Comments: 10
PioneeringAuthor [2016-02-05 14:07:10 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
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Anyway,
Overall, as I look at this piece I feel rather calm and relaxed. The position is very calming---he's laying down, smiling, and seeing him calm makes me feel calm.
The shading is simple, yet well done, and helps bring him to life. The tufts of fur on his chest are so fluffy I love it!
Things to improve on:
The tufts of fur do make him look furry, but all those straight lines make it look like he shaved or something, except on his chest. Next time don't make the edges so clean---add a bit more fluff here and there, or maybe shade it with tiny lines to give it a fur effect.
Same thing for the hair
Of course, he does look great as is!
I give your vision a 4 because I do not know what you were planning but it came out well,
the originality a 5 because I rarely see a pony in this position,
the technique a 4 because you are a great artist,
and the impact a 5 because this is seriously calming. I am not sure how else to say it but I find this very relaxing.
The pioneer with a heart for people and a thousand stories to tell ~+~
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Dead-Dawgz [2016-06-18 00:14:20 +0000 UTC]
I have no idea why but this is my favorite piece of your art uvu
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bear48 [2016-02-06 02:52:20 +0000 UTC]
very niceΒ
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cynicalsix [2016-02-04 06:38:04 +0000 UTC]
You say you're fine with critiques; yet you say "Your Art Your Rules"?
Unless if you mean that it's your rules about critiquing and not errors and I'm just dum
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cynicalsix In reply to Rosario-Red [2016-02-04 07:16:12 +0000 UTC]
Aah. I couldn't tell; since it was with all the critique stamps.
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ColdSnap777 [2016-02-04 06:15:02 +0000 UTC]
Honestly the butt looks fine at this angle. Wow that sounded worse then what I meant.
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Rosario-Red In reply to ColdSnap777 [2016-02-04 06:17:44 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad it looks okay, haha. cx
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