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gytalf2000 [2013-04-30 17:32:25 +0000 UTC]
Spectacular!
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Jurassic-Punk [2013-03-07 02:40:56 +0000 UTC]
Haha, I just now saw the female off in the background, it took me a few minutes but - there she is!
Great Job, Skyvair!
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skyvalr In reply to Jurassic-Punk [2013-03-07 03:39:04 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I nestled her pretty far back to communicate how steep a sloped they've been climbing.
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Orionide5 [2013-02-26 13:02:24 +0000 UTC]
The head, body and tail are all both accurate and wonderfully drawn. Some tips on the limbs though: the hallux/dewclaw/smallest toe should be on the inside of the foot; here it looks like it's on the outside. The big killing claw toe is not just raised off the ground, it's held upright, but the way you drew it also works. The third finger should be smaller than the middle finger and fully visible on the underside of the wing. There's also one thing about the limbs that's probably too big to "fix" on this particular drawing: the arms are raised too far up. Little flying raptors might have been able to raise their arms close to this far, but not huge ones like Utahraptor. But by all means finish the drawing with its upraised wings; it's going to look fantastic.
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skyvalr In reply to Orionide5 [2013-02-26 20:18:14 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the tips, I might generalize it to "generic Eudromaeosaur," perhaps a common ancestor. As for the main talons, I know they're normally raised, but this guy is startled by the presence of the viewer, so he's lowered his claw and is splaying his plumage accordingly. I'll admit I know nothing of dewclaws though. Also the third finger is there, just not well shaded.
Again, thanks for the advice, I'm fairly new to paloeart
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Orionide5 In reply to skyvalr [2013-02-26 21:05:54 +0000 UTC]
(Found the third finger.) I see no reason not to label it Utahraptor, since the genus is fairly obscure right now; anything that resembles Deinonychus is okay. I don't think comments can be edited.
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skyvalr In reply to skyvalr [2013-02-26 20:32:24 +0000 UTC]
I have to idea how to edit comments, but I'd also say the dewclaw should be pretty easy to fix with shading.
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Pyroraptor42 [2013-02-26 05:26:10 +0000 UTC]
nice, it looks like a dragon
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skyvalr In reply to Pyroraptor42 [2013-02-26 05:35:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I guess it's no suprise the "-long" (Mandarin for Dragon) is beginning to to supplant "-saurus" in the names of newly discovered dinos.
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Pyroraptor42 In reply to skyvalr [2013-02-26 05:37:08 +0000 UTC]
yeah, for me some dinos where tiny dragons, and even some big ones
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