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Coal morphs into trees... but I dunno why...
I like the way the bg acme out however this dialoge seems a little dry to me...
meh this wasn't the best part of the script
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XD i just noticed something
the location you put the eyes makes the tree look evil
XD
EVIL TREE!!!!!!!!
lol
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It's gonna eat JOO! lol
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ooh clever. blending into the tree, like the wolf in Balto 2
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WHAT is going on? I thought they were just fighting! you cannot cram the plot down the reader's throat in less than 19 pages, it has made NO fucking sense to me at all so far.
and seriously, come up with an explanation to things before you start making characters morph into trees.
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Hmm, this is pretty good, but something looks odd with Articus' face in the first panel. Almost too sharp.
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wow! Awesome Shadow! 
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Ha thanks 
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aww.. 
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Hmmm.... Hate to say it, but Articus looks a tad off in both his panel here. Allow me to explain why I think so. I think it might be something with the angle and thorough roundness of the muzzle from the front. I'm not very good at frontal shots myself, however.
In the other, his muzzle seems a bit shorter than usual and it gives an odd appearence to it.
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I agree! He looked so bad in this page XD! I actually had a different set up for the page that looked a lot better but because it looked sort of like the BBA cover (like 0.01% like it ), I couldn't use it cause the bitchy little Kay Fedewa fans would get on my ass about drawing a wolf. So I had to go with this *sigh* I think I'm gonna redo this page in all honesty. I don't care what the BBA fans have to say anymore. Not after I thought about quitting.
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Don't let the rabid BBA fans bug ya. I'm actually a fan myself and know a bunch of them. There's only a really intense group that attack. Most are pretty nice people.
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yeah it's just those extreamist that I mean. many of my fans are also BBA fans i just hate it whan they try to compair the two. WS is on a COMPLEATY different scale then BBA. Maybe it just because I'm starting off with a war.
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LIFE!!!
Great page!! I wonder: did you allready wrote down the story?
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yeah well not in perfect detail but the next 50 pages or so are wiritten.
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hm, at least you have something written, unlike me...
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alas, it has been too soon since we last spoke. tell me, why does articus look like a deformed head case with broken teeth in your first panel? and what's worse is you posted a sketch of it? you really don't know the degree of lousyness your artwork entails. i'd also like to mention the last panel of coal. she looks emaciated amateur drawing with naurato jelled up fur. tell me friend, why do you insist upon degrading your already full of it and typical characters?
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alright! another page - congrats and thank you. love those scaryass eyes articus has, you really have improved on those this year.
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yeah I liked the cat eye design better then his original
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first comment: HOLY...POOS THAT TREE IS EEEEVVVILLL!?
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I wonder... if an evil tree falls...and there's nobody around...does it laugh evily?
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omg that is so cool! at first i didn't understand y the tree had big glaring red eyes but then that was totally cool how she appeared like the chesire cat!
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God I love Coal. I love the effects on the the tree. She looks so cool coming out of it. But the last line was like "O.O OMG" Hope I made sense and I wasn't just rambling.
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Looks great ofcourse we know
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lol i hope i can get more put up before summer's over 
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I'm weak for bad guys and Coal is just to awesome!
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Ha she's a crowd favorite along with Tanterus.
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XD yay!!!!!!! XD love this page!!! and first comment!
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