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Sapph0 — Compromise of You
Published: 2010-04-19 18:59:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 2771; Favourites: 78; Downloads: 24
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Description Reproductively speaking you're my perfect match
and your suburban promises of
mediocrity and valium tempt the coward in me

easily, we could be this
typicality – prop me up like a cardboard cutout
and I'll keep my hair long for you

and I love the way you love Mark Twain, patriotically
but I'm more of a Virginia Woolf

and I love the way your large hands
and shoulders
make me look so socially archetypal
You're my perfect accessory, dear

Imagine: you could call me sweetheart
and I'll call you honey bear,
apathetically.

and I love the way you love James Joyce, academically
but I prefer Proust

and I will wear your ring, legally
and you can touch my shoulder
or hold my hand even in public

I am tempted by the compromise of you
the beauty of your conventional promise intoxicates me
you would pull me by my ring finger
up out of this ditch of persecuted minority

I love the way you love me, Romeo
but I long for the poisonous lips of Juliet

So I'll stand for the stoning
and cut my hair short
my mother would love you, dear
but I never will.
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Comments: 66

kushina2020 [2012-07-26 19:18:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god there are no words for how amazing this poem is! I'm absolutely in love with it! Move aside Raven by EAP this is now my favorite poem!

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loqutor [2010-09-16 05:13:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Just wow. That was so amazing. And it made me feel rather proud of my lit snobbery.

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Leona629 [2010-09-15 03:09:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh, so wonderful. Smacks you in the face, and strikes close to home.

Congrats on DLD's Pick of the Day.

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TheMaidenInBlack [2010-09-14 13:39:01 +0000 UTC]

Really, really fuckin' great. I love how you used words and expressions, truly. The ending also, it's amazing.

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AlecBell [2010-09-14 08:34:01 +0000 UTC]

Icily ironic, very effective!

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LadyMask [2010-09-13 19:50:51 +0000 UTC]

This is gorgeously written. I had to go through it twice to make sure I hadn't missed anything, and because I wanted to experience it again. Absolutely lovely and perfect and incredible.

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Panda-Vision [2010-09-13 05:55:57 +0000 UTC]

This is grand.
Potent.

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verticalness [2010-09-13 04:06:51 +0000 UTC]

a very strong ending.

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sumarlegur [2010-09-13 01:43:59 +0000 UTC]

oh, this is nice.

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DailyLitDeviations [2010-09-12 04:06:17 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) and has been selected as our Pick of the Day. It is featured in a news article here: [link] and on our main page.

Keep writing and keep creating.

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Sapph0 In reply to DailyLitDeviations [2010-09-13 22:44:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I am honored.

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DailyLitDeviations In reply to Sapph0 [2010-09-18 07:29:49 +0000 UTC]

It was our pleasure

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Shiron-Sue [2010-08-10 16:23:11 +0000 UTC]

What a beautiful poem, it flowed so very well

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Peanutbubble [2010-08-10 11:40:56 +0000 UTC]

gorgeous: concept, rythm, imagery...just gorgeous You write beautifully; a command of words, far beyond adequate.

ps: entirely unrelated note: Love the fear & loathing quote. Always makes me laugh to myself.

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moonh8sun [2010-07-19 05:29:50 +0000 UTC]

slick..

it read
like you could see it...

flowed nicely...

thanks for sharing,

j.

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Secrets-Of-Paranoia [2010-07-08 23:28:58 +0000 UTC]

Lovely work; A part of being gay so rarely talked about, that narrow-minded straight people would never understand.

The occasional temptation to throw away everything you love just to be 'normal,' and not be hated for who you are.

It never works, your 'beard' will never make you happy, never take your mind off of someone else, with different 'equipment,' a girl with a beautiful smile for girls, a boy just the same for boys.

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Swords-and-Bandages [2010-07-01 19:47:07 +0000 UTC]

A sincere salute for the courage to stand tall.

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shuramiyaki [2010-06-08 00:40:03 +0000 UTC]

That was amazing. So amazing.

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OmbroParanojo [2010-04-23 21:17:52 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful, i love it

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Sapph0 In reply to OmbroParanojo [2010-04-24 00:21:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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satirically-so [2010-04-22 01:54:41 +0000 UTC]

I want this thing on a mural yesterday.

`M

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Sapph0 In reply to satirically-so [2010-04-22 02:56:54 +0000 UTC]

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hell-on-a-stick [2010-04-21 14:24:03 +0000 UTC]

your honesty is alarming. all the better.

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Sapph0 In reply to hell-on-a-stick [2010-04-21 17:49:55 +0000 UTC]

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uselessmartyr [2010-04-20 19:26:11 +0000 UTC]

you write pretty things

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Sapph0 In reply to uselessmartyr [2010-04-20 23:03:53 +0000 UTC]

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Faythalie [2010-04-20 18:44:08 +0000 UTC]

Damn, damn, damn...I just simply love it!

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Sapph0 In reply to Faythalie [2010-04-20 23:04:01 +0000 UTC]

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requiemforacookie [2010-04-20 16:33:07 +0000 UTC]

I love the way you love me, Romeo
but I long for the poisonous lips of Juliet

This should be internationally accepted as the new dictionary meaning for gay.

Thank you... I love your works.

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Sapph0 In reply to requiemforacookie [2010-04-20 23:04:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Dannsir [2010-04-20 13:44:44 +0000 UTC]

Amazing! The true struggle for us is it not? Saftey or happiness should never be a question that people have to answer. I can relate and admire the view of this story yet I can also be empathetic towards the man with unrequited love.

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Sapph0 In reply to Dannsir [2010-04-20 14:40:44 +0000 UTC]

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hillarypwns [2010-04-20 12:45:12 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful

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Sapph0 In reply to hillarypwns [2010-04-20 13:22:19 +0000 UTC]

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girlguinea [2010-04-20 12:16:30 +0000 UTC]

That pulls hearts strings...

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Sapph0 In reply to girlguinea [2010-04-20 13:22:28 +0000 UTC]

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toxic-nebulae [2010-04-20 09:46:03 +0000 UTC]

<3 Beautiful.

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Sapph0 In reply to toxic-nebulae [2010-04-20 13:22:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Lilgreenhorn [2010-04-20 04:08:41 +0000 UTC]

Compromise and be saved...or be true to yourself and die.

Wow... The beauty and strength of this piece blew me way.

The speaker exudes integrity.

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Sapph0 In reply to Lilgreenhorn [2010-04-20 13:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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r-epertoire [2010-04-20 03:33:13 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully written and very powerful, I hardly take a lot of time to read through literature posts but you caught me with the first sentence and I had to finish reading!

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Sapph0 In reply to r-epertoire [2010-04-20 13:23:04 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you!

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phosphorene [2010-04-20 03:32:32 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely wonderful. Easy to relate to and very powerfully written.

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Sapph0 In reply to phosphorene [2010-04-20 13:23:12 +0000 UTC]

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colorfulexpressions [2010-04-20 02:19:04 +0000 UTC]

mmmmm. well done

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Sapph0 In reply to colorfulexpressions [2010-04-20 13:23:17 +0000 UTC]

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Revelations5-5 [2010-04-19 23:54:04 +0000 UTC]

A very powerful poece.
Very well done, only thing funny is that I think "valium" is actually spelled "vallium", though I could be wrong. a great poem!

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Sapph0 In reply to Revelations5-5 [2010-04-20 01:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, I looked it up on google and Wikipedia and the health dictionary have opposing viewpoints, haha XD Thanks for pointing that out.

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naveed14 [2010-04-19 23:30:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is awesome! I love it and it kind of... I don't know it's just awesome I'm not particularly articulate, as you may have noticed

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Sapph0 In reply to naveed14 [2010-04-20 01:58:09 +0000 UTC]

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