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this is about my 4th photoshop attempt...it's really gimp shop but whatever. the character is of my own design, he doesn't really belong to any comics I'm working on right now, but I have a really crumy bio for him.

here it goes, try not to laugh, this is in a nutshell after all:
a family enhierets a mysterious box with 3 marbles upon the birth of thier second son. only a month after his birth, men in gray suits break in to his home steal him, and the box from the home, and after being met with confrontation by the mother, they kill her. the older brother by 7 years flees the home to safety. dwelling on his brothers kidnapping, 20 years later he finally finds out who took his brother. he decideds to break into the instalation and after hours of sneaking, finds his brother, very sickly looking, on the 13th floor in a paded room (insane asylem style). frantically searching for something to break the glass he finds a familliar box on the other side of the level. he's able to smash the tiny window of his little brothers prison, but little did he know that his brother was a psychic, and being held here for the well being of the people of the planet. years of being imprisoned in a room meant for containing psychic potential makes him go mad, and the marbles are the key to his outlandishly grand powers.

the marbles themselves are condensed stars, the box holding them emited an anti gravity field, but once removed by the boys psychic power they were the deadliest weapons known to man.

the story sucks but there ya go. all I want to know is what you think of the pic.

Description
this is about my 4th photoshop attempt...it's really gimp shop but whatever. the character is of my own design, he doesn't really belong to any comics I'm working on right now, but I have a really crumy bio for him.

here it goes, try not to laugh, this is in a nutshell after all:
a family enhierets a mysterious box with 3 marbles upon the birth of thier second son. only a month after his birth, men in gray suits break in to his home steal him, and the box from the home, and after being met with confrontation by the mother, they kill her. the older brother by 7 years flees the home to safety. dwelling on his brothers kidnapping, 20 years later he finally finds out who took his brother. he decideds to break into the instalation and after hours of sneaking, finds his brother, very sickly looking, on the 13th floor in a paded room (insane asylem style). frantically searching for something to break the glass he finds a familliar box on the other side of the level. he's able to smash the tiny window of his little brothers prison, but little did he know that his brother was a psychic, and being held here for the well being of the people of the planet. years of being imprisoned in a room meant for containing psychic potential makes him go mad, and the marbles are the key to his outlandishly grand powers.

the marbles themselves are condensed stars, the box holding them emited an anti gravity field, but once removed by the boys psychic power they were the deadliest weapons known to man.

the story sucks but there ya go. all I want to know is what you think of the pic.