Comments: 39
Artemsis [2008-04-23 03:12:07 +0000 UTC]
I don't know why, but when I see this comic I think of an old Heinlein story in 'The Green Hills of Earth,' "-We Also Walk Dogs." But maybe its just me.
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InstantOatmeal13 [2007-08-21 00:30:42 +0000 UTC]
Very, very nice. I love the art, as always, and the religion bit at the end cracked me up!
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angichan [2007-08-18 01:59:30 +0000 UTC]
wow...extremely effective... I have a headache from the adds! and I got sucked into it...one page...ONE PAGE!!!
keep it up!
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avancna [2007-08-17 20:01:57 +0000 UTC]
When they say "The Interdroma: The Secret to any neurosis!", do they mean the secret to cure any neurosis, or the secret to cause any neurosis?
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MARoy [2007-08-17 18:27:17 +0000 UTC]
this reminds me of everytime i go somewhere, specially the internet ads everwhere and it annoys the hell outta me...it's like living breathing propagda u cant get rid of
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kitsuneko [2007-08-17 18:12:55 +0000 UTC]
hmm, panel 4: is there a way to make the background a little more... subtle? it's kinda too busy to the point that gwen is blending with all them lines. maybe thinner lines for the bg, somehow?
do you think it's too much if some more of the floating ads break the gutter space?
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Letdragon [2007-08-17 16:59:13 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this certainly must have taken you a lot of time. I don't think it needs much critique
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metalformer [2007-08-17 16:49:07 +0000 UTC]
The virtual nightmare is taking shape! Look good so far! making comics in black and white or gray scale is a monumental task because of the need to give life to the elements without the use of colors and effects. Being your first time it turned out very good.
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fall0ut4d2 [2007-08-17 13:58:30 +0000 UTC]
I like where this is going!
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Twinsnake-Coatl [2007-08-17 13:53:30 +0000 UTC]
Bombarded by pop up ads day and night... man, that would drive anyone out of their minds. And it's 40 pages! I can tell it's going to be a long and painful ordeal for that woman.
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AlexandreLancaster [2007-08-17 12:39:35 +0000 UTC]
Excellent work – but her hands are too small in the last panel. But I'm faving it anyway, it's very well done.
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Kartunero [2007-08-17 11:06:50 +0000 UTC]
Anong novel ni Herbert 'to?
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Kartunero In reply to rubendevela [2007-08-17 12:10:27 +0000 UTC]
Ah, ok
'di ko pa naiispatan yun ah
S'an meron?
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rubendevela In reply to Kartunero [2007-08-17 12:16:16 +0000 UTC]
The Worlds of Frank Herbert
anthology of short fiction
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Kartunero In reply to rubendevela [2007-08-17 12:18:18 +0000 UTC]
Oks, salamat
Dami nang re-release ng mga works ni Herbert
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philby [2007-08-17 09:44:00 +0000 UTC]
I think it's good. Seeing as you want crits though, I'll say that I'm not totally sure what's happened in the third panel. Can't see anything to crit other than that though.
What's the name of the font you've used?
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philby In reply to rubendevela [2007-08-17 14:30:25 +0000 UTC]
Meh, I quite like it. I think it's the same one =Endling uses too.
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rubendevela In reply to philby [2007-08-17 20:27:51 +0000 UTC]
My god, you're right.
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JeTkun [2007-08-17 09:21:16 +0000 UTC]
parang real-life pop ups! xD
kelangan mu dapat ng anti-pop-up-ad lotion para mawala sila xD
i lurv the details!! *A*
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rubendevela In reply to JeTkun [2007-08-17 09:51:21 +0000 UTC]
Hahahah Off Lotion firewall edition
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lateralsnowflake [2007-08-17 09:09:09 +0000 UTC]
Go go go! It's every bit as awesome as I imagined.
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Gideon020 [2007-08-17 07:53:17 +0000 UTC]
Nice, I can see the decent into madness already. What story is this adapted from though?
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