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Description Mind Games by Near

This is Part One of a series of three. In each of them, one character from the anime series Death Note is going to bring a tribute to another character from the same anime.
The first one under the spotlight is Near, who's paying his respects to the infamous L by sporting the trademark undereye circles and an overall heavy and serious atmosphere. Also, he's not his usual introvert and somewhat antisocial self, for he is looking straight into the camera, in a manner similar to that of L's (remember that scene when L finally introduces himself to Light? when he was glaring at Light as if he wanted to read beyond the brown eyes and straight into his soul? XD loved that).

"Mind Games", by Near (tribute to L)
"Tactics" by L (tribute to Near)
"Checkmate" by Misa

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I did this for the Otaku Festival III: Play, which will take place between the 9th and 10th of May, in Bucharest. I resized the original huge-ass version (an A3 format, which I sent to the jury of the exposition), but I doubt that much will prevent art theft.
Please, please, please don't steal this. But if you do, please credit me in one way or another: not because I'm an attention seeking whore, but because I want different people with different views to criticize this work so that I can learn from my mistakes and improve on my future. Thank you!

If you do decide to drop some constructive criticism (for which I'll be very grateful), please comment mostly on the coloring techniques. I'm aware of almost all the mistakes I did regarding the lineart (even though I did use a reference; albeit it was a small 10cm-height one for a 21cm-height sketch), so I'd really appreciate some feedback regarding the colors, from any point of view you want. I tried a lot of things on this work and I need to know which ones were the right choices and which I must never repeat again. Thank you so very much!
Near (C) Ohba and Obata
artwork (C) Irina Nicolae
reference from Tricia Gosingtian's photography, model Crissey: [link]
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Comments: 28

ArtelleArt [2009-07-12 09:08:50 +0000 UTC]

muahahaha! Eu am o poza cu desenu direct de la artist!
I love my mama :3 <3

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reenheart In reply to ArtelleArt [2009-07-12 12:46:06 +0000 UTC]

Cuz you're one of the very few special people I lurf! ,333

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ArtelleArt In reply to reenheart [2009-07-12 16:10:35 +0000 UTC]

T_____T
<3 <3 <3

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catzav3ncu [2009-05-15 08:07:32 +0000 UTC]

O iesit super tare! fundalul este tare insa vad k te-ai incurcat la mana dreapta *it's paine* , oricum sigur tia luat mult timp sa-l faci dar merita

Curios in ce program l-ai facut ?

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reenheart In reply to catzav3ncu [2009-05-15 08:14:43 +0000 UTC]

#$%^^&& @ the right hands *note to self: practice hands like there's no tomorrow*

Multumesc mult pentru aprecieri si comment!

Sketchul in creion, pe hartie, apoi scanat si apoi lucrat exclusiv in Photoshop CS2 (lineart, color, etc).

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catzav3ncu In reply to reenheart [2009-05-16 07:51:55 +0000 UTC]

fara tableta grafica ?

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reenheart In reply to catzav3ncu [2009-05-17 08:03:25 +0000 UTC]

right, forgot about that CU tableta grafica XD

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Yume-no-Hime [2009-05-04 10:25:34 +0000 UTC]

Eh, lenii mele inerente ii place cand altii spun tot ce voiam sa zic eu si ma scutesc sa mai fac ditai comentariul(did that just sound really bad and possibly offensive? I didn't mean it that way, sorry my dear seme >.< ) Dar serios acum, in afara de pozitiile fortate ale bratelor si mainilor nu cred ca as avea ce sa critic negativ. Cromatica e simpla si de efect, la fel ca si efectele folosite, iar perspectiva si adancimea imaginii sunt bine redate. Felicitari, grozava lucrare

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reenheart In reply to Yume-no-Hime [2009-05-04 14:49:25 +0000 UTC]

nah, that didn't sound wrong

oh, those damn hands! am verificat cu sormea si mana stanga e 'osibila', as in nu necesita nici un efort sa stai asa. Cred k am gresit la partea cu umbrele si atunci mi-a iesit cam 'lata', dupa cum zicea Andreea. Gotta work on that.
Cat despre dreapta, I re-checked with reference si acolo arata la fel de 'disproportionat'. Probabil ca are a face cu unghiul ciudat sau am gresit eu cand am colorat umbrele de pe maneca (explicatia soramii) dunno, really. Oricum, desi un pic mai sucita din incheietura, nici poziotia mainii drepte nu este imposibila.
Trebuie sa mai exersez chestia cu umbrele. They seem to make a huge difference >.<" gah, gotta improove

Multumesc mult pt feedback! you're teh sw33t :*

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Yume-no-Hime In reply to reenheart [2009-05-05 16:45:00 +0000 UTC]

Ma bucur mult c-am zis ceva util my dear Reen Mult spor in continuare, poti sa fii sigura ca se vede evolutia ta cu fiecare nou desen.

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reenheart In reply to Yume-no-Hime [2009-05-06 15:25:15 +0000 UTC]

kyaaa! thank you!
I'll try to do better next time so that my dear uke can be as proud of me as I am of her! XD

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Yume-no-Hime In reply to reenheart [2009-05-06 16:40:29 +0000 UTC]

Who is already really proud and happy of her dear dear seme

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raluca-z [2009-05-01 07:44:09 +0000 UTC]

Cum vad eu imaginea dpv al culorii este ok. Zarurile se integreaza perfect cu Near si cu background-ul ca schema de culori.

Doua intrebari as avea de pus pentru ca eu as fi abordat un pic diferit problema nu pentru ca abordarea ta ar fi gresita.

Fetele zarurilor ce se vad au fost alese intamplator? De ce planul 1 dinspre privitor fete impare si apoi planul 2 pare si in spate de tot pare si impare? Exista vreun motiv?

Personal as fi folosit fetele sa creez un model, poate sa spell L pe unul din planuri - I don't know mai mult speculat aranjarea lor pe planurile din fata. Orice detaliu cat de mic trebuie sa sustina idea ilustratiei pe langa sa se integreze in ea.

Despre anatomie si perspectiva nu o sa comentez prea mult desi si mie mi se pare mana dreapta a lui Near un pic fortata pe zarul respectiv.

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reenheart In reply to raluca-z [2009-05-04 06:22:35 +0000 UTC]

Multumesc mult pt feedback!

Lineartul a fost facut pt Otaku, inainte sa-mi vina ideea de a-l transforma intr-un tribute. Iar apoi era prea tarziu, so I said 'fuck it'
Poate, cand o sa-mi gasesc timp, o sa-l editez sa spell L XD Mersi mult pt sugestie

In privinta fetelor pare si impare: total intamplator tot ce urmaream era sa nu folosesc prea des fata 1 si sa apara prea aerisit, sau fata 6 si sa arate incarcat. I tried to switch between faces to make it look somewhat balanced and even. Till you pointed it out, I didn't even notice!

Thanks again for the feedbak! XD

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greenshades [2009-05-01 07:31:21 +0000 UTC]

it's nice. cam cat ai stat la el?
legat de zaruri as avea ceva de comentat. e un pic aiurea ca li se vad muchiile atat de puternic. uita-te de exemplu la zarul mare din spate, cum se vede pe fundalul cerului. cerul e super fain, dar faptu ca zarul ala e un cub perfect fata de cerul lucrat asa, donno, doesn't work. si in general, ca sa fie mai dinamica imaginea, zarurile din prim plan puteau sa fie si sub alte unghiuri privite, nu neaparat ca niste turnulete asa, unele sa fie cazute, altele rotite la alte unghiuri fata de cel pe care il folosesti tu. le vezi frontal si toate fug la un singur punct de fuga. cum ai simtit ca zarul ala mare de sus ca trebuie rotit cumva, asa poate trebuiau si cele mici - evident cu o oarecare moderatie, ca altfel cred ca iesea haos
legat de personaj si mie mi se pare un pic ciudata pozitia lui. aici trebe un pic de studiu cred, pe anatomie and stuff. si la par as mai lucra. altfel, modul in care sse contureaza umbrele hainelor e super ok.
the idea is to have fun while drawing, right? so have fun

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reenheart In reply to greenshades [2009-05-04 06:31:08 +0000 UTC]

Nu puteam sa rotesc zarurile pt ca intram in "out of character". Near isi aseaza zarurile in turnuri perfect drepte.
Zarul mare de sus e exceptia cuz, well, trebuia sa cada ceva pt a deranja zarurile din prim-plan si noi sa putem privi inaintrul jocului lui Near

About that point of vantage and perspectives... sincer, tot ce stiu despre perspectiva&co e ceea ce am gasit pe various sites. I'm teaching myself this and yeah, sometimes I don't get things right from the first try XD

Oh yeah! I totally agree and I did have fun! ^_^ sketchul pe hartie A4 l-am facut la facultate prin pauze sau printre cursuri, lineartul digital A3 intr-o zi (cu pauzele lungi si dese, ov courz ) si l-am colorat in cele 3 zile de Paste, lucrand sporadic pt ca nu era la mine acasa, si deh, cica trebuia sa stau si cu gazdele. XD

Thanks a lot for the input! Much appreciated!

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greenshades In reply to reenheart [2009-05-14 09:08:01 +0000 UTC]

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seandreea In reply to greenshades [2009-05-03 07:41:55 +0000 UTC]

Nu vreau sa-i iau apararea, insa atatea zaruri facute la unghiuri diferite? Cred ca ar fi luat cu saptamanile

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greenshades In reply to seandreea [2009-05-14 09:07:15 +0000 UTC]

nu si daca lucrezi la mana libera

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seandreea In reply to greenshades [2009-05-14 12:24:53 +0000 UTC]

Nu inteleg. Daca lucrezi la mana libera nu iti ia cu saptamanile?

Sau ai vrut sa spui "doar daca lucrezi la mana libera"?

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reenheart In reply to seandreea [2009-05-04 14:42:42 +0000 UTC]

Who knows, maybe I'll try it sometime :>

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niculescuioana [2009-04-30 20:00:10 +0000 UTC]

sugoi, neh?

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reenheart In reply to niculescuioana [2009-04-30 20:10:07 +0000 UTC]

sou ka? Ariagatou!!!!

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Steph-Oo [2009-04-30 19:33:13 +0000 UTC]

amazing

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reenheart In reply to Steph-Oo [2009-04-30 19:54:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^_^

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Steph-Oo In reply to reenheart [2009-04-30 20:40:20 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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seandreea [2009-04-30 19:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Can I drool now and comment later?

Sincer chiar imi place cum a iesit si a trebuit sa ma uit atent la personaj dupa cateva minute de staring, ca sa vad mici neconcordante
Imi place compozitia mult si backgroundul, desi simplu.
Mainile insa sunt cam problematice. Sunt bine facute insa pozitiile par cam fortate. Mana dreapta e cam scurta -> par sa fie pozitie "verticala" insa daca e asa bratul trebuie sa fie de aceiasi lungime cu antebratul si e mai lung. Presupun ca trebuia antebratul sa fie un pic ridicat dar atunci trebuia sugerat prin umbre.
Mana stanga ar fi trebui sa fie totusi la 3/4 nu fix vazuta din fata (ma refer la planul palmei). De asta cred ca pare un pic fortata.

oricum, felicitarile mele. E superb ^^

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reenheart In reply to seandreea [2009-04-30 20:09:11 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaaha Watch that keyboard! We don't want you to drool over it and bust a button, do we now?

Mana dreapta - yeah, I know, but by the time I stepped back and took a look at the big picture, it was too late to edit it. Ah well.
Mana e mirror-checked and humanly possible. Probabil pare fortata din cauza lipsei mele de experienta in ale coloratului. *hides*

Mersi frumos! Apreciez mult!

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