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Published: 2019-01-27 22:36:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 1275; Favourites: 61; Downloads: 33
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This is a commission for pawcanada


He requested that I draw this character . I stayed fairly close to that design, but as requested I made her body more toned. I also made her top shorted so we can look at her abs

There will be another version of this drawing that I will upload soon.


I hope you like it.


I do Commissions maybe I can help flesh up your character. Send me a note if you are interested

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Comments: 29

pawcanada [2019-01-28 20:08:58 +0000 UTC]

She looks amazing. I like your decision to make the top shorter to show off more of her glorious ab muscles, and I like your suggestion to make the belt, handle of the mace and shield the same leather as her boots and pauldron. Speaking of them, I really like how those additions look on her design and I'll definitely include them next time I draw her.


The muscle detailing also looks amazing, and I'd say it perfectly captured the type of muscle detailing I envision her having. I especially like how the aforementioned abs look, as well as her biceps.


The various gems on her design look good as well, and I love the shade of violet you used for her eyes. It nicely matches the gems, which is the rough idea I have for her and the other elves in her group.


Thank you again for drawing this and helping me improve and evolve her design

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richten In reply to pawcanada [2019-01-28 22:14:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm glad you like it.

Yes, sort of had to make the top shorter I felt for consistency it was better to keep all the leather the same. A shield held just by hand is possible, in fact Viking shields were that way, but it's tiring and it has the problem that it can be rotated around that single pivot. That is why I made it held by 2 straps, one held by the hand, the other around the arm.


I'm really happy with the tone of her arms too. I like women with skinny arms, but the muscular ones are also hot


I did match the gems and the eyes, but at the same time making them slightly different. You know, because eyes are not made of gemstones


Always a pleasure to work on your characters

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pawcanada In reply to richten [2019-02-28 17:52:32 +0000 UTC]

Nothing wrong with that . I think it's a good idea.


That makes sense, and I will definitely work with that idea moving forward, as with the two straps.


As long as it's not too over the top, I agree . It can look amazing as well.


That is a fair point and something else I will keep in mind moving forward.

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richten In reply to pawcanada [2019-03-02 17:09:56 +0000 UTC]


There are other ways to hold a shield, like with a strap that goes over the opposite shoulder, much more comfortable to hold it for a long time but that is more of horseback riding.


I agree.



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pawcanada In reply to richten [2019-03-02 18:49:19 +0000 UTC]

Makes sense. And I did SORT of suggest that in my piece, with her wearing the shield across her back when she's walking around.

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richten In reply to pawcanada [2019-03-03 17:06:16 +0000 UTC]

When walking around that is a good way to carry it, at least you won't have your arm tired when it comes time to use it. Carry 3kg in your hand even for one hour and then tell me what happens

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pawcanada In reply to richten [2019-03-03 18:04:56 +0000 UTC]

That is VERY true. I am considering the idea that they can "summon" these weapons from some kind of magical "hammerspace" as and when they need them. That said, I still feel they'd have the weapons to hand in a dangerous situation (i.e. a vampire's castle) so carrying a heavy shield on the back is a wise option.

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richten In reply to pawcanada [2019-03-04 18:04:20 +0000 UTC]

I don't know, I still like seeing the weapons when they walk around. Most of my characters have them on a sheath or hanging some way from the belt or back. Although Ariel has a bag of holding (so she carries a lot of stuff around) she still keeps her weapons and other things close at hand.

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pawcanada In reply to richten [2019-03-05 08:54:04 +0000 UTC]

Makes sense.

I'm still figuring out the "rules" of their powers, but I always envisioned the weapons being generated by the gems. One possibility being so long as they wear their belt, they can call the weapons to them from hammer space/bag of holding/the gems, but I need to iron that out.

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richten In reply to pawcanada [2019-03-05 17:02:58 +0000 UTC]

Ok, those are options.

There are advantages to having the weapons disappear. I have a friend that really doesn't like some of my designs of Ariel with her equipment. Specially the more fancy dresses, when the line is cut it's something people that know about this stuff really don't appreciate. In any case, when she is wearing the fancy dresses to go to a party that she expects to be dangerous she can use illusions to make the equipment invisible or have a gem to summon it.

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PropertyofLamb [2019-01-27 22:51:28 +0000 UTC]

Nice X3

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richten In reply to PropertyofLamb [2019-01-28 00:34:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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PropertyofLamb In reply to richten [2019-01-28 00:38:58 +0000 UTC]

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spiderxand [2019-01-27 22:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Nice mace.

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richten In reply to spiderxand [2019-01-28 00:34:03 +0000 UTC]

Yes, better choose your words, that mace looks heavy

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spiderxand In reply to richten [2019-01-28 04:05:25 +0000 UTC]

I'll take my chances. I can be quite the smooth talker when I want to be.

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richten In reply to spiderxand [2019-01-28 04:48:15 +0000 UTC]

I will let the owner of the character say how she would react to smooth talk.

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spiderxand In reply to richten [2019-01-28 11:50:00 +0000 UTC]

On second thought. Nah. I'm good.

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richten In reply to spiderxand [2019-01-28 17:16:39 +0000 UTC]

Getting second thoughts?

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spiderxand In reply to richten [2019-01-28 19:15:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. When you said you would tattle on me.

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richten In reply to spiderxand [2019-01-28 20:10:14 +0000 UTC]

I would not tattle, just saying I don't know how she would react

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spiderxand In reply to richten [2019-01-28 22:42:40 +0000 UTC]

O.k.

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pawcanada In reply to richten [2019-01-28 11:43:11 +0000 UTC]

At best, she'd ignore the person. At worse, a mace to the face.

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richten In reply to pawcanada [2019-01-28 17:16:22 +0000 UTC]

ok

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pawcanada In reply to richten [2019-01-29 08:05:08 +0000 UTC]

I also see her being quite picky when it comes to the people she dates as well . I am working with a writer friend to create a realistic relationship between Erin and a human fighter, someone she meets on an adventure, fights alongside and develops a mutual bond with.

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richten In reply to pawcanada [2019-01-29 18:15:03 +0000 UTC]

I see, maybe eventually I can draw her with this human fighter

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pawcanada In reply to richten [2019-01-30 08:01:30 +0000 UTC]

Hopefully . I'm still trying to work out his appearance so once that's done I'll add it to the backlog. He is based on a Fighter I used to play in Dungeons and Dragons, and was named after one of my mum's cats (a Seal Point Siamese). As a result, I see him having blue eyes while his beard and hair are dark brown, similar to her cat.

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richten In reply to pawcanada [2019-01-30 17:39:04 +0000 UTC]

Ok, that gives me time to practice drawing men

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pawcanada In reply to richten [2019-02-01 20:24:16 +0000 UTC]

Sounds good to me

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