Comments: 25
SlippyMagnus [2012-06-26 05:33:02 +0000 UTC]
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The coloring is good, as to be expected (even if i can't color) but i have a problem...
The TYPE of coloring. While non of the coloring or style is bad, me being Nit-Picky and this being a critique, you get to hear me say EVERYTHING wrong with it, even if it's small.
The color isfantastic, but the thing that is bugging me most (I'm done being Vague here!) The Lines. With Sunbeam, you see a very defined outline, some shading, yes, bbut the bad part here is that you chose two different approaches to the same STYLE
You made the Background, (which seems almost as close as Sunbeam) blurry, but made Sunbeam Not blurred at all. This lack makes it easy to focus on Sunbeam (as you wanted) but makes it look really out-of-place upon further critique than a simple glance.
You have the talent all right, but you kinda needed some more work for this one. Sorry!
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Schmengee [2012-06-26 10:44:21 +0000 UTC]
XD
Awesome!!!
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speqqy [2012-06-26 09:18:45 +0000 UTC]
This is very nice!!
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Kalexshi [2012-06-26 06:11:54 +0000 UTC]
I love how you draw the bubbles!! XD
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RogueDoodler In reply to Kalexshi [2012-06-26 20:23:25 +0000 UTC]
Hehe thank you! X3 I do too, they were fun to make
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imagreekgoddess [2012-06-26 04:39:55 +0000 UTC]
good job on the webbing
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Laisana-and-Drew [2012-06-26 02:28:06 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome! ^^ Love the shading and the greenery :3 it looks so real!
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Alwogirl [2012-06-26 02:26:49 +0000 UTC]
I love the water! It looks so realistic!
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Alwogirl In reply to RogueDoodler [2012-06-26 02:39:20 +0000 UTC]
You did a great job on it! ^-^
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Alwogirl In reply to RogueDoodler [2012-06-26 02:44:40 +0000 UTC]
np! Keep up the practice and I bet you'll be a pro in no time ^^
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