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Published: 2017-04-23 11:52:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 185; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Dragging my feet over the ground,Voices ring, I can’t stand the sound.
They echo deep within my mind
As I try in vain to leave them behind…
They say that I’m not good enough
To see this life through.
Their words batter me, so rough
As I start to see Blue…
There is no end in sight,
No shining figure of white,
But if I keep walking I might
Find that gleaming light
My one true reason to fight…
I’d need to fly or walk on water
To finally in person, really see Her
And it doesn’t matter
That I’ll probably never
Actually make it there
I’ll still try to fight forever…
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Comments: 12
i thought you were going to submit your other version?
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this is the second worst piece of writing I've ever seen, congrats
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Hey buddy
I'm insulted that i'm not getting the credit for the writing
Is it that you don't love me anymore or that you can't read the description?
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it's because your thoughts don't matter
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ahhahahah nice to see you have new material babe
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*sighs* Are we REALLY gonna go through all this AGAIN?!?!? you're back after another five days of licking your wounds and crying and now you're back to insult me again when you KNOW you can't win...Did your parents find out you were using big,bad four-letter-words like 'bitch' and 'fuck' and 'kys' ans so they grounded you,ya big 11-year-old ?
If you don't like the poetry,or the artwork,or even the person,you can just WALK AWAY. You don't have to start a comment war of petty insults just because you don't like something.It's called being mature,you should try it sometime.
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*edit was just changing the message a bit
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The drawing looks really good, but I can't see it properly. Are you going to post a larger version of it?
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ive been debating it.We didnt realize that the preview image would be so small.
Also,if you're gonna fave this,please fave Zero's copy too,he helped a lot and the poem is his.
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Already did.
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okay ahah
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