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MJMJR [2021-12-13 19:00:27 +0000 UTC]
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NGv2 [2015-01-12 15:25:32 +0000 UTC]
Overall
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Technique
Impact
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-Your overall presentation caught my eye immediately. The dark theme stays true to Resident Evil without seeming overdone or being a cliche'.
-Your line art is very clean. No stray lines- nicely done.
-I am incredibly impressed by your shading work. The background shading gives a real feeling of depth and lends itself well to the dark tones.
-The level of detail is excellent. Claire's face, especially. Her hair being affected by the rain, for example- good touch. The angel statue, though, really came out great. The face, the wings- all detailed beautifully. Again, very fitting for the Resident Evil world.
-My only criticism comes in the lettering. It's very clean and presented well, but there are a few grammatical and spelling errors.
Overall, without knowing the story you're telling, I'm very impressed and looking forward to more. Nice work e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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Shakahnna [2015-01-30 10:57:48 +0000 UTC]
Firstly the broken glass in the top and around the edges looks awesome. It's a really nice idea for the opening page, breaking through a window and introducing a story.
The rain effect on Claire is stunning, it actually looks like she is getting wet but not soaked to the skin. The boots in the rain as well. The way that the water is touching the rose and falling to the ground. It's really vivid and striking.
Only thing that is really a problem is maybe the spelling and grammar? Also the boxed off areas aren't quite clear. Where the Angels wing crossing from one box into another would be fine but I think I'd have a dark line between that panel and the top one since those blend in together. The Angels hands don't look quite right. The face though is wonderful and eye catching. Quite frightening looking, especially in a universe where monsters really do exist. The detail of the feathers on the angel wing are amazing.
Though I imagine it's far too late to be of any help but still I had wanted to tell you am looking forward to keeping reading. And one of the major perks of being late is being able to take in more of the story at once.
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sakurauchija [2015-01-01 21:42:14 +0000 UTC]
lo tienes en español?
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FayeTattoo [2014-12-26 21:29:48 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful as always!
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Sass-Haunted In reply to BloodRosesForAll [2014-12-24 10:19:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank You! I'm glad to hear that.
Anyway, I will fix those errors soon.
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Laineyfantasy [2014-12-15 11:50:26 +0000 UTC]
this is really really good! i love all the detail especially the Angel!
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Naoanastas [2014-12-08 14:43:53 +0000 UTC]
The coloring is fantastic .Very beautiful and impressive.I mean it.
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Sass-Haunted In reply to Naoanastas [2014-12-10 10:37:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank You! It's pleasure to hear that, especially from such talented person as you :>
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AlbertWeskersGhost [2014-12-06 19:07:24 +0000 UTC]
This is good. This is REALLY GOOD! No critique needed from me, Miss Sass.
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Sass-Haunted In reply to AlbertWeskersGhost [2014-12-07 00:14:06 +0000 UTC]
Hah! I'm pleased to hear that!
But critiques are always pretty useful. It helps a lot to develop Your art skills and notice mistakes (If You did some).
And That's a story why I asked for a critique. Dunno why, just needed to say that XD
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Sass-Haunted In reply to Sheenah [2014-12-02 12:51:13 +0000 UTC]
Aww! I'm so pleased to hear that!
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CharonA101 [2014-11-30 03:08:12 +0000 UTC]
Awesome art style.
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MJMJR [2014-11-27 18:05:08 +0000 UTC]
Your work is always impressive to me and I shouldn't be surprised by the details and textures you accomplish at this point but I am. This is fucking incredible! Seriously it's so moody, Gothic and beautiful. I feel like I am watching the opening scene to a great horror movie
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Sass-Haunted In reply to MJMJR [2014-12-02 16:15:15 +0000 UTC]
HAh same here.
You reminded me some funny situation about this comic.
After I finished this page, Me and My BF decided to watch Return of The Living Dead 2.
Opening scene was exactly the same as in my comic , including the fact that i never
have seen this before XD
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Sass-Haunted In reply to MJMJR [2014-12-02 17:50:58 +0000 UTC]
I completely loved return of the living dead 1.
Punk party at the graveyard. It was fucking priceless!
Second film wasn't that good but it was funny and nice one to watch.
3rd movie Was Great! I really loved this military atmosphere.
Also storyline with july took my heart away. Gothic Zombie Grrl FTW!
4th and 5th movie is complete crap to me. Worst from whole serie xD
I love Brain Dead. I will never forget when i was watching this first time with Donia.
BFF's + 2x6pack of beer + weed + Brain Dead = Real Brain Dead XD
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Sass-Haunted In reply to MJMJR [2014-12-03 20:23:30 +0000 UTC]
Exactly!
Well I like to watch all movies of concrete serie one by one.
I did so with Friday 13, Halloween, Nightmares On Elm Street so consequently i was watching return of the living dead in same way.
haha! Imagine that we were eating pizza during Brain Dead's dinner scene, while we were already stoned XD
This way of tripping is bad idea, i couldn't swallow a piece because my imagination was trolling me.
Imagine pizza with pieces of human face and try to eat this xD Terrifying
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Sass-Haunted In reply to RubyRed2121 [2014-11-27 13:43:35 +0000 UTC]
I'm so pleased to hear that My Friend!
Anyway, What Do You think About text clouds.
Are those sentences correct, are they building some kind of melancholic/sad mood, etc.
I just need to ask. I'm not the best one at writing things. You know, I'm painter. xD
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RubyRed2121 In reply to Sass-Haunted [2015-01-10 07:25:03 +0000 UTC]
oh shit
i think i'm bad with it too
i have the same problem when i wanna draw something like this but i never know how to illustrated dialogue
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Sass-Haunted In reply to Dutchydoll [2014-11-27 13:41:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm So glad You enjoy it!
Anyway,May I ask. What Do You think about text clouds and conception in general?
It's so important to me, because i don't come from English- Speaking country
and I just want to know did I made some mistakes, what i need to fix or i didn't.
Plus what kind of atmosphere this text builds?
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