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Published: 2008-11-06 23:08:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 18087; Favourites: 363; Downloads: 77
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Description Her name is Stitches and I love her.
She doesn't believe that - she says it is an improbability.
She doesn't say impossibility and that gives me hope.

No one but me knows why she's called Stitches.

I've run my hands over her soft white skin,
Flushed with the fevers of midnight.
I've touched it.

I've let my fingertips explore the hitches in her skin,
Where her body couldn't quite heal itself.

Old memories of gaping holes and vicious lies.

From her shoulder to her wrist,
From her knee to her ankle,
Any where she can negotiate a knife - she is Stitches.

It makes her cry sometimes.
She says she doesn't like being a rag doll any more.

They're old scars, robbing her flesh of its innocence,
Betraying her old soul - etching it out - a tally on her skin.

IIIII   IIIII   IIIII   IIIII   IIIII   IIIII   IIIII   IIIII   IIIII  
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She draws a thick red line under everything
and tries to start again.

She doesn't like to be touched some nights,
I see her paper skin crawling at my soft kisses
and roll over to feign sleep.

It's not her fault, the pain of the scars won't fade,
The scars that the stitches can't mend.


Her name is Stitches and I love her.
The girl with the Frankensteined heart.
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Comments: 178

PoetryOD In reply to ??? [2008-11-13 03:19:40 +0000 UTC]


Aww thank you! That's awesome!

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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kiwi-damnation In reply to ??? [2008-11-10 06:52:01 +0000 UTC]

WHOA I love it mate

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PoetryOD In reply to kiwi-damnation [2008-11-13 03:13:56 +0000 UTC]


yay!

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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BeehiveStudio [2008-11-09 18:35:19 +0000 UTC]

wow I love the way you write I am almost speechless

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PoetryOD In reply to BeehiveStudio [2008-11-13 03:03:48 +0000 UTC]


blushes, thank you ! You are so sweet

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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WingsOfTears In reply to ??? [2008-11-09 10:58:40 +0000 UTC]

WOW!!!!!

Speachless at this piece ...

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MP-R In reply to ??? [2008-11-08 16:30:43 +0000 UTC]

wow.
deep. you open yourself so well. i am able to relate to your work here. amazing job.
good work, as always.

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a-broken-soul [2008-11-07 23:59:57 +0000 UTC]

This is so powerful. There's so much emotion in it. Kate, you did it again, I'm crying now (which is a good thing in this case). Instant fav.

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PoetryOD In reply to a-broken-soul [2008-11-08 00:02:48 +0000 UTC]

Love you Stitches xx

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a-broken-soul In reply to PoetryOD [2008-11-08 00:06:19 +0000 UTC]



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electra416 In reply to ??? [2008-11-07 23:22:48 +0000 UTC]

first-rate and hits deep

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PoetryOD In reply to electra416 [2008-11-13 02:53:03 +0000 UTC]


yay! Thanks xx

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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danie-star In reply to electra416 [2008-11-08 00:22:03 +0000 UTC]

this was amazing....i wrote similar but it was probaby better than mines ...great work it was really amazing

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WolfSinger13 In reply to ??? [2008-11-07 21:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Deep, tragic, heart-rending... but still beautiful.
I truly love this.

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PoetryOD In reply to WolfSinger13 [2008-11-13 02:53:23 +0000 UTC]


Thank you, you are so sweet I'm glad you liked it.

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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m-i-n-k-k In reply to ??? [2008-11-07 21:55:33 +0000 UTC]

The last line. is. Incredible.

"Frankensteined." Clever use of the term, I love it

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PoetryOD In reply to m-i-n-k-k [2008-11-13 02:53:37 +0000 UTC]


Thank you ! It is a perfect line for the image in my head, I'm so happy with it. x

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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ashley0107 In reply to ??? [2008-11-07 20:13:35 +0000 UTC]

wow its such a beautiful poem. i know someone like this, and it breaks my heart. . .
xxxxx

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PoetryOD In reply to ashley0107 [2008-11-13 02:54:05 +0000 UTC]




*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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xPostApocalypticGirl In reply to ??? [2008-11-07 19:48:27 +0000 UTC]

It's absolutely beautiful
Great work.

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PoetryOD In reply to xPostApocalypticGirl [2008-11-13 02:54:17 +0000 UTC]


Thank you!

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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SOLIDER-1st [2008-11-07 19:06:49 +0000 UTC]

I love her too...

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PoetryOD In reply to SOLIDER-1st [2008-11-13 02:55:17 +0000 UTC]




*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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mode-de-vie In reply to ??? [2008-11-07 17:52:00 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful. It's so heart-wrenching, but you describe it in such a way that the reader realizes the severity of the situation. It's a very wonderful piece.

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PoetryOD In reply to mode-de-vie [2008-11-13 02:55:41 +0000 UTC]


Thank you, its very personal and I'm very proud of it.

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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harlequin-x-romance In reply to ??? [2008-11-07 17:45:44 +0000 UTC]

tragic, beautiful, dark, perfect.

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PoetryOD In reply to harlequin-x-romance [2008-11-13 02:48:01 +0000 UTC]


wow, thank you!

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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StellaWaters [2008-11-07 16:14:42 +0000 UTC]

I know people who could've written this about me. Well written.

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PoetryOD In reply to StellaWaters [2008-11-13 02:48:09 +0000 UTC]




*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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Konjiki-Kitsune In reply to ??? [2008-11-07 16:01:13 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely wonderful. Tragic and beautiful all at the same time.

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PoetryOD In reply to Konjiki-Kitsune [2008-11-13 02:48:18 +0000 UTC]


Thank you,

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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mulletco In reply to ??? [2008-11-07 12:24:11 +0000 UTC]

beautiful. so sad and so loving

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PoetryOD In reply to mulletco [2008-11-13 02:48:40 +0000 UTC]


I like to hope that we are still lovable - despite everything.

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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InLightImagery In reply to ??? [2008-11-07 12:06:26 +0000 UTC]

It's really pretty sad. And then again loving

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PoetryOD In reply to InLightImagery [2008-11-13 02:48:49 +0000 UTC]


Soppy git aren't I?

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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InLightImagery In reply to PoetryOD [2008-11-13 11:48:34 +0000 UTC]

Yep!

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I-Ate-WHAT In reply to ??? [2008-11-07 11:41:42 +0000 UTC]

i love this poem
i can relate to it so much

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PoetryOD In reply to I-Ate-WHAT [2008-11-13 02:48:57 +0000 UTC]


I'm so glad

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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pearl-dust In reply to ??? [2008-11-07 09:08:58 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely beautiful.... touching the soul in a painfully exquisite way... reminded me of Sally from the Nitemare before Christmas... Am in awe of ur talent!!!!

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PoetryOD In reply to pearl-dust [2008-11-13 02:49:20 +0000 UTC]


Blushes - wow, thank you, what a lovely comment!!

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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pearl-dust In reply to PoetryOD [2008-11-13 14:44:30 +0000 UTC]

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forestsofazarath [2008-11-07 07:36:04 +0000 UTC]

You've definitely touched something here. It's a beautiful poem - and I like how you refer to them as "Stitches".

I don't want to say too much, because I feel like anything I can say is just going to ruin the poem and not do it justice. >.> But if I could double - fave this, I would.

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PoetryOD In reply to forestsofazarath [2008-11-13 02:49:41 +0000 UTC]


Thank you, you are so sweet.
I just tried to be as genuine as I could be.

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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wall-poster-star In reply to ??? [2008-11-07 07:34:24 +0000 UTC]

Exactly what I needed to read today.
(I have this friend...)

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PoetryOD In reply to wall-poster-star [2008-11-13 02:49:48 +0000 UTC]




*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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silky-potato In reply to ??? [2008-11-07 07:26:47 +0000 UTC]

wow. that is very good and i know because i can relate to it. my boyfriend says i am stitches and he feels exactly like the way you wrote that. well done.

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PoetryOD In reply to silky-potato [2008-11-13 02:49:58 +0000 UTC]


Good boyfriend to have

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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silky-potato In reply to PoetryOD [2008-11-13 06:57:00 +0000 UTC]

yes. he is everything to me . slightly hypocritical because he does that too. it works both ways i geuss. i would be dead now if it werent for him

i like your stuffs. v good

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sukkiGoh In reply to ??? [2008-11-07 07:23:43 +0000 UTC]

this is really nice - very nicely written

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PoetryOD In reply to sukkiGoh [2008-11-13 02:50:03 +0000 UTC]


Thank you!

*Flutterings (Kate / Stitches)


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