Comments: 61
BloodRosesForAll [2014-12-21 19:33:54 +0000 UTC]
There's only the spelling errors, love. And they don't detract that much from the amazing artwork!
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IZINA015 [2014-12-11 22:12:10 +0000 UTC]
Uwielbiam styl twoich rysunków. Każdy kadr wygląda świetnie, angielski jest na dobrym poziomie, lecz mam tylko 1 ale.... Czemu cliffhanger? -,-
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Sass-Haunted In reply to IZINA015 [2014-12-17 09:37:17 +0000 UTC]
[Edit] Dostałam wyjaśnienie od Smoczej cóż to jest cliffhanger.
Tak więc, Komiks bd miał tak na oko 30 stron odejmując prolog.
Do urwań takich jak to musisz niestety przywyknąć, bo to istota rysowania komiksu.
Gdyby już 2 str byłoby wiadomo kto stoi za plecami Claire, to kontynuacja nie miałaby sensu.
Głównie, z racji na to że, niedopowiedzenia budzą największe zainteresowanie. :>
Mogę Ci zaspoilerować tyle, że następna strona bd miała podobne zakończenie.
Czegoś zaczniesz się domyślać, ale nie bd do końca wiedziała o co może chodzić XD
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IZINA015 In reply to Sass-Haunted [2014-12-23 21:11:24 +0000 UTC]
Spoko, jakoś to przeżyję XD
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Sass-Haunted In reply to IZINA015 [2014-12-12 16:47:30 +0000 UTC]
Chyba nie jarzę xD cliffhanger? O co kaman? XD
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Smocza In reply to Sass-Haunted [2014-12-19 00:08:10 +0000 UTC]
Jestem ostoją cierpliwości XD
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Sass-Haunted In reply to Smocza [2014-12-19 02:16:44 +0000 UTC]
duzo nie mam do roboty. chyba nawet teraz przy tym pogrzebie bo zasnac nie moge xD
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Blightfang [2014-12-08 17:28:52 +0000 UTC]
I absolutely love this. I even love the "The Crow" reference. ( IE. "It can't rain all the time.") 10/10. Just change the background in the speech bubbles and double-check any spelling errors or grammatical errors.
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Sass-Haunted In reply to Blightfang [2014-12-08 19:32:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank You!
Hah i just couldn't resist xD I felt inner need to quote something from the crow. XD
I'm glad You like it! Also I'm glad that You noticed some mistakes in sentences.
I think I would never notice it. You know I'm not from English-speaking country,
and at this point i did my best. I'm really not sure how to fix those mistakes.
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Blightfang In reply to Sass-Haunted [2014-12-13 13:35:07 +0000 UTC]
^_^ You did better than most English-speakers. XD <3
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AlbertWeskersGhost [2014-12-06 19:11:35 +0000 UTC]
Love the comic clouds, love the atmosphere, love the eye-appealing artwork you have demonstrated. I'd say I love the romanticism and sentimentality of the situation, but these are commonplace emotions I do not feel Bravo, madam.
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Sass-Haunted In reply to Sheenah [2014-12-02 12:52:55 +0000 UTC]
Thank You so much for opinion,
I just needed to pierce her ears XD She's biker after all, so it fits(I think XD)
I even thought about snake bites(lip piercing) but, Claire is Claire, she can't look like another Megan xD
So, I would be too much of iron on her face.
I know, Font is too small isn't it?
But You can take closer look, or even download this. Then reading shouldn't be a problem.
I tried it before, and it was fine XD
Anyway, Thanks for another opinion.
I was kinda confused when i was making text clouds.
Because I put a lot of work into background and any other elements.
Think, that i need to cover it with milky-white text cloud made my heart crying.
Artist's Pride, You know. XD
Help is always nice thing : )
I want some clouds to sound lyrical/poetic.
When I was writing text, i was reading a lot of Edgar's Allan Poe poems, and i really wanted to
do something of similar content, but it seems like i suck on this xD
I'm looking forward Your note.
Thanks again for taking Your time to comment it
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Sheenah In reply to Sass-Haunted [2014-12-09 02:39:21 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome
Yeah, it's fine like that
No, not the size, the background shouldn't be transparent. I wouldn't make it white, but maybe grey with some shades in it, but nothing to hide the text. I mean, it's not impossible to read, but it's not really easy either.
Yes, I understand you XD that's the problem when you do comics XD
Oooh okay, that gives it a nice style though, it goes with the artwork.
Sure, I'll put what you wrote and propose you my version. If there's something you don't understand or don't like, just tell me.
Welcome dear
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Sass-Haunted In reply to Sheenah [2014-12-09 14:26:34 +0000 UTC]
I will fix it, when i catch a while for it.
As i said, I would like to not to hide details in back ground, but there's always an alternative solution
like to submit page without clouds to stash, and link it beyond main artwork :>. I wonder why i didn't
thought about it earlier. XD
BTW: I read Your note, and I'm surprised. I thought that i made much more of grammar-syntax errors,
but it seems like those errors are only big and small letters.
And you're right. In polish grammar we write "Me, You, They...etc..." with big letter, even if it's in the middle of sentence
because it's considered as salutation. XD
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Sheenah In reply to Sass-Haunted [2015-02-15 20:00:49 +0000 UTC]
(sorry for the late reply)
Yeah, the main errors were that and from what you're telling me about polish grammar, I get it now XD
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Sass-Haunted In reply to irenei [2014-11-30 21:10:10 +0000 UTC]
Niezmiernie mnie cieszy, że złapałaś tego rodzaju odczucie, bo nie ukrywam własnie to miałam na celu.
Chciałam, aby prolog jak najbardziej odwoływał się do CV.
Dlatego też wybrałam taką scenerię i przyłożyłam się do tego od serca, aby faktycznie patrząc na strony
i czytając tekst można było to poczuć. Nawet przemknęło mi przez myśl czyby w opisie nie załączyć playlisty,
której wtedy słuchałam, wtedy to ciężko by było tego nie poczuć.
Jeśli chcesz to mogę ci podrzucić linki, ale ostrzegam jest to muza gotycka. : >
Która swoją drogą bardzo mi pomogła przy kolorowaniu i projektowaniu, i szczerze mówiąc nie wiem czy rezultat
byłby taki sam bez niej. XD
Z Dymkami mam różnie. Jeśli pokoloruje całą stronę od dechy do dechy to automatycznie serce mi pęka jak
muszę pokryć konkretny element mlecznobiałą chmurką z czarnym jak sadza tekstem.
Natomiast jeśli lenistwo weźmie górę to chmurki są białe. xD
O kontynuację sie martwić nie musisz. Myślę tylko kiedy ja te 30-40 stron narysuje XD
Coś się wykmini xD
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Sass-Haunted In reply to irenei [2015-01-07 12:52:16 +0000 UTC]
Zaczynąjac od tego czego słucham teraz przy tworzeniu 2 kolejnych stron to:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=F9v59Y… ;
Jesli chodzi o 3 poprzednie.
Cóż dużo do wysyłania nie bd miała, bo przy 2 pierwszych stronach manaiczyłam tą płytę w kółko.
store.1476cult.com/album/edgar…
Przy pierwszej str gł skrzypce grał kawałek "A circle is eternal",
natomiast przy 2 str "Illness environs""Death Environs" i "Little Love Voice "
Sadzę że jak sobie to odpalisz patrzac na ten komiks, to poczujesz tą muzykę w tych stronach XD
Jeśli mowa o 3 str. to tak:
Viva Death - Rigor Mortis Shake. (4 na liście płyta, utwór jest jakos w połowie listy)
www.vivadeath.com/audio-produc…
London after Midnight - Psycho Magnet
www.youtube.com/watch?v=ysNvPz…
Clan Of Xymox- Doubts
www.youtube.com/watch?v=6gHXkW…
Bay Laurel - Thoughts (A reaczej zapętlona końćówka utworu)
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Sass-Haunted In reply to irenei [2015-01-08 13:13:56 +0000 UTC]
Hah! To zajebiscie , że ci sie podobają XD
Swoja drogą nawet nie spytałam jakiej muzyki zwykle słuchasz xD
U mnie jest to rożnie, zalezy co i do czego ma mnie zainspirować, ale ja uderzam raczej w rockowe lub mroczne klimaty. 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Sass-Haunted In reply to irenei [2015-06-25 09:45:20 +0000 UTC]
No to zupełnie jak ja, choć ja nie wychodzę po za krąg "subcultural" XD
Wszystko od klimatów the doors po darcie ryja jak stare lacrimas profundere czy make them suffer xD
Po drodze przebiegając przez rockn' rolla itd XD
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Sass-Haunted In reply to irenei [2015-06-25 12:00:42 +0000 UTC]
Ja mam tak samo nawet z poedynczymi utworami. xD
Jak mi sie jakis wkreci to potrafie go zapetlac w foobarze przez tydzien non stop xD
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CharonA101 [2014-11-30 18:31:08 +0000 UTC]
Great atomsphereic comic ,this could be a graphic novel.
Your very talent artist.
I Like Claire 's look too.
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Sass-Haunted In reply to CharonA101 [2014-11-30 20:56:55 +0000 UTC]
Aww Thanks! I'm glad You like it!
It's hard to tell is it more graphic novel or just a comic book.
It's b-class universe, so it can't be treated very serious but dialogues
and other text clouds may sound rather like from novel than comic book.
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MJMJR [2014-11-27 18:09:31 +0000 UTC]
I love the pacing, your story is very cool so far and emotional. I am blown away by the details and the textures you created. The wet stone, roses, candles, rain, leaves... the lighting is also very haunting and beautiful. I especially love how you framed it in broken glass
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Sass-Haunted In reply to MJMJR [2014-11-28 14:34:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank You so much for opinion!
In true I could do this even more detailed, but it would take me too much time.
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Sass-Haunted In reply to MJMJR [2014-11-29 11:57:09 +0000 UTC]
Exactly.
I still think that there's a lot of details with comparison to any other comic, that i have read before.
But, well. I don't have a deadline, so i can draw this comic as long as i want to XD
Making even more details would turn this into illustration XD
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Sass-Haunted In reply to MJMJR [2014-12-03 20:23:58 +0000 UTC]
That's what i love most about it : >
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