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So, the folks who run the show at OdinMS (google it) were holding a contest, and the prizes were such that I felt inclined to actually try and make a comic to enter. >_> They advertised it as an art competition and specified that entries were to be in comic form, which I've never really done apart from something I'd rather not go into that I did in middle school. I'm hoping I can at least win in honorable mention if not for best graphics (this prize can only be obtained from actually drawing the comic, and since the majority of the entries are screenshots, I think I might stand a chance. >_> ) No matter what category one wins in there's a choice in the prize options to get a new hairstyle, so that's why I did this. XD

I know the panels are arranged in a very... VERY uninteresting way, but I'm no comic artist; I'm making no claims of that. >_> The lines are kind of fuzzy 'cause it was drawn and inked on normal computer paper; I tried to tone that down as much as I could. The most trouble I had was thinking of a new background for every panel. >_>; My favorite is the one with all the breakfast foods in it. XD I'm thinking I might go back and add spaces in between the periods in the "..."s. Just to assert that they are not little dotted lines or something. I dunno. >_>

The deadline is midnight tomorrow, so I'm looking for any input I can get on how to improve it between now and then. D: All the people that I've shown it and asked "what is or is not needed?" have just laughed and said "that's adorable" or something to that nature, so I haven't really gotten any of the feedback that I'm looking for. .-. (Not that positive feedback isn't a good thing; I think I might actually stand a chance here! XD)

The sad part is that this comic is based on a true story.

I write too much in these things; I know, I'm sorry. D:

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So, the folks who run the show at OdinMS (google it) were holding a contest, and the prizes were such that I felt inclined to actually try and make a comic to enter. >_> They advertised it as an art competition and specified that entries were to be in comic form, which I've never really done apart from something I'd rather not go into that I did in middle school. I'm hoping I can at least win in honorable mention if not for best graphics (this prize can only be obtained from actually drawing the comic, and since the majority of the entries are screenshots, I think I might stand a chance. >_> ) No matter what category one wins in there's a choice in the prize options to get a new hairstyle, so that's why I did this. XD

I know the panels are arranged in a very... VERY uninteresting way, but I'm no comic artist; I'm making no claims of that. >_> The lines are kind of fuzzy 'cause it was drawn and inked on normal computer paper; I tried to tone that down as much as I could. The most trouble I had was thinking of a new background for every panel. >_>; My favorite is the one with all the breakfast foods in it. XD I'm thinking I might go back and add spaces in between the periods in the "..."s. Just to assert that they are not little dotted lines or something. I dunno. >_>

The deadline is midnight tomorrow, so I'm looking for any input I can get on how to improve it between now and then. D: All the people that I've shown it and asked "what is or is not needed?" have just laughed and said "that's adorable" or something to that nature, so I haven't really gotten any of the feedback that I'm looking for. .-. (Not that positive feedback isn't a good thing; I think I might actually stand a chance here! XD)

The sad part is that this comic is based on a true story.

I write too much in these things; I know, I'm sorry. D: