC]

That Girl look at the mirror resembles to Frisk from Undertale.

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Redtailed22 [2018-06-27 19:09:24 +0000 UTC]

Heya! I'm here from !!!!
So to start off, I am going to go through the pros, then the cons, and then how to improve. For starters, I would like to say I really like how you pulled off the glass effect. I think it is really well done in the way that the person behind the glass is a lower opacity. it's a nice touch. Also about the glass, I really like the reflection/lines on the glass, as it gives it more detail and the piece becomes slightly more "visually interesting". Secondly, your shading is really good and varied. I like how you used a slight gradient in some places for a softer shade, while also using "stark" shading (I don't really know what to say for this) for example on the legs under the shorts. Finally, I think that the character design is good, and that includes the anatomy and the hair, which I think looks really cool. Unlike many other art I've seen (mine included) the anatomy of the characters looks real and believable. Now for the cons, I only have two things. Firstly, I think that the perspective of the piece looks a bit "off". The ground and the puddle don't fit together on the same plane, but I am probably just nitpicking here. Finally, I think that the grass/plants on either side of the scene look out of place. Everything else has a black outline except for the grass. Overall, I think that this piece looks really good, but the grass is the only major outlier here.

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AverySanX [2018-06-27 16:13:45 +0000 UTC]

OwO looks cool!!

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VKei4Life [2018-06-27 15:02:52 +0000 UTC]

This looks pretty cool. 
That little girl is my childhood looking at my adulthood. 

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McGem-The-Bush [2018-06-27 09:55:21 +0000 UTC]

what ive picked together of the story thats been in these couple of drawings seems pretty interesting. mind explaining? since i love hearing others stories : D

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Solidus-Skully [2018-06-26 19:28:30 +0000 UTC]

Rift you Silly Sausage.

Now you've just furthered my interest into uncovering the mysteries behind what these mirror images truly are.

Especially the contrast after seeing Rift's mirror image so jovial prior to this.

Makes me wonder (going by the description) that the longer the mirror images spend away from their physical bodies the less of their original selves they begin to feel. Like losing bits and pieces of your memories.

That vacant stare and Rift's surprise do more than deliver the idea that something is amiss

X3 The more I see of this the more I'm loving these characters and the intriguing concepts behind them.

Fantastic work.

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AurinMantus [2018-06-26 16:36:50 +0000 UTC]

thats getting somewhere~ UwU

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sidgreen01 [2018-06-26 14:17:13 +0000 UTC]

^^ I’m so excited about the comic. Your characters seem so interesting

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