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Spikestar5 — Our Goddess
Published: 2009-12-16 02:30:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 156; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description Our Goddess
We all know her touch, her gentle, loving care
She wraps us in a hug
kissing our head whispering "your safe in my hands"
We don't know her face
Only the tears of crystal that stain it forever
We wish we could please her
we wish we could show love
but being our Goddess she knows us to well
Her black dress is splatter with the blood of enemies
and the tears of long dead loved ones
Blood of sorrow and tears of joy
We can't help but grimice at that sight
We wish she was perfect, these stains are like dirt
on pure white snow
We whisper our secrets and wishes clinging to her tight,
She spreads her wings, holding us through the night
She will never say goodbye
She has never said hello
There is no need
as she is us and we are her
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Comments: 3

Ramsey-The-Arab [2009-12-16 03:57:06 +0000 UTC]

I like it alot. great job :3

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Spikestar5 In reply to Ramsey-The-Arab [2009-12-18 00:16:41 +0000 UTC]

thanks, it's not something I really like, I can see I need more practice. I like my latest poem better... Which reminds me I need to post that!

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Ramsey-The-Arab In reply to Spikestar5 [2009-12-18 20:15:37 +0000 UTC]

yes you do!

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