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Part 28 - THE END

Previous: [link]
First: [link]

Varekai: [link]
Team Slow Melody: [link]
Collaboration

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They led the residents of Tao through the tunnel, and out into the wider cavern, navigating around the rocks that had been scattered when Paulie had torn down the wall Pyralis had built up. He kept a slow pace, so as not to put any strain on Palette, and also so that those that followed the two Merchant teams were able to keep up. Looking back from time to time, to make sure they weren’t too far ahead of anyone, all of them noticed that many pokemon were exhausted like they themselves were, and there were quite a few sporting injuries too.

Tao Village, as a whole, had been hit hard by Kyurem’s unexpected rampage, and yet, here they all were, Rogues, Rescuers and Merchants alike, helping one another out, watching each other’s backs, putting aside rivalries and doubts, so that everyone could pull through together.

After a time, they found themselves talking with other pokemon – the ones that were right behind them. Paulie, of course, didn’t get much of a chance to speak to them, as he was concentrating on helping Palette along without stumbling. Persia stayed beside him, but Penumbra, Meranda and Embory drifted a little farther back, mingling with others, making new friends. The shellos found a purrloin and a gothorita that had a sense of humour to equal hers, and spent some of the journey telling jokes to Lucian and Abigail, and hearing some of theirs as well. Embory hovered nearby, listening and laughing.

Penumbra had hitched a ride on someone else’s head now. She was perched happily upon the head of a carvnivine, chatting away animatedly, not showing any signs of discomfort as to the height. She talked with Eppie’s companions too, or at least with Splint. For Alec, she sang a sweet little melody, impressed by the way that the young timburr was keeping up without any complaint.

Finally, the cavern became lighter as they neared the end, and the fresh cool wind that blew into the Merchants faces uplifted their spirits. They stopped, and took a moment to look at one another, with weary smiles and tired eyes. Meranda smiled one last time at the two rogues she’d been talking with, before returning to Persia’s side, Embory flitting along next to her. Penumbra jumped off the carnivine’s head, saying goodbye to the three of them. Shroomsworth approached and dipped his head in Varekai and Slow Melody’s direction.

“You’ve done well, all of you. My apologies for what I said earlier in Tao. You have all proved yourselves capable, and I am proud to have you among our ranks.” He smiled warmly. “Rest now, the five of you. You must be exhausted. Have no fear, I will keep an eye on things. We are going to wait until the blizzard dies down a bit before we leave the shelter of the cave. We will not leave without you.” And with this, the breloom withdrew, leaving Slow Melody and Varekai to settle down.

“Hey, s’there room for one more?” Penumbra and Embory turned at the voice, and were delighted to find Jasper slinking up to them, his mismatched eyes bright and alert.

“Yes, of course, darling!” Embory grinned down at him.

“There’s always room for a friend, Jazz,” Penumbra chirped happily.

And so the Slow Melody and Varekai settled down, and nearby, Team KC and Team Psych-Out did likewise. Paulie folded his legs beneath him, and nearby, Persia sank to the ground. Penumbra perched on top of Paulie, fluffing up her wings before lowering her head and closing her eyes. Persia and Embory flopped down beside one another, and Jasper curled up next to Paulie.

And there came a figure making his way through the crowd, followed by another. Their very presence alone seemed to quieten the large gathering of pokemon, and comfort them in some way. Without a word, the tropius and the sawsbuck settled down near the six sleeping pokemon, watching over them with vigilance. The tropius turned to the sawsbuck, with a sweet, kindly smile on her lips.

“They’ve done so well, have they not?”

“Yes,” the Sentinel swept his eyes over the sleeping figures. “They have done very well indeed, Miss Holly.” He turned his gaze onto the tropius. “If you are tired as well, feel free to rest. I will keep watch over them.” And so he did. The Sentinel watched over them all, not closing his own eyes, not welcoming sleep himself. And he stayed for as long as he was needed, rising and heading out just before the stantler and his friend woke. He turned back only once, before he disappeared, to murmur something under his breath.

“Paulie, I am so proud of you, and your friends. You, my son, are stronger than you know.”

And then he was gone, accompanied by shadows. Outside, a break in the cloud cover revealed dim stars that eventually disappeared as the sky lightened. A single ray of light shone from the horizon, glinting off the freshly fallen snow. It was dawn.

A new day had come.

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YAY WE DID IT! <3
Yup, after all they've been through, the finally get a rest.
Haha, Paulie is actually so, so tired by now. Well, all of them are, really. they haven't slept for a whole night, at this stage after having really busy/stressful days. Not to mention Paulie got dehydrated in the desert in my E4 story, and almost became lunch for a hungry krookodile... We started this collab with both teams meeting each other at the end of a day, and giving each other gifts. And then it was dark when they headed into Tao, and yeah.

This has been the best, full of ups and downs for our characters, and I like to think that they have all grown stronger and more confident of themselves through all of this. I really hope you enjoyed reading it. Srar did amaing work on the pictures, and came up with a large portion of the plot, as well as writing a bit. She gave me loads of ideas and little things I could add in, so thanks so much Srar. I couldn't have come up with a super fun storyline like this without you!

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Comments: 32

UnknownOO8 [2012-04-09 11:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Finally finally through it!!! Great work both It was an awesome entry and I really hope that will fetch you many marks

And last typo in the first line, I think you meant 'they':
"The led the residents of Tao through the tunnel, and out into the wider cavern, navigating around the rocks that had been scattered when Paulie had torn down the wall Pyralis had built up."

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sinistroscribe In reply to UnknownOO8 [2012-04-12 03:33:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so so much <33 I'm really glad you enjoyed it

And haha, thanks for picking that up! A typo is not such a good way to start the final part is it? XD

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UnknownOO8 In reply to sinistroscribe [2012-04-12 05:22:12 +0000 UTC]

Well, I guess it sort of tend to make me readers flinch, but I know what to expect in the whole and that typo didn't discourage me to read further

And you're welcome! The story was really enjoyable. I don't know who can not enjoy it

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Srarlight [2012-03-28 00:45:45 +0000 UTC]

I just finished reading all of it together sinis! Why did it take me so much time!? Oh never mind! What I wanted to say is how really amazing this Entire piece of writing is! It read like a wonderful novel and it was fantastic! You did such a nice job with all the characters and I was thoroughly impressed how you kept up with all the characters thoughts and actions throughout the story! Thank you for the collabing with me! I had been waiting for it for months and when it came it was everything I thought it would be!!

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sinistroscribe In reply to Srarlight [2012-03-28 10:40:45 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh! I need to find time to read it, start to finish.
Thanks so much, Srar! I couldn't have done half as well without your help though! Seriously, you helped me out loads, with plot, ideas, all sorts. And just yeah <3 Not to mention, at times when I had no idea what to write/couldn't find the words, your amazing art totally inspired me.

Yes. We must do something together again, later sometime. I mean, we already do have little ideas and what-not (Gilly & Galileo mischief - I'm totally going to write about that soon.) I really want to write about Gilly teaching Pen how to fly, and maybe some other things too. Seriously, you have such amazing characters <3 We make a pretty good team, huh? And the whole Tikay & Dogen adventure we talked about awhile ago, and the whole thing with Gabi, where Bis helps out...

You have a head full of amazing ideas, you really do.
And you're a brilliant artist too.

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Srarlight In reply to sinistroscribe [2012-03-29 22:06:37 +0000 UTC]

Bwaaahhh you're welcome and thank you!!! :Meow:

Oh I would love to work with you again! It was so amazing and all the adventures we have came up with together are great and I would really like to put them to use Our teams work very well together! I would be honored to work with you again with future endeavors!

Thank you so much ;v;

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sinistroscribe In reply to Srarlight [2012-03-30 06:26:26 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, I'm a little worried about the parts that included cameos now. I hope I did them alright...

Yesyesyes! Somehow I can't imagine Pen and Paulie ever having plenty of fun without/being too far away from Persia and Meranda and Embory

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Srarlight In reply to sinistroscribe [2012-03-31 05:05:57 +0000 UTC]

I think you did a wonderful job with it but its all up to them

Its funny how the worked themselves together like that! Pen and paulie will always have a lasting part in Persia's, Meranda's, and now Embory's life!

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Erryx [2012-03-21 07:06:15 +0000 UTC]

Sorry it took me so long to get to this, but today I finally read it all! From start to finish!

This story was really great Sinis! Like, amazing! Spectacular! Wonderful! I really enjoyed all of the character development and tension there was in it! And Srar did a great job on the illustrations too! Really, both of you did a great with this!

Also thanks for choosing to cameo Team Psych-Out on this last part! I guess I never realized how similar Lucian and Abigail were to Meranda! They should hang out more, don't you agree?

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sinistroscribe In reply to Erryx [2012-03-21 07:33:19 +0000 UTC]

No worries at al, seriously No need to apologise either, it is a long story after all.

Thanks so, so much, Erryx! <3 Yeah, Srar did an amazing job indeed, really helped me with the story a whole lot.

And, you're very welcome. Srar had included them in the background, so I was like, YAY, I shall write about them also! And yes, they are similar indeed, aren't they? That would be awesome And I also think that Lucian and Abigail will get on with my new team - my two seabirds do love having a good laugh/teasing each other/pranks, and all that sorta thing.

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Erryx In reply to sinistroscribe [2012-03-21 20:26:33 +0000 UTC]

I just didn't want to make it seem like I didn't read it or anything.

Took me the entire day to read it though, and man was it worth it!

Hopefully when I finish making a Tumblr for my teams we can do some RPing with our characters!

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sinistroscribe In reply to Erryx [2012-03-21 23:40:37 +0000 UTC]


Yeah, thanks <333

I'm so glad you think so. ANd haha, yeah. It is pretty long... XD

Yes, I'd very much love to roleplay with some of your amazing characters! It will be fun

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Czar-Ino-Kaze [2012-03-12 21:18:30 +0000 UTC]

Yay you finished in time.

The series as a whole was a fine read.

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sinistroscribe In reply to Czar-Ino-Kaze [2012-03-12 22:25:16 +0000 UTC]

Yes we did!

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it <3

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Czar-Ino-Kaze In reply to sinistroscribe [2012-03-12 22:26:51 +0000 UTC]

Ah You're welcome!

I also finished "Book" 1

Now I'm working on "Book" 2

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sinistroscribe In reply to Czar-Ino-Kaze [2012-03-12 22:30:12 +0000 UTC]

<333

Oh, well done! Yes, I think I saw the final part.
I've yet to read them, and today is a very busy day for me, but I'll be sure to read them later on this week and let you know what I think <3

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Czar-Ino-Kaze In reply to sinistroscribe [2012-03-12 22:38:56 +0000 UTC]

Ah Okay;

I'll be working on "Book" 2. It's going to be a tribute story involving the dynamic duo.

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sinistroscribe In reply to Czar-Ino-Kaze [2012-03-12 22:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, look forwards to it <3

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Czar-Ino-Kaze In reply to sinistroscribe [2012-03-12 22:57:00 +0000 UTC]

Ah yeah

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SpringDragonfly [2012-03-12 17:33:28 +0000 UTC]

Awww, this was such a beautiful ending you two, congrats on all the hard work and best of luck in judging! I'm so glad Verakai got a confidence boost.

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sinistroscribe In reply to SpringDragonfly [2012-03-12 22:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so, so much, really <3 And yes, I hope we do alright in judging... <3 Being the sole writer for most of it, and getting plot ideas and information on how Meranda, Persia and Embory will react/what they'll say, from Srar... I hope its a lot smoother to read than my other collabs have been =3

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SpringDragonfly In reply to sinistroscribe [2012-03-12 22:31:42 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

It should be a smoother read.

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Airanke [2012-03-12 08:39:16 +0000 UTC]

FFFFF JASPER THERE CURLED UP BY PAULIE'S SIDE MY HEART IT ASPLODED. You guys did such an awesome joooob dfouahsdfoauhsdofuhasodufh

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sinistroscribe In reply to Airanke [2012-03-12 08:49:33 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAAHHHH I'ma glad.
I so can't wait to write more of hiiiiim. LOL, as 'another' him. Yeah, you know <3
Thanks soooooo much! It got hard towards the end, but we maaaade it

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Airanke In reply to sinistroscribe [2012-03-12 09:04:50 +0000 UTC]

Asoafuhsodufha yes yes yes more more mooooore <3<3<3 PFF Yeah I totes know <3
You guys totally did, and did an awesome job too!!

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sinistroscribe In reply to Airanke [2012-03-12 09:13:27 +0000 UTC]

He totes needs to run into Odette at some point
I am many glads you think so <33

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Airanke In reply to sinistroscribe [2012-03-12 09:15:00 +0000 UTC]

Eheheh aw yeah totally Totalllyyyyyy <3 And he can evolve into a Purugly and be able to protect heeeer 'cause she'll stay a Glammeow oadsuhfaosuhdf

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sinistroscribe In reply to Airanke [2012-03-12 09:19:27 +0000 UTC]

Awww yeah <33
INDEED. But he'll be the handsomest Purugly anyone ever saw! Seriously.

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Airanke In reply to sinistroscribe [2012-03-12 09:21:09 +0000 UTC]

<33
PFF YEAH TOTALLY. He will totally be the awesomest, and everyone will be in le shock. Seriously <3

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sinistroscribe In reply to Airanke [2012-03-12 09:26:56 +0000 UTC]

indeeeed. Pfft, he has so much attitude, depending on his frame of mind. Totes am gonna listen to his song again now XD

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Airanke In reply to sinistroscribe [2012-03-12 10:00:05 +0000 UTC]

Songs are gooood. Been listening to Mikhail's song too much now. asodfuhasodufh

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sinistroscribe In reply to Airanke [2012-03-12 12:22:05 +0000 UTC]

yusss they are indeeeeeed <3

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