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Published: 2013-04-30 21:09:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 2703; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 0
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Coloured version of a previous pen drawing.I was trying to find a good name for her and I settled on Khola Uzima.
According to the website I found about African names Khola means 'Graceful Antelope' in Swahili and Uzima means 'Energetic'. Technically she has two first names but hey.
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NIIICE!
I don't know if it's my dirty mind, but it might be a good idea to tweak the shape/position of the fur that ends on her upper, inner thighs...
My eyes 'read' the area as a...umm...male body part...(that you obviously weren't shooting for).
That aside, I think if you added a few smaller, stronger shadow areas of contrast on her, it would make her 'pop' more strongly.
(Could probably do that to the rock & tree in the foreground, too.)
Maybe a few light clouds in the sky behind her?
(Hmm...Now I want to try an Antelope Woman!)
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I reckon it's mostly your dirty mind. 
And many thanks for the feedback and tips. I get so few comments it's good to have someone else tell me what they think.
Let me know when you draw your antelope woman. I'd like to see that.
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Figured as much...
It IS nice to see a girl with normal sized hooters, tho, and not balloons!
No prob re. the tips. Not sure why you get so little feedback, tho.
Will do.
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Khola is a runner so big boobs would just get in the way.
No feed back = I'm not mainstream?
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Ah, okay. Makes sense.
Dunno. I'm not, either. (I think.)
You do TG & TF's...those ALONE should get more comments...
ESPECIALLY on dA...Fetish Central!
Hmm...
Maybe it has something to do with what words you put in as Keywords when you upload each of your pages?
I dunno. Wish I knew...
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Yeah. Never mind.
At least I don't get any nasty comments.
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Yeah, that IS a good thing...
(Do you comment on the Faves in your Fave section? If not, maybe THAT'S it. I tend to fave & comment pretty much all the time, and I think that people probably check my gallery out via the response out of curiosity...)
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Yeah I should comment more. I notice you've got about 3 times as many comments as me.
I'm not sure how you do it. I hate just leaving a 'that's nice' comment and I try to think up something better but sometimes I can't.
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You might want to try setting up the fave response like a Vulcan would...*Raises eyebrow*
• What do you like the most about the picture? The linework? The poses of the character? The coloration?
What GRABBED your eyes the MOST about the pictures or sequence?
• If you see something in the art that could be improved if they re-try the pic again, what would you suggest to (hopefully) be of help to the artist?
• You can always joke about something related to the pic, or quote relevant music. (Since I'm a Beatles fan, I tend to occasionally quote their songs.
• If the artist fires up your Muse, and you want to try a similar type of character, let them know that...(And maybe note them when your character is up.)
YOU inspired my take on a Triceratops woman (Trish the Tricera), and Flamekin2's robot story inspired me and Kamon72 to start working with Gynoids...
• I've ALSO done the short, "Very COOL"s...more often than I SHOULD have... 
• Try to be as positive and honest as you can. (THIS you already do...and it HELPS.
• Sometimes, I can't think of anything to say, so I bookmark the pic in my browser, and go back to it when I CAN.
• When all else FAILS, use smileys...lots of smileys! 
Well, this is what I tend to try, at any rate...your mileage may vary.
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All good advice. Thank you.
I also wonder if we should have had this lengthy chat in notes. Too late now.
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No prob. Glad it helped.
True.
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