Comments: 27
xMorganaArTx [2015-05-19 08:37:40 +0000 UTC]
We love you, don't worry, keep writing! Hahaha This is great, really, I love this story! I can't with the suspense xDD
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prodigywithapen In reply to xMorganaArTx [2015-05-19 17:18:11 +0000 UTC]
Awwww!!! I feel so loved now! I'm so happy you're enjoying it. Those words are what every writer longs to hear from their readers, and it's what keeps us going! Wait no longer for the suspense, for the next chapter has arrived! (In a few seconds lol)
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prodigywithapen In reply to LarkieAndKitsu [2015-05-17 20:23:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, thank you lol. I'm glad you're enjoying it so far
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bschindl [2015-05-17 09:15:53 +0000 UTC]
Hold on, the LAST chapter "left off at a bad spot"?!? Β As far as cliff-hangers go, I would say that this ending has us hanging over the Grand Canyon vs the drainage ditch sized cliff of the last chapter.
(Now, if you can ratchet that up another notch or two at the ending of the NEXT chapter, you should REALLY get to hear your readers scream!) Β Good job!
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prodigywithapen In reply to bschindl [2015-05-17 20:24:42 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha this comment was the best one I've read. YOU did a good job here lol. The next chapter will be up soon and hopefully it's up to your standards xD
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27Lazybug [2015-05-17 06:55:31 +0000 UTC]
I just stayed up forty five minutes longer before bedtime to read all five chapters. . . I regret nothing.Β Β
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prodigywithapen In reply to 27Lazybug [2015-05-17 20:25:44 +0000 UTC]
Aww, I'm so glad you like it so much! Hour you're not too tired for when the next chapter comes up!
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27Lazybug In reply to prodigywithapen [2015-05-18 01:25:11 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry. =w=Β Today I just had a four and a half hour nap before coming on, so I'm ready.
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prodigywithapen In reply to 27Lazybug [2015-05-19 17:18:28 +0000 UTC]
Okay...I'm just glad you're getting your beauty sleep!
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Juxshoa [2015-05-17 06:10:42 +0000 UTC]
I don't know what's going on anymore?!?! Why are you such the suspense master?
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prodigywithapen In reply to Juxshoa [2015-05-17 20:26:41 +0000 UTC]
MWUAHAHAHAHAHA! I'm glad you think that, though
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tp32 [2015-05-17 05:44:15 +0000 UTC]
I feel sorry for poor Hannah. her emotions must be on a roller coaster. Awesome chapter!!
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prodigywithapen In reply to tp32 [2015-05-17 20:27:09 +0000 UTC]
You don't know the half of it! Wait until her father's emotions come in
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tp32 In reply to prodigywithapen [2015-05-17 21:50:34 +0000 UTC]
Oh, Wow !! I can hardly wait to read the next chapter !!
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prodigywithapen In reply to tp32 [2015-05-19 17:18:54 +0000 UTC]
YAY!! So excited to have it finally ready to be put up then!
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tp32 In reply to prodigywithapen [2015-05-21 01:59:05 +0000 UTC]
Cool!! I just commented on them.
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Lady-Blue-Rose [2015-05-17 00:40:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh dear...
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prodigywithapen In reply to Lady-Blue-Rose [2015-05-17 00:42:00 +0000 UTC]
Yeah....another cliffie....but, don't worry! I'm sure everything will be all right.....maaayybbbee....MWUAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
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Lady-Blue-Rose In reply to prodigywithapen [2015-05-17 00:46:38 +0000 UTC]
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Poor Hannah. Β First Giants. Β Than her Dad. Β And now Royalty.
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Lady-Blue-Rose In reply to prodigywithapen [2015-05-17 00:57:36 +0000 UTC]
So long as you fluff them to make up for it. Β
Though, I must admit I want to see how broken Chris will be if Hannah asks him not to hurt her. Β Or is scared of him... she kinda earned the right to be I think
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