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PookaWitch — Faerie Raid - Sacrifice pg 2

Published: 2010-02-28 20:11:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 3136; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 33
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Description Feb 2010

First... this is a preview story arc. It was a test just to see how well hubby and I could storyboard, write, work together, how long the art would take, etc, etc. So, for our test we picked an epic part of our story and did a 5 page arc part way through it. So the story is a little rushed since we crammed so much into 5 pages. If the Faerie Raid comic was a t.v. series this story would be around the end of season 2 (or mid way through season 3).

When we start the actual comic it will be starting the entire faerie story from the beginning, and that should be starting within a few months. I want to work ahead with the pages so that I'm a couple of months ahead. (A page takes me an average of 3 full days of work... not including storyboarding times, edits, etc)

Characters, story (c) myself and
Art done by me
Storyboarding done by
Mix of word balloons and writing by both of us

many brushes used from


drawn with wacom tablet in adobe CS3

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Artist comments on this page: I don't like this page at all, honestly. I nearly drew it at the saved size, the details aren't so great, and I didn't leave enough spaces for the word balloons. -_- If I had time I would have redone this entire page.
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Comments: 16

BloodStarWolf [2010-03-02 20:53:45 +0000 UTC]

Love the characters in this, the balloons are a bit squished but thats really the only part that needs to be fixed here. Also love the effects and coloring.

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PookaWitch In reply to BloodStarWolf [2010-03-05 19:20:38 +0000 UTC]

It's experiment page #2, so hopefully if I wind up with so much dialouge again I can figure it out better.

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BloodStarWolf In reply to PookaWitch [2010-03-06 19:08:49 +0000 UTC]

Well you did great on the other pages so you did great job on fixing them. ^^

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SassyRaptor [2010-03-01 05:42:51 +0000 UTC]

Wowz! Nice! Hehe, I liked the boat joke at the beginning. Your comic-making skills are fantastic.

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daisies-and-vervain [2010-03-01 01:22:14 +0000 UTC]

Bahaha fairy boyfriend. I love Vaughn.

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PookaWitch In reply to daisies-and-vervain [2010-03-01 01:31:28 +0000 UTC]

Pat did a re-do of this page with a 'what Vaughn really hears' edit. He wanted to adjust it, I'll but him to upload it when he's done. lol

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ElmshireLancer In reply to daisies-and-vervain [2010-03-01 01:24:53 +0000 UTC]

All girls love Vaughn, it's not your fault.

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soulfreak [2010-03-01 01:09:18 +0000 UTC]

"She probably ditched us to hang on her new boyfriend's boat"
I'm liking these guys XD

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PookaWitch In reply to soulfreak [2010-03-01 01:33:25 +0000 UTC]

lol.. yeah, Vaughn has his own way of seeing the world. >.>

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ElmshireLancer In reply to soulfreak [2010-03-01 01:26:03 +0000 UTC]

Vaughn: "Can you belive her sometimes?"

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soulfreak In reply to ElmshireLancer [2010-03-01 01:26:39 +0000 UTC]

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Lai-Tut [2010-02-28 20:30:19 +0000 UTC]

Its really pretty I think! You did an amazing job and I think your comic skills are really where they ought to be- but like you said the balloons are kinda squished so it can be a tad bit confusing- BUT it is still amazing I think. I especially love the coloring, it stands out and is very beautiful. I love how you have the far away view, and then the up closer views- it adds a lot. Also, I think its funny how no one seems to be listening to the guy there xD LOL.

~Lai

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PookaWitch In reply to Lai-Tut [2010-02-28 20:45:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, if this was a full comic book this page would have been spread out over a few pages instead.

Lol, nobody ever listens to Vaughn.

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Lai-Tut In reply to PookaWitch [2010-02-28 21:08:51 +0000 UTC]

Poor guy LOL. But then again, he gets to get away with saying something like he did here LOL

~Lai

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PookaWitch In reply to Lai-Tut [2010-02-28 21:14:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, and Vaughn is 'broken hearted' and 'needs to be fixed'. (To add more to the sterotypes that Pat went with. lol )

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PookaWitch In reply to Lai-Tut [2010-02-28 21:13:33 +0000 UTC]

Vaughn is a bit of a funny character. When making the demon characters Pat wanted to make an inkkubus who is trying to reform (ie. becoming more angelic again). So he went with the most sterotypical thing that girls today are attracted to... he's Asian, bishonen with long flowing silver hair (well, in his true form) and very, very broody. Pat did a re-write of this entire page with 'what Vaughn really hears' and it was hilarous. I love how Vaughn just seems to live in his own little world. XD

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