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ShadowBuuProductions — Under this hat the world seems so dark.

Published: 2013-04-10 15:27:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 712; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 4
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Description Some more pop-culture poetry. i do love it so should really start actively trying to write some instead of waiting till one pops fully formed into my head midway through a work shift
I was thinking about Harry's thoughts while under the sorting hat, and thinking that he wouldn't be the only one conflicted; where their personal choice and longings influenced where they were placed. So of course Neville came to mind, the unchosen chosen one and for me this poem is all about a scared little boy sitting on that stool, a hat too big for him falling over his eyes, leaving him in a world of darkness where all he can think about is his parents and how unworthy he feels to even be at Hogwarts.
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skywingss [2015-02-19 00:41:38 +0000 UTC]

You're a great writer! Love this!

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SongMina [2013-07-28 04:23:11 +0000 UTC]

First i was thinking that he should have gone to hufffffle puff and that he is in gryffindore because Jk's easier to write about him but i was wrong, and dats Why he is awesome!

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silverunicorn24 [2013-06-15 20:34:35 +0000 UTC]

A true Gryffindor.

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silverunicorn24 [2013-06-15 20:31:14 +0000 UTC]

When i got on DA today, i didn't expect to start crying. This is powerful.

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ShadowBuuProductions In reply to silverunicorn24 [2013-06-20 03:39:01 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou so much! no matter how many times I re-read it, it still gets to me as well.
I'm happy I could give you Neville feels.

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silverunicorn24 In reply to ShadowBuuProductions [2013-06-21 02:37:45 +0000 UTC]

Neville feels Are the best feels

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thumper15bambi [2013-04-25 21:43:43 +0000 UTC]

that made me tear up. great job

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ShadowBuuProductions In reply to thumper15bambi [2013-04-27 04:35:13 +0000 UTC]

thankyou so much! is it weird that it still makes me get a bit emotional re-reading it now? There's just such pain and doubt in Neville, pain that it takes so long for us to fully appreciate, and even then we never see it that clearly.

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thumper15bambi In reply to ShadowBuuProductions [2013-05-26 22:42:44 +0000 UTC]

very true

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improbablesage [2013-04-20 20:02:52 +0000 UTC]

This is powerful

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hades19978 [2013-04-11 00:27:22 +0000 UTC]

Neville definitely is a true Gryffindor. So many feels!

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ShadowBuuProductions In reply to hades19978 [2013-04-11 02:20:13 +0000 UTC]

also, all your avatar tags

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hades19978 In reply to ShadowBuuProductions [2013-04-11 21:17:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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ShadowBuuProductions In reply to hades19978 [2013-04-11 02:19:14 +0000 UTC]

he will always be the true chosen one for me, the unchosen chosen one.

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hades19978 In reply to ShadowBuuProductions [2013-04-11 21:17:08 +0000 UTC]

He may have not been chosen to beat Voldemort, but he, indirectly, was chosen to lead Dumbledore's Army against his forces. So in a way, he was still chosen

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ArtemisSage [2013-04-10 19:37:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is awesome.
Neville has to be one of the best, because he came so far in those 7 (?) years.
A true Gryffindor.

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ShadowBuuProductions In reply to ArtemisSage [2013-04-11 02:22:33 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot, i've gotten so much good feedback over fandom-poetry. it is helpful when you can work with characters already so fully formed and intricate
Neville is my true hero of the books.

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ArtemisSage In reply to ShadowBuuProductions [2013-04-11 18:25:21 +0000 UTC]

Yes. Mine to.

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Fruitoxique [2013-04-10 18:31:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow... so much emotions :')
I love Neville, he's a pure Gryffindor.

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ShadowBuuProductions In reply to Fruitoxique [2013-04-11 02:23:46 +0000 UTC]

A true Gryffindor through and through thankyou

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