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Her Pokemon OC with her pokemon team. I tried anime style for once, with help from Uk-Kappa. Its alot easier and also alot more fun than i thought! Hope to do more in this style.

I love all the colours! Yaaay colour!

Pokemon (c) Nintendo
Jade Lucas (c) UK-Kappa
Art (c) shazy
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Comments: 48

uk-kappa [2011-04-09 22:06:04 +0000 UTC]

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-puts critique hat on-
First off, you captured all of their individual personalities very well. Each character is displaying a different emotion and pose which effectively shows off what a diverse bunch they are. Jade's pose works very well as it's so dynamic, and the fact some characters are still whilst others are in motion is a nice contrast. One fault I see is the fact the three characters with the most movement (Jade, Kecleon and Porygon-Z) are all to one side of the piece which is very unbalanced. It would work better if the motion was distributed throughout the entire piece. Crobat's position in the picture and pose works very well as a frame.
You have distributed colour well throughout most of the picture though. The pink characters and green characters have enough spacing in between them as to not clash. There is a bit of clashing going on with the greys all clumped together in a line in the middle to top-left of the image, but it's not too distracting to the eye.
The lines in the background work well as they space out the green so Politoed and Kecleon don't merge with the background. I like how the background holds a lot of detail yet retains simplicity so does not distract the viewer from the main focus of the picture.
Your anime shading is quite good. There is a bit of confusion with the light source however. Sometimes your highlights are on the left whilst sometimes they're on the right; the same with the shading. Your line-arting is well done and no matter what you say, it's very smooth. I recommend using more anime reference pictures as you draw to capture the correct proportions of the Pokemon as this will help solidify the anime style you're aiming towards.
Overall however a very bright and cheerful piece. I'm really pleased with how it came out! c: Thanks a lot.

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shazy In reply to uk-kappa [2011-04-09 22:15:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for critique!! Its totally fair and i'm glad you took the time to write it!!

First, you're very welcome, it was fun to make and i'm glad i got the personalities of the characters right for you. Jades pose was awkward but i'm trying to experiment with more poses so i gave it a go. Glad you think it looks somewhat okay XD

As for the unbalanced-ness, i completely did not think about that when i drew it out, the whole greys-grouped-together thing, so sorry bout that. I forget colour when i'm sketching stuff. Also, i disregarded the light source too. Again, sorry, i'll know to remember that for next time >< Need to work on lighting anyway.

The original idea was to have the team sort of in motion to the right of the image, which is why kecleon, porygon z and jade are seemingly moving that way. The slowking is a bit..well...slow XD so hes getting left behind a bit, and politoed is blissfully ignorant so he'll catch up when he realises whats happening. Megneton is hard to show moving...fail there. And crobat is being uncertain about it. I can see why you would read it as some motionless and some moving, because that technically is the case, but there was a reason behind it. I need to get better at drawing what i have planned out in my head, ha ha

thanks again!

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DantemaruXXX [2012-04-04 08:51:13 +0000 UTC]

oohh... well seeing this i wanna draw pokemon tooo !!! !!! only one problem... I not really good at drawing... Anyway really nice art work !!!

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shazy In reply to DantemaruXXX [2012-04-04 16:41:10 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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ravenbird34 [2011-05-20 18:43:11 +0000 UTC]

can u draw my pokemon trainer

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shazy In reply to ravenbird34 [2011-05-20 18:50:51 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, requests are closed ><

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firehorse6 [2011-04-15 19:27:55 +0000 UTC]

so cuuuuuuute!!! love it! X3

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shazy In reply to firehorse6 [2011-04-17 01:02:43 +0000 UTC]

^^ thanks!

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firehorse6 In reply to shazy [2011-04-17 13:28:17 +0000 UTC]

np!

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Tropicanine [2011-04-14 13:09:57 +0000 UTC]

i love it it realyl looks so like pokemon style, i cant do that at all .-.

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shazy In reply to Tropicanine [2011-04-15 12:51:26 +0000 UTC]

Its hard >< i got my friend to help me ha ha

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LumiLisko [2011-04-11 09:51:35 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha! I love this picture!

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shazy In reply to LumiLisko [2011-04-11 13:26:18 +0000 UTC]

XD thanks

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LumiLisko In reply to shazy [2011-04-11 19:05:05 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Sir-Kitty [2011-04-11 09:34:02 +0000 UTC]

Awesome. |:D But I'm sure you already know that. |3

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shazy In reply to Sir-Kitty [2011-04-11 13:26:25 +0000 UTC]

aww *blush*

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SIeepyBears [2011-04-10 13:49:52 +0000 UTC]

so cute!

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shazy In reply to SIeepyBears [2011-04-10 14:45:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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SIeepyBears In reply to shazy [2011-04-15 14:29:10 +0000 UTC]

welcome!!

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mwto [2011-04-10 13:10:26 +0000 UTC]

This is good. Very nice

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shazy In reply to mwto [2011-04-10 14:45:27 +0000 UTC]

^^thanks

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mwto In reply to shazy [2011-04-10 16:31:07 +0000 UTC]

np

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Lycorisu [2011-04-10 12:21:51 +0000 UTC]

That Kecleon looks so smug ;D "I'm... BLENDING IN with the colour scheme" ohohoho.
Nice work Shaz ^_^

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shazy In reply to Lycorisu [2011-04-10 13:09:47 +0000 UTC]

XD silly kecleon!
thanks!

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ManaDarkMagicianGirl [2011-04-10 01:18:58 +0000 UTC]

WOW! Aww dorables XDXDDDD!! <3

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shazy In reply to ManaDarkMagicianGirl [2011-04-10 01:26:34 +0000 UTC]

XD thankies^^

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ZapdosRockz [2011-04-09 22:13:35 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!

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shazy In reply to ZapdosRockz [2011-04-09 22:21:55 +0000 UTC]

hehe^^

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ZapdosRockz In reply to shazy [2011-04-10 02:05:26 +0000 UTC]

Hehe

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MiatheRabbit [2011-04-09 22:07:28 +0000 UTC]

Crobat looks so sad xD

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shazy In reply to MiatheRabbit [2011-04-09 22:22:02 +0000 UTC]

XD hes just confused

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kirana44 [2011-04-09 22:06:16 +0000 UTC]

The Magneton looks left out...it's not pink or green.

Awesome pic, and I have to say, you do anime style really well!

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shazy In reply to kirana44 [2011-04-09 22:22:14 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, poor phil the magneton...
thanks!

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kirana44 In reply to shazy [2011-04-15 21:12:31 +0000 UTC]

No prob!

Magneton is one of those pokemon I never managed to evolve, because I couldn't be bothered. Sorry, Phil.

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shazy In reply to kirana44 [2011-04-17 14:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Ah, my mate jade managed to evolve her magneton with my help, magnezone has such an awesome cry XD

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kirana44 In reply to shazy [2011-04-27 22:19:32 +0000 UTC]

...I'm sorry, but Magnezone just sounds BAD.

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shazy In reply to kirana44 [2011-04-28 15:28:55 +0000 UTC]

looove it

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kirana44 In reply to shazy [2011-05-06 19:47:50 +0000 UTC]

I just prefer the original 250, myself. Okay, make that 350. Because Sapphire was the last awesome game they did (the newer ones, I can't seem to make myself play for some reason).

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uk-kappa [2011-04-09 21:50:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for drawing this, it's really great. x3 Half the Anorith pieces are cut out and sat on my desk hehe.
You're inspiring me to draw her out now. x-x; I don't give my OCs enough love.

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shazy In reply to uk-kappa [2011-04-09 22:22:32 +0000 UTC]

You're totally welcome! Yay anorith pwushiiiieeee
Glad i could inspire you too^^

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legarsraide [2011-04-09 21:49:06 +0000 UTC]

gosh, it look like a game screen shoot. I'm speechless Shazy , i didn't know you drew so well pokemon stuff. Freaking epic .

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shazy In reply to legarsraide [2011-04-09 22:25:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!!!!

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legarsraide In reply to shazy [2011-04-09 22:30:56 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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october-sparrow [2011-04-09 21:36:19 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh slowking!

Love this shaz, you're awesome c:

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shazy In reply to october-sparrow [2011-04-09 21:44:56 +0000 UTC]

XD thanks^^
damn slowkings

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skybluespirit [2011-04-09 21:34:49 +0000 UTC]

I've still not got Sai! Gah! Anyway, I think I'm going to have to ninja your brain and have your skillz (especially your colouring abilities!)

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shazy In reply to skybluespirit [2011-04-09 21:45:20 +0000 UTC]

XD Shuddup you!! You and your digi skills put mine to shame!
yes...get SAI...NOW

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skybluespirit In reply to shazy [2011-04-10 16:11:08 +0000 UTC]

Yes sir! *bows repeatedly*

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