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Teen RoomDesigned by Şemsa Bilge' 2009.
Update : 05.06.2009
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Oh, where in the world did you find the Heavy 3d model?
*Must Have*
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şemsa çok güzel render eline sağlık renkler çok hoş
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cool! love that game XD i always end up not being myself while playing it.
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*Twitch* Do my room..I been tryin to figure it out for years now.
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Dear Semsa,
Instead of just saying "nice work" I'll make some critiques which might help much more.
- Blanket intersects with the bed. See the closer end of it, intersects with green part of bed.
- There is a general anti-aliasing problem, most apparent on the green drawers just under the WALL-E poster. I suggest using adaptive DMC image sampler with Area anti-aliasing filter. By default its size is 1.5. Increase as necessary. But see the results with Adaptive DMC first.
- Scene is lacking a support light. It seems that the scene solely depend on the light from windows. I recommend placing V-Ray light just behind the camera. Make it as big as the wall behind it and adjust the intensity to balance the light in the scene. So you wont have very dark areas.
- The floor is missing reflections. It won't be necessarily a very bright reflection but in my opinion it was supposed to have some blurred reflections.
- Give some little space under the bed so it wont look like it's penetrating the floor.
- Pillow totally sucked. Re-model it. Sorry...
Oktay
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thank you for the comment Oktay
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psikolojimi bozduğun için teşekkür ediyorum
çok güzel, harika
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Very good scene, and smooth render...Well Done
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The stairs/storage is a really clever idea, nice work.
Cool colours as well!
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the whole concept is awesome, though the green is really strong. otherwise great work
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