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Riku-Heartilly — The Alice of Spades [NSFW]
Published: 2008-10-23 02:41:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1662; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 11
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Description In some place was a little dream.
Who dreamed it, unknown....
Such truly little dream it was.

The little dream thought,
I don't want to be vanishing like this,
how can I make people watch me?

The little dream thought and thought...
and finally came up with an idea.

"I could get people to stray into me,
and let them make the world."


.....


The first Alice,Beyond Birthday, was galliant....a boy that lived in the orphanage known as Wammy's House.

He was the very second successor to the great detective L.

He was an interesting successor....and very intellegent at that...and courageous.


There the boy lay on his bed. Flat on his stomache chewing on his thumb nail.

"What to do today....what to do today...." Beyond muttered under his breath letting his head hang off the bed.

His attention soon moved to under his bed. "What is that...?" B mumbled looking curiously under the bed. Immediately getting off his bed and lieing down on the ground reaching out under his bed.

"Hmm?" B's hand seemed to had grasped hold of what appeared to be some sort of card?

He took it and pulled it out from under the bed.

A playing card?

"What is this doing under my bed...." B mumbled flipping the card over. His head tilted somewhat confused at the card. There was a spade on the top part of the card. Underneath the spade was a picture....of what appeared to be him on it. Along with the word Alice written on the bottom.

"....Who made this?" Beyond mumbled getting up and looking down at the card. What kind of joke was this?

"Whatever...." B's voice cut, hearing a little laughter coming from his closet.

"Who's there?"

"Oh hello Alice" The voice said to B.

"...I'm B not Alice" B corrected.

"You seem like a good Alice" The voice drawled on.

"What?"

"Would you like to see?"

"...See what?"

"Your world? Wonderland Alice?" The voice said then.

B stepped forward walking over to the closet curiously. "My world...?"

"Yes...."

Taking another step forward the young successor opened his closet and stepped inside.

The door shut immediately. Everything was pitch black...

"What is this..." Beyond whispered to himself walking forward and finding himself closing his eye's then blinking them opening to find himself definately not in his closet.

B's eye's wandered around the world.

"...Wow..." B couldn't believe what he was seeing. Such an odd quirky little world.

He took more steps farther into this odd world. Everything around him...Everyone around him seemed to resemble odd things and such.

"Wow....This is wonderland?" B mumbled to himself beginning to chuckle softly. He began to slowly walk forward and pick up a sword he saw on the ground.

"...Such a pretty place..." B said almost poetic like. He felt odd for some reason....It was as if he wasn't himself once he'd stepped into this world known as wonderland.

He himself could feel it as he dragged his sword and walked on. Raising his sword and a smile slowly plastering his face.

It was then that he began to walk forward and slash hard down onto a young child. Watching the blood splatter about. All over him and all around him.

"Alice? Am I really Alice you silly little voice?!" Beyond cackled walking down a path slashing at things and killing as much as he saw. He couldn't stop laughing either.

"Alice of spades....The very first Alice..." The voice repeated in his mind.

Beyond paid absolutely no mind to this voice and continued to laugh and slash at the poor things around him. Blood askew all about.

He was now walking into a forest....

Leaving a long blood trail as he continued to slaughter people and animals alike.

It was then that he heard a small laughter in his head. He came to a stop looking around confused.

"Where am I?!" B demanded looking around finding himself surrounded by thorn vines and no way to leave such place.

...And there he dropped his sword and fell to the ground looking around wide eye'd and laughing....Locked away deep within this forest forever....The only way for someone to find him would be to follow that lovely bloody path he left behind....
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Comments: 15

morbidlover69 [2010-05-08 00:49:11 +0000 UTC]

This is super good and I don't even like to read stuff on deviantart!!! Wich is weird...It kinda reminds me of Vocaloid thou I like it alot woo hooo!

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Riku-Heartilly In reply to morbidlover69 [2010-05-08 09:01:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^^

and it is based on the Alice Human Sacrifice song.

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Riri-Lala-Kiki [2009-05-25 06:01:52 +0000 UTC]

I'm working on a story that uses the same idea. I don't think it's very good. It's called The Fifth Alice and I'm not very happy with it.
You can check out the first chapter [link]
... and then leave a hate comment furhter along in the story if you think I'm copying you! ^^ Now that I think about it, it's nothing like yours. XDD I'm going to shut up now.

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Riri-Lala-Kiki [2009-05-25 06:01:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm working on a story that uses the same idea. I don't think it's very good. It's called The Fifth Alice and I'm not very happy with it.
You can check out the first chapter [link]
... and then leave a hate comment furhter along in the story if you think I'm copying you! ^^ Now that I think about it, it's nothing like yours. XDD I'm going to shut up now.

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Lunioka [2009-05-09 07:47:17 +0000 UTC]

I very much enjoyed how you used 'Alice Human Sacrifice' to pull the reader into your story~

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Riku-Heartilly In reply to Lunioka [2009-05-09 08:01:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^^

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Thorngor-argromack [2008-10-23 04:07:50 +0000 UTC]

woooo scary yet very satisfying

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Riku-Heartilly In reply to Thorngor-argromack [2008-10-23 05:25:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^ Yeah I really do love B's chapter in this fic. >w<

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Thorngor-argromack In reply to Riku-Heartilly [2008-10-23 05:53:20 +0000 UTC]

yeah I can somehow picture him in a "Happy Tree Friends" scenario

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Riku-Heartilly In reply to Thorngor-argromack [2008-10-23 05:59:26 +0000 UTC]

o.o I could picture all of them in Happy Tree friends.

Mello and Near become evil once they are killed by BB because they still wonder the realms of wonderland...forever o.o

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Thorngor-argromack In reply to Riku-Heartilly [2008-10-23 17:29:08 +0000 UTC]

ok I've been inspired now

I'm gonna do some HTF Death Note Wammy stuff, thing, art, WHATEVER

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Riku-Heartilly In reply to Thorngor-argromack [2008-10-24 07:53:43 +0000 UTC]

Ok I know I probably sound like an idiot...But what does HTF mean? o.o

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Thorngor-argromack In reply to Riku-Heartilly [2008-10-24 15:55:28 +0000 UTC]

acronym for happy tree friend

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Riku-Heartilly In reply to Thorngor-argromack [2008-10-24 16:46:13 +0000 UTC]

ok wow I feel stupid o.o

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Thorngor-argromack In reply to Riku-Heartilly [2008-10-24 21:11:49 +0000 UTC]

don't worry your probably not the only one

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