Comments: 19
queenofeagles [2014-09-14 19:39:22 +0000 UTC]
nice story! well, maybe nice is not the right word... poor miranda... but you wrote it so well, the build up of the tension here is really good! love it!
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SimplyWolves In reply to queenofeagles [2014-09-16 22:01:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!!
Let's just say that Miranda is in a better place In the man’s pocket
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sevenofeleven [2014-05-28 23:37:31 +0000 UTC]
Good stuff.
Heads up Miranda!
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SimplyWolves In reply to sevenofeleven [2014-05-28 23:48:31 +0000 UTC]
yay! thank you
but yea I think Miranda is done for. . . RIP Miranda
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sevenofeleven In reply to SimplyWolves [2014-05-29 01:46:33 +0000 UTC]
I had to hang around and ssssee whatsss the nasssty man gotsss in hissss pocketssss.
Chillax Smeagol!
Yeah, like what he said.
I had know what was going to happen next.
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SimplyWolves In reply to sevenofeleven [2014-05-29 02:09:27 +0000 UTC]
So did you and Smeagol like the ending. It is a continuous loop *evil laugh* never ending!
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sevenofeleven In reply to SimplyWolves [2014-05-29 23:53:58 +0000 UTC]
Yep.
Now along with "Do you want to see something scary" or
"Guess what is in my pockets", I know to stay away from these questions.
I know nothing good will come of it.
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SimplyWolves In reply to sevenofeleven [2014-05-30 00:11:51 +0000 UTC]
that right there good sir (ma'am?) is a life lesson everyone should go by
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vamplvr101 [2014-04-21 21:41:10 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. I like this. It's dark, but good.
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SimplyWolves In reply to vamplvr101 [2014-04-21 21:59:04 +0000 UTC]
aww thank you, most of my stories lean more towards dark that light happy stuff lol
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vamplvr101 In reply to SimplyWolves [2014-04-21 22:44:11 +0000 UTC]
lol I like it. Ever tried to write creepypasta?
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SimplyWolves In reply to vamplvr101 [2014-04-22 12:42:15 +0000 UTC]
I have in my head, but never on paper
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vamplvr101 In reply to SimplyWolves [2014-04-22 23:38:25 +0000 UTC]
Me too. I have so many ideas in my head but I hardly ever write them on paper.
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SimplyWolves In reply to vamplvr101 [2014-04-22 23:41:21 +0000 UTC]
and then when I d write it down on paper, it never seems as good as it was in my head
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