Comments: 91
Lizztale [2018-02-07 22:30:59 +0000 UTC]
Cool but Ariel looks older than she should be
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Sonala In reply to Lizztale [2018-02-20 14:23:24 +0000 UTC]
yeah i try to make something different
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Candybar3000 [2015-10-03 18:28:36 +0000 UTC]
My childhood...
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Snowflower--Chan00 [2014-06-28 21:35:39 +0000 UTC]
Please write stories for these alternate endings!
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Snowflower--Chan00 In reply to Sonala [2014-07-29 22:57:06 +0000 UTC]
COOL. I am part French myself, but my only language is English.
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kathrin1234 [2014-06-23 16:04:08 +0000 UTC]
You can do the swan princess. after the battle that derek has killed the great animal and he cries over Odette's lifeless body by his last goodbye.
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Sonala In reply to kathrin1234 [2014-07-28 13:23:35 +0000 UTC]
O_o great idea
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Samanthacfraticelli [2014-03-17 06:06:31 +0000 UTC]
Wow I love it! Its dark and alluring ♥
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beau7171 [2013-11-23 11:52:35 +0000 UTC]
ummmm
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AiMiHe [2013-05-04 15:00:17 +0000 UTC]
Great
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kathrin1234 [2013-02-04 21:47:08 +0000 UTC]
A little Sad
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kathrin1234 [2013-02-04 21:46:45 +0000 UTC]
A little sad I thing
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Sonala In reply to kathrin1234 [2013-02-07 12:45:18 +0000 UTC]
yeah it's true
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Eiskristall [2012-06-15 10:23:23 +0000 UTC]
He looks fat xD
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Musashden [2012-05-30 21:17:56 +0000 UTC]
Sorry for the way late critique - I'm getting a few done today. The thing that stands out the most is her body - it's too stiff it looks like she's got a board under her. Unconscious people are basically dead weight. And if he's wounded and tired from the fight he's going to be struggling to carry her, no matter how light she is. So my advice is this - have her torso and hips dip down, there is nothing supporting her there, naturally it will sag down. He's holding her in two places, everything else should fall victim to gravity and look more...lax I guess is the right would for it. Ref: [link] The girl in the Ra One poster is more along the lines of what I'm talking about. Hope this helps.
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ZandKfan4ever57 [2012-03-25 00:24:15 +0000 UTC]
Eric is devastated to say the least, these series makes me sad but I'm still looking forward to what's to come in the rest of your series...
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LordElthibar [2012-03-03 19:00:15 +0000 UTC]
Dang, that is depressing.
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Sonala In reply to LordElthibar [2012-03-09 13:38:33 +0000 UTC]
but beautifull scene no?
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BoomerBOmb [2012-02-27 22:49:34 +0000 UTC]
Reminds me a bit of the "Twisted Princesses" idea I saw around DA, but with the Princes as the victims instead.
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Sonala In reply to BoomerBOmb [2012-03-09 13:41:17 +0000 UTC]
oh really? where princess are monster isn't it???
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BoomerBOmb In reply to Sonala [2012-03-12 03:53:18 +0000 UTC]
Well, it has Ariel in it... and Flounder has been made pretty monstrous...
[link]
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crazyphangirl [2012-02-23 04:18:46 +0000 UTC]
woah dark...adn a little heartbreaking but this is beautiful.... nice to see a look of Rage on Eric's face.
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lax4life22 [2012-02-20 22:49:18 +0000 UTC]
I love it!!!!! Especially how you highlight Eric in the corner, my only recommendation is more emotion, not upset but the anguish, but either was it's a beautiful piece.
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Sonala In reply to lax4life22 [2012-02-22 16:27:41 +0000 UTC]
what do you mean?
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lax4life22 In reply to Sonala [2012-02-22 23:03:01 +0000 UTC]
It's hard to explain, you did a great job with Eric, but add more emotion, like in his eyes, to me it feels like he's just looking down at ariel but it doesn't portray what's actually going on.
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Sonala In reply to lax4life22 [2012-03-09 14:52:54 +0000 UTC]
oh i see now ok thanks for the advise
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ella1673 [2012-02-20 21:31:47 +0000 UTC]
So sad. And so beautiful!
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Sonala In reply to ella1673 [2012-02-22 16:28:05 +0000 UTC]
soo thanks
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