gnublu [2013-12-02 11:13:31 +0000 UTC]
poor girl must be scared....GOOD! now add some sweat, like she's been running for a long time, lots of scratches, some with blood coming out, and bruises, evidence that she's been thrashed around, and make the weather cold, so her nipples poke out so it'll make whatever is chasing her ravage want to her even more!
lol jk, you dont have to do that, not bad suggestions though right?
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RichardBlumenstein In reply to Zairaam [2012-11-04 15:11:23 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the feedback. I will eventually need to rework it, and I will definitely add those suggestions in.
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