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Published: 2007-03-15 04:35:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 170; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description Words written in blood red ink
Feel my mind slowly start to sink
The quagmires rising to swallow me whole
And l've never felt so terribly old
My dreams break apart
A black and blue heart

Watching people inter-acting out parts
Walking around others with a buised heart
Trying to remember almost anything
That will help relieve the sting
Pain like a dart
A black and blue heart

Looking at a kind stranger's eyes
Through a dark dream disguise
Desparate for a human's touch
Never knowing just how much
Feeling the mark
A black and blue heart

Fighting for some type of faith
Standing here a broken disgrace
Tears fall to feed hope
Hang on to the ends of rope
Holding all the light and dark
A black and blue heart
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Comments: 7

Flamingpelt [2007-03-16 20:26:55 +0000 UTC]

T-Rex. Hmmm...I wonder...(Could you send me the note, too, please? I'm rather used to adult content.)
Wonderful poem, Val, but I'm sorry that you had to be in that condition to write it.

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soporapis [2007-03-15 16:39:20 +0000 UTC]

Nice work...
What was the joke..!?!?!

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quinsidently In reply to soporapis [2007-03-16 02:07:40 +0000 UTC]

I'll send it to you in a note because it's rather adult content. XD

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soporapis In reply to quinsidently [2007-03-16 02:22:41 +0000 UTC]

Do you ever find it strange that it is such a crime on these sites to put up 'adult' or 'mature' content, yet at the same time, I have know of an 11 year old who was making a baby...Something about those things together just spins me for a loop and makes me want to be sick.

A perfect quote for that thought thanks to Tori Amos-who I have probably quoted so often that I should be sued for it.:
"You say the world is sick; I said tell me what that makes us darlin'?"

Yes, note it to me, or we may all be thrown in jail because I wanted to laugh at a joke. Such an odd world with nonsense and pointless laws and loopholes...

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soporapis In reply to soporapis [2007-03-16 14:48:38 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha. Thanks for the note with the joke. It explains a lot... Poor rabbits...hahaha. Thank you.

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quinsidently In reply to soporapis [2007-03-17 01:58:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, the rabbit did "give up his services", so you have to wonder what they talked about afterwards....

I'm so going to burn for passing that one along.

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soporapis In reply to quinsidently [2007-03-17 22:04:44 +0000 UTC]

What note?

Windows: Evil Outside!!!

No talking, a TRex has to go pee somewhere back in time...hahaha!

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