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PyroNyuko — Ace in the Hole

Published: 2006-08-04 03:40:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1132; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 38
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Description I finally decided to make a manga.. and here is my perliminary sketch. I tried to make it look like a cover page, but the drawing was not clean enough so it looks kinda crappy. Anyway..

The manga is called Ace in the Hole, and for those of you not familiar with card terms it means a hidden advantage. The reason I choose that title is because the dogs name is Ace, and it's rather ironic. The manga will follow a homeless girl and her dog as they go through obstacles and the like. Their names are Hana and Ace. Hana is very reluctant towards others, and spends her time as a street musician (she plays guitar) trying to earn money. Her dog Ace is a dumb but lovable male pit bull.

There are a lot of homeless people where I live and I feel it's an important subject. I'm really excited about this, so hopefully it will turn out as good as I want it to.
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Comments: 17

UchihaMadara07 [2009-12-16 04:38:49 +0000 UTC]

wish you continued it it sounds intresting actually

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FrealaF [2007-08-31 16:50:12 +0000 UTC]

amazing!!! i love it soo much! great work

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MedevalMaiden [2007-04-14 16:00:07 +0000 UTC]

This looks adorable, I like the expression on the girls face and her oversized jacket. I'd want to read this story.

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Sakebi-chan [2006-12-25 10:47:27 +0000 UTC]

lovely designs of the clothing.. i think that the noneclenness of the lines kind work this way. i mean, it makes them look a bit more rough and from the streets O_o somehow

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diddle [2006-08-12 19:14:28 +0000 UTC]

what a very charming drawing. the neutral, pastel colors seem innocuous and appealing and the flat coloring makes the characters appear to be living in a simple, one-dimensional world. the delicate pencil shading gives a little depth and reminds me of children's book illustration. the girl's disheveled coat, flustered face, and tied-up dog leash show her character as being a frazzled, but lovable, worrywart. the dog, while well drawn, looks rather bland, though. as he is obviously a major character, perhaps you should compose him in a manner which reflects his personality better? the clothing is also very well designed and attractive; however, maybe homeless adolescents do not have designer clothes!
the manga idea sounds very cute and charming; it reminds me of the movie "tokyo godfathers." but the world of homelessness is not cuteness and charmingness; girls like hana have turned to prostitution in order to survive. so please remember to handle the story tactfully and justly.
in any event, lovely work on this pic! and good luck on your manga, i have no doubt it will be well drawn.

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PyroNyuko In reply to diddle [2006-08-15 22:49:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the insight, I actually have a few friends who have been homeless... so I understand what you're saying. And hopefully, the dog won't come off so bland when I draw him elsewhere. >_< So thanks for letting me know. Lol.

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paellamagi [2006-08-06 23:03:50 +0000 UTC]

ITS BEAUTIFUL. Those details are fantastic. The dog is gorgeous, actually reminds me a little of my dog. =3 Yeah this is great, in other words.

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paellamagi In reply to paellamagi [2006-08-06 23:05:21 +0000 UTC]

Even though my dog isn't a pit bull, and has a different shaped face and is darker and a bit bigger.

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Dryas-juas [2006-08-04 22:27:05 +0000 UTC]

great concept for the manga and beautiful character design ^^ I really like this

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jmart-art [2006-08-04 18:22:08 +0000 UTC]

I have a tutorial in my favorites you should check out if you're wanting to clean up your sketches.
oh heck, ill just give you the link. lol [link]

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Sayoran-kun [2006-08-04 15:51:11 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait to see more of it! I'm loving the look.

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Lamontraccoon [2006-08-04 15:36:16 +0000 UTC]

NICE, odd I feel like such a fanboy it's too funny. But I can't help it, you always impress, even more so now than ever. It's the tiny details that stand out, the folds in her wear, everything. The details make this look as real and filled with life as it can, truely a sign of a great artist.

About the idea, it's a nice fresh idea, we NEED more fresh ideas out there. And I'm sure it'll be great. ^^

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PyroNyuko In reply to Lamontraccoon [2006-08-04 17:44:16 +0000 UTC]

Aww.. Thank you! *dances* I have a fan! Woo! I'm glad you noticed the details because I tried hard. Lol. BY the way, you need to post art. DEMANDs.

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Lamontraccoon In reply to PyroNyuko [2006-08-04 23:23:18 +0000 UTC]

laughs. XD Yeah I do, and I just know what to post. ^^

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Arctic-Sekai [2006-08-04 07:44:04 +0000 UTC]

MISSSSS U!!!

love the idea, i cant wait to see more !

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brokenaoshi [2006-08-04 03:53:04 +0000 UTC]

Wow I love this!! I really think that it'll go well, the story sounds really fun, and I love the character design. When I become a homeless person I hope I can do it in something as classy as that xD Classy isn't the right word, but I'm a bit lacking in the vocabulary right now...

But yeah! Expect fanarts! >3

Oh, and welcome back from your trip!! I've missed you

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PyroNyuko In reply to brokenaoshi [2006-08-04 04:04:10 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks!! I'm glad you like the idea

And I know what you mean.. Classy, lol. I can't think of a better word either >_< Damn lacking vocabulary-osis.

And, yay

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