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Published: 2010-07-03 05:23:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 3738; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 33
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Done in IscribbleCAN A REG PUPLISH IT FOR ME PLEEEEASE!? i really need to add the segments to my account there. i need the blur too so bad TT_TT
its a private room if you're a reg give me your username and i'll invite you to the room TT~TT
i worked really hard on this :\
anyways... TEASER! >:'D
Critique?
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This is FANTASTIC! The shading is so awesome and the Background is so detailed~ 
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Thank you ^w^;
it took a full day to do it but i gots it dones x3 the easiest part was actually the BG, it had its own layer away from the characters and i could colour under them easily, it basically just started out as massive deformed colour blobs, as for the characters...Yes, they took some time and patience.
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Woah, that's awesome! Nothing to critique on.
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xD there is always something to critique or flame, honestly i dont like how that glow turned out with out my precious guassian blur too
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Looks really impressive
I like how it came out, nice work
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This is... A-awesome dude. Holy crap its just ... I cant comment it.
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Well Done! I can't believe this was done in iscribble! Again I apologize for misreading your earlier post.
Critique:
Possibly add a few rocks in the background add more forest to the scene. Earlier you mentioned that Tails was wearing a bandanna instead of a scarf. Maybe add a knot on the side to give more detail to the bandanna. Other than those, a job well done!
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thats fine and thanks
and yea, i was getting tired, the drawing BG went from a few colour blobs into recognizable things formed by scribbles, i was just too lazy to add them in xD
and the knot in the bandanna is out of sight due to my preferred perspective
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i saw your earlier picture of the 'new tails', but i meant to ask: why are his eyes red? if you have a reason for this in the future, that's good. just wonderin'.
that critique button is too scary for me, and someone else mentioned almost everything i wanted to say... so yeah...
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because he's evil >:3 and there is an explanation that is logical and fitting for another place and another time
xD i find the critique button intimidating too, especially when you're trying to find something wrong or off, for that dreaded second part of it. its even worse when trying to critique someone you think is freaking perfect xD
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m. ok, works for me!
YES!!! it's such a scary little button!
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Tails' red scarf? Black gloves?
--He's a FOX?!
I like your design, Shiro. >:3
And, seriously?! This is iScribble?!?!?!
HOLY CRAPOLA! This is incredible!
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your character has purple streaks on the gloves, Tails doesn't, you're aren't the only character with Black gloves, i've been putting Red scarves around his neck when ever i attempt to re-design him since before i knew you, and this time its a bandanna, and i cant change his species XP he wouldn't be tails so XP
thank you, yes, it is iscribble thankyou xD
SOON I SHALL BE A REG! MWHAHAHA!
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*gasp* what will happen next? Only knows. Great job!!!
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>:3 ***** ****** **** ** *** ***** ****** ***!!! ^^ **** ** ****** *** **** *** **** ***** **** ****, ***** **** THE END! XD!!
thanks
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on iscribble? wow, amazing job! (: alright, now for some critique..
uhm. more grass? you can see sonic's arm through the grass a bit too much. maybe define the birds in the sky a little more. (are those birds? or branches?) great shading.. uhm. yup, generally no complaints. maybe just increase the glow from the jewel and make it hit the fur a bit more? or at least be more noticeable? 
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yup :3 and thank you
as for the critique
-the grass is really tall and you're supposed to see sonic's arm a bit
-those are birds, and i thought i had defined them enough, it really is a small work space
-and the glow would be hard to do because it would mean i would have to carefully lighten the BG behind it because there are no opacity tools or blur tools for a non-reg
-its REALLY hard to create a glow effect with only a pen tool and a colour pallet :\
-i noticed nothing wrong with the thickness of his arms
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