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Nekoseznya [2012-04-12 00:50:30 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Well.
Wow.
Very well done. I applaud you.
Anyways, the critique.
Vision: This is a nicely composed piece! I really like the overall idea, with bright colors, all in various shades of blue, and having the girl stare up at the whale. Very nice concept and visualization. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Nod"/>
Originality: I definitely haven't seen a picture like this before. You managed to capture all the awe of an aquarium with ease, along with really the awe of the ocean and all that's in it. I don't see many pictures that manage to pack in so much detail in this way - very nicely and originall-y (?) done. : D
Especially the dome shape. It seems small, but impressive. I don't know. Just never seen a dome-aquarium exactly like that. o.o
Technique: Dang. I mean, wow. Just wow. You got some skill. The coloring is magnificent, the detail is stunning, really everything.
Except one thing - the dome's iron... Whatever you'd call them. At the top, the way they curve, it's really hard to tell what direction they curve in. Honestly, to me it looks more like they're curving outwards instead of inwards. I suggest less light on the inside, as the light source is really from the outside, not the inside.
Impact: I think I've sufficiently covered this in the above? xD I love this - It's really quite a stunning piece, very well executed.
I hope I didn't praise you too too much there? xD
And I hope I managed to help.
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Nekoseznya In reply to xxRisunaxx [2012-04-12 11:13:29 +0000 UTC]
Hah, I'm sure you did fine.
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Raayzel In reply to Nekoseznya [2012-04-12 01:00:03 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for taking the time to critique this! It was really helpful to me, especially the dome. I knew it looked kinda off but i didn't know why XD I'll probably fix that up now 8D
And no, i don't think you praised me too too much lol >O<
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Nekoseznya In reply to Raayzel [2012-04-12 11:13:20 +0000 UTC]
xD I'm very glad I managed to help :'D
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fillealisen [2018-10-12 01:00:02 +0000 UTC]
i have a recurring dream kinda like this picture. it was cool seeing it "in person" like that. and as an avid fan of whales and all ocean life; i think you did a wonderful job.
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Leocean143 [2018-02-18 14:24:20 +0000 UTC]
amazing!amazing!amaziiing!
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Lugia20711 [2017-04-16 00:25:42 +0000 UTC]
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EricLeo666 [2017-01-07 06:14:24 +0000 UTC]
nice place and nice color....Β Β
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just-Lis [2015-03-22 14:52:18 +0000 UTC]
Wow...Fantastic work!
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umbatman [2015-03-14 16:36:32 +0000 UTC]
amazing, i wish i could critique this, it is an amazing work
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SinaWho [2015-03-03 01:22:59 +0000 UTC]
This whale is an angel.
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C-blaze21 [2015-03-03 00:09:30 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!!!!!!!!
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HimitsuUK [2015-03-02 22:51:28 +0000 UTC]
Whaley good.
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YagoMartins95 [2014-04-20 08:54:08 +0000 UTC]
wonderfull colors!! Amazing art
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MiniSteveK [2014-04-13 20:48:30 +0000 UTC]
This is breath-taking! I love the beautiful detail so much.
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JohnK222 [2014-01-14 13:55:45 +0000 UTC]
I love the blue glowiness about it. Feels kind of mysterious too.
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FlameMar In reply to FlameMar [2013-12-13 00:42:26 +0000 UTC]
gomen error! x_X
is very majestic scene Β
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AngelicArtCreations [2013-08-21 22:38:41 +0000 UTC]
don't doubt yourself with yourΒ capabilities with art you are very good at animals. keep it up
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Almithy [2013-07-29 12:45:31 +0000 UTC]
Wowww...Β Β
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jelloislife [2013-07-13 17:00:17 +0000 UTC]
you drew all my dreams together in one picture > . <
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SkimKimchi [2013-05-02 20:48:49 +0000 UTC]
I love it!
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amayaangeline [2013-04-14 05:34:33 +0000 UTC]
Woah cool!! > <
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Trumpet-Riggs [2012-12-01 08:34:22 +0000 UTC]
Such a wonderful piece! I love it!
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Sorain26 [2012-11-17 07:30:07 +0000 UTC]
Truly amazing, all the cool colors combined with the small hint of a few warm colors makes a wonderful color scheme.
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KaeMcSpadden [2012-10-29 20:15:47 +0000 UTC]
This is done beautifully. If you don't mind. May I use this image for a powerpoint project, please? I can post the link to this image if you like.
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Raayzel In reply to KaeMcSpadden [2012-11-04 11:56:22 +0000 UTC]
Sure as long as you credit its fine with me ^^
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KaeMcSpadden In reply to Raayzel [2012-11-07 00:04:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I will make sure to credit you and site the image.
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VVanielle [2012-10-08 00:16:21 +0000 UTC]
Is awesome, wonderful and beautiful!!!
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Fraught-Adopts [2012-09-22 23:31:43 +0000 UTC]
I almost cried this was so beautiful.
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dreamheron [2012-09-01 17:02:41 +0000 UTC]
incredible!!!
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MegaAnimeFreak7 [2012-08-26 09:22:58 +0000 UTC]
No way this is the work of a sixteen year old.
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AliciaTheSquirrel [2012-08-12 15:25:29 +0000 UTC]
*β* wow it's amazing!!!!
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Sketchevrywir [2012-08-05 12:45:25 +0000 UTC]
i love whales, and i really like your artwork!
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TimeAngel-113224400 [2012-07-24 21:25:36 +0000 UTC]
LOve aquariums, and btw Love the colors and good job!! ^^
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