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SailorPhantom — Raoul-Phantom Broken Promise

Published: 2010-01-29 00:27:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1319; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 25
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Description My entry for TheRaoulDefenders contest, where Raoul is the Phantom.

About pic
I imagine Raoul to be much more sensitive and soft hearted. Very romantic, thus taking the role as the angel a little more seriously, like he wants to be hers. Concerning his disfigurement reveal, he's pretty much the same as Erik, only he broke down into tears first, then blew up in anger and back to tears and say something like "I wanted you to love me! Now you never will!" And grasping at her hand as he cried. I can't help thinking he'd be like the Charles Dance Phantom, if not similar.

I couldn't rid Raoul of his hair.

Scene
Soon after Christine's performance, Erik comes in. After watching Erik De Changy... ... *after some minutes of laughing* yeah, seeing Christine with her childhood friend and how happy she was, he became heartbroken, knowing that he loved her and it was only a matter of time before she fell in love with him as well. Once he left, he spoke with Christine.
"I must leave you now."

"What?" Christine spun around baffled by her angel's words. She looks all over the room as if it might help her find him. "Why do you say that?"

Free from the embarrassment, he started to cry and leaned his forehead on the two-way mirror. "You've broken your promise." A pause. Christine held her hands together, recalling when she had first heard her angel, along with the promise she made. "You are not to love any man." Silently he adds, "any man but me."
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Comments: 26

kimberry-t [2013-11-28 07:08:05 +0000 UTC]

Aww

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DarthxErik [2010-02-03 16:08:49 +0000 UTC]

Awwww! I rather like this, er, Charles Danceish version of Phantom with a sensitive Raouly twist... of course regular Erik to me is much more realistic. I'm guessing Raoulish Erik is more of an extrovert too. hmm. Interesting thoughts. Anyway, it's adorable and I just love it!

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SailorPhantom In reply to DarthxErik [2010-02-03 18:10:48 +0000 UTC]

Well his personality is more a rough idea of him. He'd be so much more emotional than Erik I think, thus making his temper more frightening when he does get mad.

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DarthxErik In reply to SailorPhantom [2010-02-12 15:40:41 +0000 UTC]

I agree! He'd be more of an extrovert, I'd say.

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SailorPhantom In reply to DarthxErik [2010-02-12 20:08:00 +0000 UTC]

I think so too.

I can't get the idea of making this into a AU parody phan phic. I even got a short summary written out.

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DarthxErik In reply to SailorPhantom [2010-02-15 03:01:34 +0000 UTC]

There you go!!

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SailorPhantom In reply to DarthxErik [2010-02-15 03:45:25 +0000 UTC]

But I got another phan phic wich needs updating... Oh wait, two... Eh, it's not like anyone was really reading that one anyway nor was it that good. Maybe I will do it.

I seem to do a lot of parodies. First I have one as Erik as a ghost, who is stuck with a fan girl. The other one is where their genders are switched and in modern times.

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hamsterlampshade [2010-01-30 22:46:34 +0000 UTC]

WIN! Don't get me wrong I love Erik but Raoul doesn't get enough love!

I just wanna hug him!!!

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SailorPhantom In reply to hamsterlampshade [2010-01-30 23:49:52 +0000 UTC]

Raoul needs more love. ^_^

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hamsterlampshade In reply to SailorPhantom [2010-01-30 23:56:22 +0000 UTC]

He does *Hugs Raoul*

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InvaderPhantomstar1 [2010-01-29 04:28:19 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAWWWwww raoul destler(O_o) is pure love the first thing i thought of when i saw him was the charels dance phantom, verry good job!

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SailorPhantom In reply to InvaderPhantomstar1 [2010-01-29 06:38:43 +0000 UTC]

Changing the names around is weird.
Charles Dance definitly had a hand in this. I love his version to peices!

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Jthegymnast [2010-01-29 03:53:15 +0000 UTC]

So adorable, love his mask adn hair I can actually sympathasize with him for once!

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SailorPhantom In reply to Jthegymnast [2010-01-29 06:24:46 +0000 UTC]

Aww, Raoul needs a hug and more love.

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Jthegymnast In reply to SailorPhantom [2010-01-29 13:05:52 +0000 UTC]

He does have a lot of haters...

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SailorPhantom In reply to Jthegymnast [2010-01-29 18:07:10 +0000 UTC]

And he's not a bad guy. I love book Raoul. While some movie Raoul's(Or Phillipe ) are terrible.

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Jthegymnast In reply to SailorPhantom [2010-01-29 18:12:43 +0000 UTC]

He really isn't, he's trying to do his best for Chris, save him from a psycho but he's just not portrayed well. (Oh jeez Dario Argento Phillipe was beyond words )

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SailorPhantom In reply to Jthegymnast [2010-01-29 21:39:46 +0000 UTC]

I know there's one I liked... but I can't remember which one. Maybe the black and white one. (I KNOW! O_O But Dance's Phillipe was definitly a fop. )

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Jthegymnast In reply to SailorPhantom [2010-01-30 00:31:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah I forgot about that Phillipe Yes quite foppish!

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PhantomAmber [2010-01-29 03:51:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow thats really good!! So romantic!!!!

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SailorPhantom In reply to PhantomAmber [2010-01-29 06:23:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. ^_^

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PhantomAmber In reply to SailorPhantom [2010-01-29 14:31:23 +0000 UTC]

No problem!!

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Artoveli [2010-01-29 03:03:29 +0000 UTC]

Phantom Raoul has a wonderful reaction. We can feel real sympathy for him and not feel at all guilty!

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SailorPhantom In reply to Artoveli [2010-01-29 06:23:16 +0000 UTC]

NAHAHAHAHAHA! Ahem, I mean, thank you. ^_^

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TheLightGuardian [2010-01-29 00:33:54 +0000 UTC]

Oh, that's sad. Awesome picture though!

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SailorPhantom In reply to TheLightGuardian [2010-01-29 00:35:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I may put up the sketches I did too.

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