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eliander [2017-11-29 08:10:42 +0000 UTC]
Someone seems angry though I'm not precisely sure why she's angry yet.
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fotland42 [2016-10-25 02:59:39 +0000 UTC]
It's time to think a lot of things, many of them contradictory, and then not say most of them.
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SPARTAN064 [2016-10-25 02:55:41 +0000 UTC]
I remember this from Pen's story.... but it's way more painful to see....
Nice work...
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ForestStarStudios [2016-10-24 22:36:36 +0000 UTC]
aaah what's gonna happeeeeen
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MiragePotato [2016-10-24 03:23:40 +0000 UTC]
hug time?
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CedarWoods [2016-10-23 17:55:41 +0000 UTC]
This is pretty brutal, but chapter 18 will be positively R rated I reckon.
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JustJoeKing [2016-10-23 05:37:53 +0000 UTC]
O_o...... ah would personally disperse Nexus' browser history. XD
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SpokenMind93 In reply to M4st3r507 [2016-10-23 10:01:21 +0000 UTC]
If you're interested, the next page is already available on my Patreon :3
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tigreanpony [2016-10-22 15:14:12 +0000 UTC]
Oh this will be good. can't wait for the next page.
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barbqeel [2016-10-22 07:53:50 +0000 UTC]
This would be the perfect time for some feels.
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cadancefayle [2016-10-22 03:47:41 +0000 UTC]
Is this how you treat your mother Nyx!? I know your still there. She took good care of you and this how you repay her!?
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ndedwards224 [2016-10-22 03:47:04 +0000 UTC]
heart breaking
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Robotic-Turtle [2016-10-22 02:27:15 +0000 UTC]
Is... is it hug time...?
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Billblok [2016-10-22 00:53:55 +0000 UTC]
So, seeing that a few people didn't really mind the wounds and bruises as a reason for mature content I've turned it off.Frankly, I think mature content should be turned on regardless.
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sigel4ever [2016-10-22 00:22:18 +0000 UTC]
one scene than repeats from the past: nightmare moon, taller alicorn in one side, twilight, little unicorn in the other side
how ends this? (i read the whole fanfic and i don't give any spoilers or hinds)
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Shadow-Ichigo [2016-10-21 22:24:51 +0000 UTC]
Yikes, poor Twilight..
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Articunos-Bitch [2016-10-21 19:46:10 +0000 UTC]
"Mother...strange things have been happening to my...body since we last spoke. I know I've grown up, but mayhaps you could give me a more detailed explanation on some things I've felt and thought?"
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SpokenMind93 In reply to Articunos-Bitch [2016-10-21 19:49:33 +0000 UTC]
Technically in mind she's still a filly. And I don't think she got "the thing" in just one week of growing up xD Hasn't even been a week, it's been a day at most.
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Articunos-Bitch In reply to SpokenMind93 [2016-10-22 04:25:10 +0000 UTC]
I thought she got her memories back from being Nightmare. Those may include such things, or maybe she doesn't actually know how or why. Goodness, this could be terribly awkward for her, I never thought of it until today.
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Beltar1 In reply to Articunos-Bitch [2016-10-25 13:23:20 +0000 UTC]
In fact she did and in abstract knowledge and logic she's totally adult. In fact she she understands more things than 90% of readers noticed. She is very strange mix of smart adult and a child.
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JAFNOVA [2016-10-21 19:43:48 +0000 UTC]
Here at this moment, the story itself can now go more than two ways and this "Nix/Nightmare Moon" is holding which way that path can be.
Let us see want happens at the next page.
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Daralydk [2016-10-21 19:12:59 +0000 UTC]
yes - this moment in story was strong one
it was one of the few where darker themes got over that boundary of physical violence that is often frown upon by many fans
but I was touched by it
results of your actions are of them more severe than you serving as a lawn ornament or having your face tattooed on the planet's satellite
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PrincessAshley91 [2016-10-21 17:46:09 +0000 UTC]
Called it, sending them out of the room
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jmcdavid [2016-10-21 17:45:24 +0000 UTC]
I can't think of anything witty to say about this part. XD
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R-Doll [2016-10-21 15:10:59 +0000 UTC]
Poor Twi
And now it's just one-on-one
suspense rising
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PhoenixFlambe [2016-10-21 14:50:56 +0000 UTC]
Spell nexus, ye better be prepared for a 'tuned up' crowbar beatdown. Hey, if you're even more cruel and brutal to choose death as a punishment, then i assure you, that beatdown will not kill you. It's just gonna hurt you, really, really bad.
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thasbrony [2016-10-21 14:50:37 +0000 UTC]
Poor twilight she looks so sad and in pain, great job saturn
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suntwilig [2016-10-21 14:41:18 +0000 UTC]
The evil is judged
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zenitraMsj [2016-10-21 13:39:27 +0000 UTC]
Wow, Nexus is still alive, how?
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Pokebreeder25 [2016-10-21 12:44:21 +0000 UTC]
i was hoping nyx would hit nexus for torturing her mother
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