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SractheNinja — Bleachatar: Out of My Sight

Published: 2006-12-19 04:27:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 20066; Favourites: 147; Downloads: 696
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Description Hey all! Sorry for the lack of Bleachatar or anything for the past few days. Ironically, these days of vacation have been pretty busy with alll sorts of stuff. So I've been working on this comic for a fews days gradually. Seems like I'd usually get a panel a day(two today though XD ) But then some of these panels were a bit complicated.

I like how this turned out, myself. I'm overall quite pleased with the result and hope you all like it as well! Now, to put in my commentary for it: So here, after insulting Azula and deciding that he's done with her, he raises his hand and tells her to get out of his sight. Of course he plans to get her out of his sight, himself. Azula's eyes widen as she begins to feel a strong force of air, which soon catapults her backward across their battlefield. Toph, feeling the swell in Aang's reiatsu, notices that it feels very strange. She starts to say what it feels like, but finds the notion ridiculous. Katara, however, can see Aang and what's happened to him. And so, she says what Toph does not. Aang's reiatsu feels like that of a Hollow.

I really like the first panel. It took a bit, but I like the look of it. The second panel I also really like, but just now, after I've done this all, I realized that it's backwards. He's using the opposite hand now. I wanted to go back and fix it by just reversing it, but I can't because the hollow mask is on one side of his face and not the other, so it looks weird and still wouldn't be right. Sooo please ignore it, or tell yourself that he switched hands I like panel three. I wanted to get a look of shock and fear onto Azula's face(which I seem to do a lot with this) and I think it came through. I tried making an air effect, but I don't know how good it looks really. I like it, but I dunno if it's obvious that it's air or not. I enjoyed doing panel four since it's so different to any of the others. I wanted to show her flying through the air, but with a different perspective. I'm sure some Azula fanboys (you know who you are) would've liked a shot up her hakama, but sorry, not me. Not much to say about five and six. I like how they turned out.

After this strip, begins the sequence I've been so waiting to do for so long. I wanted to do it so much, I considered not doing the fight scene, but I wanted continuity, so I did the fight scene. This set of events will last for a few strips, maybe till the end. Well, the end of where I've planned up to. I may have said this before...hmm... Of course you guys may or may not like it as much as I do, but I can't wait.

Hope you all enjoy this!

S'rac

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Comments: 85

jakuro-the-demon [2009-10-23 22:29:21 +0000 UTC]

It's not loading!! no matter what i do the picture and not even the frame that indicates that a picture is loading, did you take it off or something?

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aprilblenk [2009-06-25 04:04:37 +0000 UTC]

wats a hollow?

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dolphin64575 [2007-08-28 02:56:03 +0000 UTC]

I LOOOOOOOOOOVE THE LAST 2 PANELS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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SractheNinja In reply to dolphin64575 [2007-09-20 16:10:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! So glad ya like it! ^_^

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dolphin64575 In reply to SractheNinja [2007-09-20 20:07:15 +0000 UTC]

welcome! ^_^

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RazzinAussi [2007-07-05 00:21:14 +0000 UTC]

What exactly is a hollow?

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SractheNinja In reply to RazzinAussi [2007-07-11 08:14:09 +0000 UTC]

This: [link] should give you all the answers you require.

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ConfusionMuffin [2007-05-20 00:04:48 +0000 UTC]

These are really good... but something just hit me.
If Azula is Byakuya, then would that make Zuko Rukia?

Sorry if you've answered this somewhere already! Dx

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SractheNinja In reply to ConfusionMuffin [2007-05-23 09:29:23 +0000 UTC]

Hahah I've come into that conundrum in my own mind... Normally yes...but honestly I'm still trying to figure out how to work Bleachatar to fit all this stuff. Currently I've pegged Zuko as Renji...

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ConfusionMuffin In reply to SractheNinja [2007-05-23 22:06:27 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, Sokka seems more like Renji than Zuko, but I see where you're coming from on that.
And isn't Byakuya related to Rukia only by marriage?

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SractheNinja In reply to ConfusionMuffin [2007-05-28 08:32:04 +0000 UTC]

I can't really figure out just WHERE to fit in Sokka. Group wise, he's probably Ishida...the practical ones who are usually the straight men in many of the jokes...but I dunno...

Well yeah, she's technically his sister-in-law and then he got her into the clan... Crazy clan relations-ss.

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ConfusionMuffin In reply to SractheNinja [2007-05-29 00:04:01 +0000 UTC]

Yea. Also he's got a different method of fighting than the others....
But Ishida is just so humorless...

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SractheNinja In reply to ConfusionMuffin [2007-06-10 09:46:11 +0000 UTC]

True true...

Yeah Ishida mostly just is that target for humor because he's so serious...

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ConfusionMuffin In reply to SractheNinja [2007-06-10 15:54:08 +0000 UTC]

True. I was watching Bleach and realized that Ishida is rather more like Zuko. Daddy-issues, sort of an on-off alliance with the main hero, serious pretty much all the time and struggles to control his powers and get stronger!

And that could leave Sokka as Renji, umm, Toph as Rukia? And Katara as... Inoue! Even though Katara's more of a warrior-type than Inoue, both can heal... And Toph's more tomboyish like Rukia (And comes from a good family). And Sokka's that kind of comic relief guy who's still a good fighter...

Or maybe I am just trying too hard to see parallels between the casts.

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kateison [2007-02-18 01:11:42 +0000 UTC]

air is perfecto... been reading this all the way through... gotta say i lub it!! even though Aang is a bit creepy...

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Click here for real canon Zutara...kinda [link]
When you get there... type in Koh...

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SractheNinja In reply to kateison [2007-02-20 06:03:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! So glad that ya like it! Aaah creepy as he may be, that's what I've been going for, so I'm glad it's coming through. ^_^

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bluchimera [2007-01-10 03:36:31 +0000 UTC]

the toph eyes are cool. almost like a byakugan-ish thing going on there. how she sees reiatsu?

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SractheNinja In reply to bluchimera [2007-01-10 05:44:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya! I'm been thinking about that. It's either like it is in Bleach or...maybe something else. Tis a concept in development.

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shibbynempahcold [2006-12-20 20:17:52 +0000 UTC]

second frame = The Hottness.

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SractheNinja In reply to shibbynempahcold [2006-12-21 05:43:18 +0000 UTC]

Hehe very glad you like it ^__^

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Shinn7755 [2006-12-20 07:44:06 +0000 UTC]

Interesting i have to say, again, i really love how you executed the sequence of this comic! //_^ like when Aang pushed Azula with his wind! good job! what amuses me in this comic is how Toph was saying something about Aang's reiratsu and Katara finished it for her! again, good sequence! may i repeat myself? XDD haha, keep up the good work! //_^

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SractheNinja In reply to Shinn7755 [2006-12-21 05:46:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya! Very glad that ya like it! Yep, Katara knows what Toph's talkin' about. I shall do my best! ^^

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Shinn7755 In reply to SractheNinja [2006-12-22 07:03:30 +0000 UTC]

haha! your very welcome! //_^ and keep up the good work! i shall keep watching you! >D that sounded creepy! XDDD

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SractheNinja In reply to Shinn7755 [2006-12-23 23:25:31 +0000 UTC]

I shall do my best! *looks around, paranoid*

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pokemon-fan [2006-12-20 05:08:28 +0000 UTC]

DANG!2 of my favorite anime in one comic!this is gonna be sweet!and love the lineart and the color u did,its so sharp!

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SractheNinja In reply to pokemon-fan [2006-12-21 05:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! Yeah, so glad that ya like it. Don't see too many BleachxAvatar crossovers out there(I think it's just me )

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pokemon-fan In reply to SractheNinja [2006-12-21 20:33:11 +0000 UTC]

im glad theres atleast one person who does,keep up the good work!

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SractheNinja In reply to pokemon-fan [2006-12-23 23:50:18 +0000 UTC]

I shall do my best! ^^

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Oni-Tai [2006-12-20 03:20:07 +0000 UTC]

Not Azula! Now who am I going to crack pair with Ty Lee? O:

Mm... Ang kinda reminds me of Vegita in panel two. Dunno why.

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SractheNinja In reply to Oni-Tai [2006-12-21 05:51:11 +0000 UTC]

Hahah, don't worry. She's not dead.

Yeah I know what you mean. It's pretty similar to Vegeta's 'Big Bang' pose.

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kalinsheba44 [2006-12-20 00:47:48 +0000 UTC]

oooh. i wanna read soooo muuuchhh mooooreeee! SQUEEEEE!! i love this! XDDD

Toph is cute in this. XDD

i kinda feel sorry for Azula. Aang looks menacing but in a cool way.

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SractheNinja In reply to kalinsheba44 [2006-12-21 05:55:02 +0000 UTC]

Heheh, very glad that ya like it ^____^

Thank ya!

Yeah, it's like, "Wow. Does even AZULA deserve this?" That Hollow Aang. One menacing fellow.

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kalinsheba44 In reply to SractheNinja [2006-12-22 23:13:19 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome ^-^

maybe azula doesnt deserve this, then maybe again maybe she does. its hard to tell which

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SractheNinja In reply to kalinsheba44 [2006-12-23 23:09:09 +0000 UTC]

When I think about her surprise attacking Iroh *twitch twitch* I kinda feel like she does...

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kalinsheba44 In reply to SractheNinja [2006-12-31 01:52:02 +0000 UTC]

good point and she was happy when her mother died...

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SractheNinja In reply to kalinsheba44 [2006-12-31 08:25:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it's like, "Dang! I know you're a bad kid but come on! It's your flippin' MOM!"

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kalinsheba44 In reply to SractheNinja [2007-01-01 20:17:29 +0000 UTC]

exactly

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SractheNinja In reply to kalinsheba44 [2007-01-03 10:02:23 +0000 UTC]

Crazy Azula*shakes head*

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kalinsheba44 In reply to SractheNinja [2007-01-03 19:20:25 +0000 UTC]

XDD yeah

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Murof [2006-12-19 23:54:13 +0000 UTC]

cool, i love Toph's cat-like eyes, and aang's smile...*melts into goo*

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SractheNinja In reply to Murof [2006-12-21 05:58:35 +0000 UTC]

Heheh yeah, I thought you guys might like that look of his.

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Murof In reply to SractheNinja [2007-01-01 07:26:41 +0000 UTC]

who wouldn't? lol

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SractheNinja In reply to Murof [2007-01-03 10:40:21 +0000 UTC]

A Hollow Aang Hater I suppose*rubs chin*

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Murof In reply to SractheNinja [2007-01-04 00:57:51 +0000 UTC]

* :stabs: all HAH (hollow aang haters)* almost looked like i would stab you, noes!!!

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SractheNinja In reply to Murof [2007-01-04 02:40:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm quite thankful not to be stabbed. I do so enjoy Hollow Aang after all.

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Murof In reply to SractheNinja [2007-01-06 01:49:31 +0000 UTC]

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broken0dream [2006-12-19 23:00:08 +0000 UTC]

Yay!! BMore Bleachatar!! *celebrates*

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SractheNinja In reply to broken0dream [2006-12-21 06:11:53 +0000 UTC]

Yep! ^____^

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broken0dream In reply to SractheNinja [2006-12-22 03:28:33 +0000 UTC]

*happy dance* And you're doing more NARUTO stuff, yatta!!

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SractheNinja In reply to broken0dream [2006-12-23 23:31:42 +0000 UTC]

Yes indeed! I've been neglecting it lately and I don't want to do that!

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