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Snowflower--Chan00 — Chapter 3: Changing Winds part 2

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A light blue corset sparkled in the sunlight and it complimented the white sleeveless pinstriped shirt I wore. The blue corset was widely split into two semi long tails that fanned out the short ends trailed down the sides of my waist. Lacy ice blue ribbons tied into bows adorned the middle.  Its two upper ends stopped near the sides of my chest and were curved to look like the ridges of a rose.


Sparkling light blue roses were tied with black ribbons on the tops of both detached white long sleeves. The sleeves which traveled from my upper-arms and down to my forearms resembled creamy white flower petals.  

My light blue high-low skirt was decorated with gleaming white roses, their petals scattered all over and near the bottom of the silken skirts. The back part flowed gracefully to my ankles.

I laced my knee high heeled black boots that had light blue swirls encircling a crystal white flower painted in the center.

I ran a brush through long silky blonde strands and braided part of it which later held my long ponytail that cascaded down to my legs. The ends of my hair ended in natural elegant curls just like the ones that flowed passed my shoulders in front of the sides of my heart-shaped face.

I placed a few last minute weapons inside a dark blue Cartagena Mochila Tassel bag that I strapped to the other side of my black belt.

I had decorated my mother's gift with various seashells last week.

My black finger-less gloved hands snatched a gleaming water sword from the back of my messy closet.

The water sword always bubbled when I touched the cold blade.

It had cute blue diamond flowers along the blade.

Sunlight crawled its way towards the sword making it glow.

`Man its beautiful!`

My father crafted it for me, of course it looked different than his.

The blade was thinner and looked like a normal sword.

Strapping it to my black belt I quickly fled.

"Thank you Takaya." I smiled seeing my big brother still fake his sickness through a window.

`I'm counting on you.`

My mom worriedly placed a hand on his forehead.

Turning around to leave I was stopped when someone yelled, "I caught you!"

An apple hit its mark knocking Hanami to the ground.

"Oof." Hanami rubbed her head.

Seeing who it was she sprang to her feet balling her hands into fists.

"Mayu!"

My little sister's green eyes glared back at me.

"Why are you ditching me Onee-chan? I want to save Asuka too!"

Mayu glared at her elder sister who was three years older than her.

"Sorry Mayu you can't. Its too dangerous." I sighed dusting myself off.

"Stay with Takaya and cover for me."

I ran down the beach enjoying the beautiful sunrise.

After fighting an onslaught of fiends I walked up the road that led straight to the main village.

--

"Oh! Hello Hana-chan! Nize day sh'we are having."

I knew that foreign and strange accent anywhere.

Looking down I waved at a small Hypello.

His height reached my knees.

I always thought the frog creatures were kind of cute.

For some odd reason he could only speak my nickname.

"Hi, erm. Sorry I forgot your name." I blushed then added quickly. "I know you used to work for my mother!"

"Ah, yez. We go way back. All the way back chu the Gullwingz. Thoze zwere nize timez."

His sleek blue skin glistened in the sunlight as he smiled. "My nickname iz Barkeep. I've grown chu like it."

I giggled, " Cool. . . . Sorry I can't stay and chat. I have to rescue Asuka-chan!"

"Azuka-hime iz 'ot ere." Barkeep said, then sweat dropped, she had left.

"Awww." He wanted to chat with the human girl some more.

Everyone seemed to have no time for a nice chat anymore.

He wheeled his cart full of rare items to Besaid's marketplace.

--

"Mayor!" I shouted leaping into Lulu's arms, "Hi."

Lulu gently pushed me away, "Hi." She echoed then raised an eyebrow.

"You aren't getting into any mischief, are you?"

Placing a hand on the back of my head, I tossed my head up and laughed. "Of course not."

`Hehe, leave it to Lulu to see through me. I really hope she doesn't this time.`

"Well I gotta go. Tell Wakka I say hi. Byeeee!"

Lulu shook her head and chuckled.

"Heck yeah!" I struck a fighting pose at my success.

There were no guards in the front entrance.

This was too easy!

"Lord Kosei!"

I ducked behind a statue hearing an old priest's voice.

His running footsteps echoed across the stone floor.

`Kosei? Bleh! Not him again!`

I pressed my forehead against the marble statue holding back a groan.

It was carved to look like one of our Gods.

This guy seriously didn't know when to quit.

"Nyu!" Oka phased through the floor beside me in magic sparkles.

"Oka! What are you doing here? Bad girl! You were supposed to stay at home."

I grabbed her four fluffy tails then placed her on my shoulder.

Her cute mouth seemed to be twisted into a smirk.

Like her twin Tsubasa, she was a four tailed magical fox spirit.

Tsubasa and her twin sister Oka originally belonged to Akari, before she gave them to us.

"People with special abilities can see these magical fox spirits."

Akari's words disappeared as I stared at Oka's strange purple symbol on her furry white forehead.

Oka's four tails had lavender tips at the ends.

"I still don't know what special abilities I have to be able to see you."

I petted her then smiled when she closed her bright violet eyes.

"Nyu!" She chirped knowing Hanami's reason.

"Lord Kosei please wait!"

Lord Kosei, who had the air of a noble, abruptly stopped.

The soft material of his blue robes swished elegantly and complimented his wild beetle like dark blue hair.

It sort of looked like the late Seymour's hairstyle, except it was shoulder length.

"Does Lady Asuka not find my presence enjoyable?"

He growled like the spoiled prince he really was.

"Uh! Uh! Um! N-No! Of course not master. She is just. . . shy."

The old man would say anything to appease Lord Kosei and keep his job.

"Shy?" Kosei cupped his chin deep in thought.

The sparkle in those beautiful ocean blue eyes put all gemstones to shame.

"I have to admit he is extremely handsome."

I whispered staring at the open robe which exposed his chiseled chest.

"Nyu." Oka nuzzled my hair now sitting on my head.

"That still doesn't excuse his disgusting personality."

I stuck my tongue out at him and blew a raspberry for good measure.

"Heh. I suppose all women feel that way about me."

He flashed the priest a dashing smile.

"I need to change my approach. Maybe try smothering her with more love letters."

He was the most prestigious among the suitors Asuka had.

Half of my suitors at least didn't treat me like a prize.

I always turned them all down.

"When is grandma Sayuri going to learn, Asuka and I don't want any suitors?"

I asked Oka who licked my cheek.

"In time she will be mine and I shall roughly claim her on our wedding night."

With great effort I forced the bile down that was threatening to leave.

"M-Master Kosei. Perhaps you should maybe give up on Lady Asuka?"

Kosei turned his evil gaze on the old man, "Impossible! She is the woman of my dreams. The Gods blessed her with immense beauty! All women even the Goddesses. . . . No all mortal women and Goddesses grow envious when they look upon her angelic face!-"

"That's going a bit too far." I huffed in irritation.

Oka watched the red pulse mark on Hanami's head throb.

She found this utterly hilarious!

The dashing and extremely sexy Kosei continued his passionate speech oblivious he had a not so thrilled audience.

"Our fates are forever intertwined. No other woman can drive a man mad with intense passion like she can! Without my beloved princess my bones will succumb to ash! My depression would be greater than all of Spira has ever known! My breath gets sucked away when she is not near. Oh, how it huuurts! The heavens cry sorrowful songs seeing two star crossed lovers ripped apart. I thirst to kiss her sweet lips and hold her seductive body until I have no strength left. Even now my heart breaks as it yearns to feel her heavenly presence!"

He paused dramatically sinking to the floor in despair!

My poor mind was forever scarred now.

"Where are you my love? Please answer my heart's plea!"

Kosei raised his hand to the sunlight seeking an answer.

"Master Kosei." The old man gently took his Lord's hand in his.

He knew what young love felt like and sympathized with the rich young man.

I face palmed, was the old man seriously falling for this dramatic prince?

"She's not here."

I lifted my head up, "Huh?"

"Lady Asuka is. . . ."

A smoke bomb that I didn't throw landed in the center of the floor.

Gas knocked out a few priests within a few seconds, but Kosei was quick to shield himself and the old man.

"Where is Asuka? You are dealing with me now punk!"

Mayu cried pointing a dagger to Lord Kosei's neck.

"Mayu?" Puzzlement quickly boiled down to anger the little pest just ruined my plan!

"Hey! Let her go!" I yelled coming out of my hiding spot.

Two guards soon had me kneeling beside Mayu.

"An interesting pet." Prince Kosei stroked Oka-chan's four tails.

"Don't hurt her!" I struggled from my captors.

Carefully he placed Oka on my shoulder with a cocky smirk.

"I do not enjoy filthy insects buzzing where they are not needed."

His charming voice cut like ice through the air.

"Do you know who I am peasant?"

He looked at me with disgust as though I were a lowly flea bitten mongrel.

"Yes."

Mayu watched her sister bravely glare up at Lord Kosei.

Hanami was so cool!

I swallowed my pride and forced myself to answer him.

"You are known as Lord Kosei, or better yet Prince Kosei since you hold a higher status than that of any powerful priests. You are the only great nephew from Lord Seymour himself. The people of Spira adore you and believe you are a the ideal match for Lady Asuka. Your mother is Lord Seymour's half little sister. Your family has vast wealth and you don't make anyone in Spira forget it. You are a God in human flesh and all women adore you."

Prince Kosei didn't catch the heavy sarcasm in that last sentence.

Feeling great, he beamed that this peasant girl knew so much about him.

"I'm quite impressed my Lady. Next time if you are going to try to ambush me. Don't be a weak amateur."

His breath tickled my face and I almost choked on it.

"Where is Asuka?" Mayu demanded.

"I was getting to that." The old man croaked. "She isn't here."

"What?" Mayu's eyes grew big like saucers.

"Lady Asuka should still be in Killika performing her first practice which is the Sending dance."

"And where is my bride going afterwards?" Kosei's silky voice made my body shiver in an unpleasant way.

The heels of his boots made clicking sounds on the floor as he walked closer to the short old man.

"She is to head towards Bevelle to pray to the Fayth there."

"Bevelle?" I repeated quietly.

`Damn it! I got the temples mixed up!`

"Ah. Excellent," The prince 's rich voice always dripped with sickeningly sweet honey.

With a serene smile he gazed at an image of a smiling Asuka eagerly awaiting his arrival.

"Oka." I whispered then looked at my pocket.

The adorable little kitsune got the message and pulled out a flash bomb.

She waited for the right moment to set it off.

Prince Kosei was still lost in his fantasy.

His image of Asuka looked innocent and helpless, but at the same time lusted him like any other fan girl.

He soon came back to the current situation, "Throw these idiots out at once."

The guards were about to grab Hanami and Mayu when a flash bomb exploded.

In a second I used my magic to untie myself and Mayu, I dodged attacks from the guards, and raced out of the temple.

"Leave them." Kosei said, "I shall see the woman of my dreams soon enough." With a flare of his rich robes he set out to find his blushing bride.

--

"You. . . a. . . re. . . so. . . de. . . . dead." I gasped between breaths.

How far did we run?

My body rested on the warm white sand.

It felt great against my skin.

"No. You are." Mayu shot back sitting beside me out of breath.

Together we watched the icy cold waves crash against the shore.

"I'd say both of you won't live after today."

"Ahhhhh!"

That random voice made us jump out of our skins.

A big hand on both our shoulders prevented us from escaping.

"Hey dad!" I innocently smiled up at him.

I hated the disappointed look on his face.

I remembered he had gone to go to a tournament this morning.

"How was the tournament? . . . Did you win?"

I kept my voice casual hoping he would laugh and forget about our absence.

His crystal blue eyes hardened against my smile.

"Hanami, you can forget about participating in the next Blitzball tournament."

Tidus dragged both of them by their shirt collars back to the house.

"Wha? that's not fair!" I sputtered wriggling as I protested.

"I hate to be the bad guy, but I think it is."

Tidus tightened his grip. "How could you endanger Mayu's life? She could have gotten hurt by a fiend or worse-"

Mayu shouted, "I handled those fiends fine on my own! Stop treating me like a baby!"

"I know you are capable of fighting, its just too dangerous to fight them by yourself. Trust me."

Tidus spoke to her gently like she was a two year old again.

`It's ALWAYS too dangerous for me to do anything around here.`

Mayu crossed her arms as she kept being dragged on her butt.

Seeing her father's gentle smile in her mind, she puffed up her cheeks like a frog.

Once we got inside our mother was quick to pounce on us.

"Hanami! Mayu!" I almost fainted from her crushing embrace.

After she released us, Rikku examined her youngest daughter for any injuries.

Like Lady Yuna, Rikku had aged beautifully over the years.

Her dreamlike green eyes still held a mischievous glint, but for now their deep orbs held her daughters' gazes sternly.

Since the last time Sin came to Spira, the fiends had multiplied into dangerous numbers.

Most of the monsters had deadlier poison.

Rikku withheld a sigh as she stared at Hanami.

Her voice came out scarily quite yet serious. "Hanami!"

"I already punished her." Tidus said from the doorway still very disappointed.

"Then I hope you think long and hard on what you did."

Rikku shook with rage watching Hanami march to her room.

She leaned into her husband's warm body.

His protective arms encircling her waist comforted her.

"Honestly, Hanami should know better than to take off like that."

Tidus kissed his wife's hair, "I'll talk to her.", And later found Hanami sitting on the shore.

--

"Mind telling me why you left without telling your mother?"

The waves were surely a beautiful sight.

Tidus sat next to her and enjoyed the salty sea air.

The wind played with the tail of his dark blue bandanna tied around his forehead.

Since playing Blitzball earlier, he wore his Zanarkand Abes pants.

The sun was getting hotter by the the minute.

Yesterday he wore a dark red colored one and told her it reminded him of his father.

He rarely talked about their deceased grandpa.

She sometimes forgot his name was Jecht.

This place was paradise and Tidus treasured it greatly.

"Takaya isn't helping me with the next tournament either."

He added and still didn't get an answer.

I traced moogles in the warm sand and continued to sulk.

"I wanted to rescue Asuka."

I finally said after a while instead of looking at him, I stared at the blue sky.

Wispy clouds floated through its vast blueness.

"She needs me to rescue her from the dragon lady's clutches."

My thoughts drifted to the evil Lady Amaterasu.

"Hanami." I heard my dad sigh, "This may come as a shock to you, but . . . . She's not in danger."

"Old people are keeping her captive!"

I yelled scaring a flock of birds.

Their white feathers floated around us.

Tidus laughed, "It's true!" I screamed as he laid down.

"I believe it." He smiled and giggled between his teeth.

I wanted to punch him.

I hugged my knees against my chest and thought I saw a dolphin peak its head above the water.

"So . . ."

The unspoken question hung between us while the seagulls fished for their breakfast.

"That old liver spotted dragon can be scary." Tidus mused now sitting up.

"You mean?" I gasped getting excited!

He grinned, "Go forth and defeat the evil dragon!" His awkward command made me giggle.

I stood up and saluted him, "Yes sir!"

Tidus stopped her before she darted off again with her strange pet fox.

"Remember to whistle whenever you are in danger. I'll always come running."

I closed my eyes and smiled and felt his hand ruffle my hair lovingly.

With his free hand he pulled me into a quick hug.

I could smell his sea salty scent and smiled into his protective arms.

The restless waves kept spraying us and I didn't care.

These moments, as mushy as they were, are the ones I treasured the most.

We stayed in that perfect moment much longer than needed.

He stepped back and chuckled scratching the back of his head.

"That was a little too mushy even for me."

His face expression was lined in a funny 'ewww' look.

Hanami snickered a few times before it turned into laughter.

Tidus smiled always enjoying making his family laugh.

He waved goodbye and hoped she would return with her cousin safely.

"Come on Oka-chan!" I raced her along the beach.

--

The big village was alive and thriving.

Wooden shops were open while the owners negotiated prices with customers.

People's chatter buzzed from all directions.

The smell of smoked fish made my stomach growl, so I purchased a whole bag for a hundred gil.

"Mornin Hanami!" An old man winked at me.

"If only I were younger." He muttered to himself.

I waved and continued to run through the throng of people.

A wild dog made me crash face first into Wakka.

Like my dad he was also shirtless, but kept his orange pointy hairstyle with a blue sweatband in tact.

"Whoa be more careful Hanami." He helped me stand.

"Nyu." Oka mewed, he looked down at waved.

"Yo, Oka."

"Here to see Asuka too?"

I shook my head, "She's at another temple. I must save her from the old priests and priestesses."

"Lady Amaterasu has her in her clutches again, ya?"

I nodded grimly.

"She's keeping her hostage in Bevelle's temple."

"You'll need lots of supplies." He said walking into an item shop.

I followed pushing aside a makeshift curtain, this item shop looked more old fashioned than the newer ones throughout Spira.

Various colored glass vases with flowers and tapestries decorated the place.

"Welcome." A girl's voice got our attention.

I smiled, it was Sekka-chan!

Asuka and I were her childhood friends.

We met the during a Blitzball tournament before uncle Kakeru's friends had to look after us again for a while.

A cute creamy light yellow tube top which matched her ruffled mini skirt.

The outfit went well with her chin length black hair.

Her black open toe sandals looked very cute too.

I checked my supply inventory and told Sekka about the mission.

"Okay. I'm in!"

"Great!" I beamed, and dragged her down the dirt road.

"Wait! The docks are in the other direction."

"I've got a better way of transportation!"

An old man wiped sweat off his brow and grabbed a wrench.

Grandpa Cid had moved here when I was a baby to be closer to the family.

His house was clear across the other side of the island.

Sekka and I had no choice, but to battle monsters on the way there.

--

He cursed in his native Albhed language when something on the machine exploded.

"Grandpa!" I shook his hand taking notice of his sweaty body.

He was handy with tools as were all Albhed.

We were hard workers after all and loved to create new things especially when it came to science.

His faded blue tattoos over his upper torso still looked cool.

He cocked his head, then squeezed my hand happily realizing his granddaughter had come to see him.

"Nerelu, la mziid cuddci dhyopci legih! Nene! Zned gurt yw lumsnuiw ehi ayo ert Emoge kiddurk urdy ryz?"

He threw his head back and laughed.

I giggled and bounced in excitement.

Sekka stood on the side unsure what was going on.

I saw the puzzlement on her cute face, "Sorry. Hehe. He's happy to see me, and called me his sweet little trouble maker. And he wants to know what kind of mischief Asuka and I are getting into this time." I smiled at my special nickname from him. Trouble maker. It suited me so well.

Sekka nodded, "Cool. Erm, what is that?"

My eyes widened, did she not know any Albhed?

"Its Albhed. My people have spoken the language since finding Spira."

"Meow." She mewed happily.

I sighed, Sekka has had that quirky trait of hers since she was little.

No doubt trying to fit in with the Ronso tribe.

I had to admit it was freaking adorable!

"Zny um ayoh whuirt?"

I turned back to grandpa Cid and spoke in our native tongue.

"Migge."

That was Sekka's name in the language.

"Migge" Grandpa rubbed the blonde whiskers on his chin.

"Zna umr'd Emoge zudn ayo yr erydnih etfirdohi?"

`Asuka.` I thought sadly.

Now I had to tell him she was in danger.

"Mni'm ur terkih! Emoge um piurk nict sebdufi pa Ceta Eledihemo. Migge ert U ehi kyurk dy Pificci dy kid nih yod yw dnihi!"

I said in one breath and watched him pull one of his creations off the table.

I gazed at the contraption and smiled, `This will work.`

"Legi mohi ayo tyr'd urshiemi dni pohrih dyy losn ert eczeam cier ciwd yh huknd znir ayo zerd dy mzudsn tuhisduyrm. Dniuh gia woic horm yr pcoi tuelyrt shamdecm, ert wuhi kilm. Pydn ehi wyort ur dni Lesecerue zyytm."

I nodded at his instructions, `Fire gems and blue diamond crystals are the fuel.` I silently reminded myself.

"Let's go!" I cheered grabbing Sekka.

"Good luck." Cid said watching them soon depart on the powerful flying surfers.

Hanami held onto the purple sails as Sekka enjoyed the scenery.

Finally both girls could literally touch the clouds!

"How are we going to escape with Asuka?"

Sekka yelled against the wind.

"I have an extra Elemental Air surfer." I hollered over my shoulder.

The brand name was carved into golden letters in Albhed on the black metal side.

--

"Ahhhhhhhh!"

The wind threatened to rip us apart as we crash landed somewhere in Bevelle.

Landing was sure hectic, I thought we were going to die!

"I felt so alive!" I giggled a little psychotically.

Sekka yawned then her eyes widened.

"What?" I looked at the thing she pointed at.

The ground shook as a large shadow towered above us.

"Eeep." I squeaked and turned around.

Sekka hissed at the giant dragon like fiend.

The fiend viciously roared, "We don't have time for this!" I shouted unsheathing my sword.

Like Asuka's my sword could summon magical elemental artes.

In a way we were Mages/swords-women.

It was through Akari's training that we learned those useful and cool attacks.

I started the fight by swiping some items from the ugly monster.

Next I fired an onslaught of huge icicles, but the damn thing still wouldn't die.

"Alright!" I cheered seeing Sekka shoot her hand held guns.

The monster quickly sprayed deadly poison on us.

With a powerful swing from its tail, it finished off Sekka.

Sekka fainted 'losing her life.'

"Sekka!" I cried then dodged his claws.

I quickly skimmed my inventory.

"Here." I tossed the phoenix down at my friend.

Sekka smiled feeling fully healed.

"Meow!" She exclaimed happily.

The evil monster set Sekka on fire instantly killing her again.

I angrily yelled, "Oh come on!"

This was seriously getting ridiculous!

"Screw it!" I fumed charging full speed at the monster.

I slashed and hacked at him and quickly dodged a few attacks.

A huge magical blast soon finished off the creature.

"Thanks Sekka." I blinked, she was still out of the game.

"Then who?" I looked around and saw a young woman.

"You need to do some serious leveling up."

Maiko shook her head at these morons.

"I-I was um really beat that's all." I laughed nervously.

I thanked her then watched Maiko heal Sekka.

"Meow!" She hugged Maiko.

Maiko closed her eyes and petted the confused girl.

She kindly used her magic to conjure up a headband which had black cat ears.

"Thank you!" Sekka squeezed poor Maiko.

"What are you doing here?"

Maiko asked prying Sekka's arms off her person.

She no longer wore the diamond headdress since the ceremony was over.

"We came here to see Asuka." Sekka answered.

"You can't. She's praying to the Fayth right now."

"Screw the damn rules for once." I growled taking off, but Maiko blocked me.

"I know how you feel, but some rules can never be broken."

I turned away, "Aren't you tired of taking orders from that evil dragon lady?"

Asuka's handmaiden nodded, "Yes."

A wry smile crossed her pink flower petal lips, "I guess breaking sacred rules for once wouldn't hurt."

Getting inside the temple was the easy part, because anyone was free to wander inside.

Smoke caressed our bodies from various incense candles.

Sekka tried grabbing one of the many pyreflies, I grabbed her arm ,and dragged her along the winding path.

"We going inside the lower chambers to see the young Summoner."

Maiko kept her voice calm, but I could hear the commanding edge.

"I'm her cousin!"

I cared less if I was interrupting the priest's chanting.

A gleaming sharp blade stopped my mid rant.

It almost cut my cheek as it was held firmly against the guard's neck.

"Let them pass." An alluring female voice said, it was tinged with boredom.

I was too scared to turn around and face this scary warrior.

The guard looked at us through small slits in his samurai like mask.

Surprisingly, he wasn't phased by the tops of this mysterious woman's breasts.

`Very well trained.` The stranger thought with a wry smile.

"Sorry no visitors are allowed to see Lady Asuka."

I heard him gulp in fear.

The young man was glad that the woman who had him pinned, didn't see his nose bleed.

When the guard didn't move, the blade made a small cut on his neck.

He froze under the harsher weight of the blade.

"Fine, then I'll just slowly kill you."

The young woman said nonchalantly and yet her eyes were dead serious.

`That voice. . . . It sounds familiar.`

I thought trying to place this voice with the mysterious person.

"Y-Yes my Lady." He quickly stepped aside allowing us access.

The woman sheathed her sword in one fluid movement.

I caught the crystallized pink cherry blossom which was the pommel.

More sparkling pink cherry blossoms decorated the rain guard of the sword.

Pink diamonds were carved into the silver blade looking like cherry blossom petals.

"Nice to see you again, Hana-chan." Akari smiled.

I stared at her with a puzzled look on my face.

Who was she?

I think I've seen her before, darn it.

Why couldn't I remember who she is?

The face is so familiar and I loved her beautiful long pink hair!

Wait, she knows my name! How the hell does she know my name?

Oh my gosh! She has to be an assassin out to get me!

I knew those chain letter meant something!

Although she said my name, and she hasn't killed me yet.

Normally an assassin would strike their victim without giving them a chance.

She must be friendly after all.

That voice and glowing green eyes soon jogged my memory.

"Akari!" I smiled finally putting two and two together.

She chuckled, "I see you are still a ditz like your idiot father."

"Hey!" I ran after her into the deepest parts of the chambers.
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Comments: 2

ahsoka626 [2014-08-13 01:45:18 +0000 UTC]

I like it a lot!!! LOL Hanami is such a ding-dong XDDD And I understand her frustration with Sekka; I hate it when characters constantly die on me in FF 12!!!!
As for the content, my only comment would be to stay consistent in your POV. You switch from first person to third person a lot, so you need to pick one and stick with it. Other than that, good job!! I'll read the rest when I have more time

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Snowflower--Chan00 In reply to ahsoka626 [2014-08-13 02:31:55 +0000 UTC]

LOL. It thanks to her dad's influence. LOL. SO HAPPY to hear from u again on here. I've been sad since you've been gone. Please try to be here when u can.                      

IKR, that is happening to me right now in FFX-2. DAMN IT. I keep wasting phoenix down. LOL. 

I miss FF12. But I will make a tribute chapter to it, when Mayu gets sucked into it through a portal and even meets vaan. XD. 

Maybe next chapter, nah the chapter after it. 

Okay. Hm, I do like third person, but first person is really cool. . ..  I guess third person it is. 

YAY!!!  

Oh now, I am introducing Hanami's and Asuka's school friend, they are best friend's with her she has shoulder length blue hair and violet eyes. 

Cute huh? Hoping. XD.

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