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Scarlets-Garden — A Midnight Breeze

Published: 2010-06-23 21:17:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 383; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description I HAVE WRITTEN AN EPIC POEM TO GO WITH MY ART

~Love is like a midnight breeze~
~It comes no shadow, leaves no trace~
~It makes me sorrowful, and makes me sad~
~And it feels as if hate is pulling at my heart~
~It forced me to walk, on, on, on, following the wind~
~And chase, chase, chase, after your memory~
~It was I who was stupid, it was I who was empty~
~It was I who made me and you world war II~
~Love is a wind, you are a wind~
~And winds wander~



I THINK THAT IS QUITE DEEP.
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Comments: 6

Van-Golliaz [2010-09-03 13:46:03 +0000 UTC]

She's beautiful!!

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Scarlets-Garden In reply to Van-Golliaz [2010-09-03 13:56:25 +0000 UTC]

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HiroZev [2010-06-25 18:23:08 +0000 UTC]

Getting better. ^^

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dupyo [2010-06-23 21:20:59 +0000 UTC]

Realy like the emphasis on the eyes and lips
AND WHY YES, your poem can be put into song.

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Scarlets-Garden In reply to dupyo [2010-06-23 21:26:40 +0000 UTC]

ya, I like how I rhymed me and you with world war II

that's probably never been done before

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dupyo In reply to Scarlets-Garden [2010-06-23 21:38:18 +0000 UTC]

16 out of 10.

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