Comments: 66
kushina2020 [2012-07-26 19:18:15 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god there are no words for how amazing this poem is! I'm absolutely in love with it! Move aside Raven by EAP this is now my favorite poem!
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AlecBell [2010-09-14 08:34:01 +0000 UTC]
Icily ironic, very effective!
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LadyMask [2010-09-13 19:50:51 +0000 UTC]
This is gorgeously written. I had to go through it twice to make sure I hadn't missed anything, and because I wanted to experience it again. Absolutely lovely and perfect and incredible.
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Panda-Vision [2010-09-13 05:55:57 +0000 UTC]
This is grand.
Potent.
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verticalness [2010-09-13 04:06:51 +0000 UTC]
a very strong ending.
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sumarlegur [2010-09-13 01:43:59 +0000 UTC]
oh, this is nice.
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DailyLitDeviations [2010-09-12 04:06:17 +0000 UTC]
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) and has been selected as our Pick of the Day. It is featured in a news article here: [link] and on our main page.
Keep writing and keep creating.
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moonh8sun [2010-07-19 05:29:50 +0000 UTC]
slick..
it read
like you could see it...
flowed nicely...
thanks for sharing,
j.
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Secrets-Of-Paranoia [2010-07-08 23:28:58 +0000 UTC]
Lovely work; A part of being gay so rarely talked about, that narrow-minded straight people would never understand.
The occasional temptation to throw away everything you love just to be 'normal,' and not be hated for who you are.
It never works, your 'beard' will never make you happy, never take your mind off of someone else, with different 'equipment,' a girl with a beautiful smile for girls, a boy just the same for boys.
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shuramiyaki [2010-06-08 00:40:03 +0000 UTC]
That was amazing. So amazing.
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satirically-so [2010-04-22 01:54:41 +0000 UTC]
I want this thing on a mural yesterday.
`M
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uselessmartyr [2010-04-20 19:26:11 +0000 UTC]
you write pretty things
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requiemforacookie [2010-04-20 16:33:07 +0000 UTC]
I love the way you love me, Romeo
but I long for the poisonous lips of Juliet
This should be internationally accepted as the new dictionary meaning for gay.
Thank you... I love your works.
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toxic-nebulae [2010-04-20 09:46:03 +0000 UTC]
<3 Beautiful.
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Lilgreenhorn [2010-04-20 04:08:41 +0000 UTC]
Compromise and be saved...or be true to yourself and die.
Wow... The beauty and strength of this piece blew me way.
The speaker exudes integrity.
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r-epertoire [2010-04-20 03:33:13 +0000 UTC]
Beautifully written and very powerful, I hardly take a lot of time to read through literature posts but you caught me with the first sentence and I had to finish reading!
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