Comments: 17
FrealaF [2007-08-31 16:50:12 +0000 UTC]
amazing!!! i love it soo much! great work
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Sakebi-chan [2006-12-25 10:47:27 +0000 UTC]
lovely designs of the clothing.. i think that the noneclenness of the lines kind work this way. i mean, it makes them look a bit more rough and from the streets O_o somehow
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diddle [2006-08-12 19:14:28 +0000 UTC]
what a very charming drawing. the neutral, pastel colors seem innocuous and appealing and the flat coloring makes the characters appear to be living in a simple, one-dimensional world. the delicate pencil shading gives a little depth and reminds me of children's book illustration. the girl's disheveled coat, flustered face, and tied-up dog leash show her character as being a frazzled, but lovable, worrywart. the dog, while well drawn, looks rather bland, though. as he is obviously a major character, perhaps you should compose him in a manner which reflects his personality better? the clothing is also very well designed and attractive; however, maybe homeless adolescents do not have designer clothes!
the manga idea sounds very cute and charming; it reminds me of the movie "tokyo godfathers." but the world of homelessness is not cuteness and charmingness; girls like hana have turned to prostitution in order to survive. so please remember to handle the story tactfully and justly.
in any event, lovely work on this pic! and good luck on your manga, i have no doubt it will be well drawn.
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PyroNyuko In reply to diddle [2006-08-15 22:49:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the insight, I actually have a few friends who have been homeless... so I understand what you're saying. And hopefully, the dog won't come off so bland when I draw him elsewhere. >_< So thanks for letting me know. Lol.
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Dryas-juas [2006-08-04 22:27:05 +0000 UTC]
great concept for the manga and beautiful character design ^^ I really like this
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jmart-art [2006-08-04 18:22:08 +0000 UTC]
I have a tutorial in my favorites you should check out if you're wanting to clean up your sketches.
oh heck, ill just give you the link. lol [link]
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Lamontraccoon [2006-08-04 15:36:16 +0000 UTC]
NICE, odd I feel like such a fanboy it's too funny. But I can't help it, you always impress, even more so now than ever. It's the tiny details that stand out, the folds in her wear, everything. The details make this look as real and filled with life as it can, truely a sign of a great artist.
About the idea, it's a nice fresh idea, we NEED more fresh ideas out there. And I'm sure it'll be great. ^^
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Lamontraccoon In reply to PyroNyuko [2006-08-04 23:23:18 +0000 UTC]
laughs. XD Yeah I do, and I just know what to post. ^^
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