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SpokenMind93 — Past Sins: Mother of a Nightmare P2
Published: 2016-07-22 10:00:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 13484; Favourites: 161; Downloads: 0
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Past Sins and Nyx (c)
MLPFIM (c) Hasbro,
In honor of because he made a very awesome fancomic after the facts of this story
but he sadly left DA or changed his account
I love it when things work out like I want to :3 These small animations give the comic a bit more life and kinda helps getting the message over when something's not that clear xD
<<Prelude
<<Chapter 1
<<Chapter 2
<<Chapter 3
<<Chapter 4
<<Chapter 5
<<Chapter 6
<<Chapter 7
<<Chapter 8
<<Chapter 9
<<Chapter 10
<<Chapter 11
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Tracking spell; the castle is shielded from scrying magic, so Twilight could not track Nyx directly, but she could track the movement of a cultist moving outside of the scrying ward, right until the point he entered the shielded area.
From there its simple deduction; the spot where the tracking spell went dead marks the boundary of the warded area, and the movement of the tracking while it lasted indicated a general direction from that point on the edge of the warding, towards the center of the warded area.
From that information, Twilight now has an approximate location of the cult's hidden base.
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Right
thank you
how are you enjoying this series
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I'm enjoying this comic quite a bit; i read the original story, and all of it's sequels several months ago.
I've already read all of the currently posted pages of this comic; and i support Saturn Star on Patreon, so i can see the new pages as soon as they get posted there.
I just happened to be rereading the last few chapters of this comic, and felt like tossing around a few replies in the comment sections, clarifiying a few things for some people, since the story itself being written medium has a much easier time conveying context, and characters inner dialogues, that dont always carry over into this comic.
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I too read the text comic for this story a wee while back
and I think I read one of its sequels
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Text comic? What?
I'm talking about Pen Stroke's stories on FIMFiction; of which, this comic is a direct adaptation.
The problem in cases like with this page; is that adapting a written story into visual format poses many challenges in clearly translating certain details and context that are clear and obvious in the original writing.
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A text Comic is all words with little to no pictures I was talking about Pen Strokes original
but I agree with that I mean in order to fully make an idea written by someone else in this manner you must have a similar vision and that in itself is extremely hard or even impossible
unless of course SaturnStar14 were to talk to Pen Strokes and make him someone who could say "yay or nay" if you know what I mean
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Could I have the full color non-animated link, please?
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Page2 If you'd support me on Patreon for only 5 dollars per month you can get the png version beforehand.
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Not really too fond of these animations... they really diminish the comic's overall image quality since they reduce it to 256 colour.
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go get your little filly back twy.
meanwhile, I will be watching EQG 4
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There is little dialogue and yet this scene says a lot.
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It's a shame that you can't bring your friends along. This mission is really far too important to be undertaken alone.
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*notices Crystal Empire on the map* Correct me if my memory is wrong, but didn't this story take place during Season 2, before season 3? The Crystal Empire wouldn't have been back yet.
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This story takes place after the opening episodes of the third season.
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Twinkles on a mission to find her daughter... What will she find? Her daughter, or the nightmare that will await her?
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At the moment, neither. Nyx is very confused.
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As well as I, I have no idea what's going to happen!
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Twilights on a mission to find her daughter. She will not stop for an otter. She will find her no matter what happens!!! Even if it means to be a misshappen. (Idk i suck at songs xD)
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yes
this chapter was probably the most emotional one and it was tearing me apart to read it
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No one get in her way! She is a mother on a mission!
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Sweet, you are doing a great job, can't wait for the next page.
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I randomly checked the comic status and suddenly I'm early O_O
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And thus, Twilight's quest to rescue Nyx begins.
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Awesome, I was looking for this map part for a while now!
Also, I see you really went for more show-like muzzles, not an unwelcomed surprise
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FOA: I really love how this entire page works so perfectly and emotionally without dialogue x__x I really do!
But...
I don't know if that little piece of animation (I rather call it "GIF Effect") is worth the loss of quality of the page :c It looks a little bit... Pixely.
Nontheless: Amazing page!
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Meh, it's a small sacrifice. The quality still seeps through for me.
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You're being happy with is the most important point and it is still good enough to enjoy
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Yes it is I enjoy the animation the attention to detail it was all good but I did have one problem with this page… I honestly didn't understand what happened on this page!!!!!
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