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Stultuscaudex β€” Mary Sue alert

Published: 2009-09-27 13:31:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 8412; Favourites: 185; Downloads: 57
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Description I have no idea which category this should be in. .__.

Anyways, I did this because I am obsessed with Mary Sues at the moment. :3 (Plus, I love taking the tests. XD)

This is an example of how the test talks
Kufa is only a little like you. She may be popular, or she may not, but no matter what she's impossible to ignore; she stands out... just the way you always wanted to. She may have sometimes thought that she was special, or destined for greater things, but probably dismissed the idea as a fantasy. She's come in for her share of hurt, but gotten off with minor damage. And she's gotten no slack from you.

In general, you care deeply about Kufa, but you're smart enough to let her stand on her own, without burdening her with your personal fantasies or propping her up with idealization and over-dramatization. Kufa is a healthy character with a promising career ahead of her.

Score Breakdown
I Love Her, I Let Her Go 5
Yo! 11
I'm Destined For What? 3
Can't Complain 7
Momma HATES Her! 0 No I don't! D:>
Total: 26

Uhayi (Kufa's brother):
Score Breakdown
Do I Know This Guy? 2
You Mean Plaid Is Out? 7
I'm Destined For What? 3
Can't Complain 7
Momma HATES Him! 3 No I don't! D:>
Total: 22


Lilith:
Score Breakdown
I Love Her, I Let Her Go 5
Yo! 14
I'm Destined For What? 9
Can't Complain 6
Spare the Rod and Spoil the Child 6
Total: 40


Carminis:
Score Breakdown
I Love Him, I Let Him Go 4
Yo! 14
I'm Destined For What? 6
Healthy as a Horse 1
Spare the Rod and Spoil the Child 4
Total: 29

And then I made up a Mary Sue just for the heck of it... >.>

Mary-Sue Justine Poppins NekoNeko Pop Raven isn't a character: she's you, or you as you'd like to be. She is so impossibly hip that she has difficulty seeing over her own pelvis; she'll probably die young, but damn, will it have been a good life. She'd have to be pretty dense to miss the signs that she is destined for great things; she can hardly take a walk without tripping over a sword in a stone or a mysterious old woman wanting to tell her fortune. She's had a rough life - to say the least! Angst? Histronics? Her speciality. And you, her creator, have spoilt her rotten and given her everything she wanted.

You identify far too heavily with Mary-Sue Justine Poppins NekoNeko Pop Raven, and defend her from all sides, never realizing that in your quest to make her perfect you are alienating your readers. Back off and take a break. Try writing the story from the viewpoint of a different character, one you have less sympathy with... or writing a different story and coming back to this one.


Score Breakdown
Mirror, Mirror 55
James Dean, James Dean... 40
Stars For Her Eyes 40
Valium Poster Child 51
What A Brat! 54
Total: 240



Link for the message maker: [link]
Link for the Mary Sue test I took: [link]
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Comments: 59

TheNerd0918 In reply to ??? [2016-09-01 03:11:50 +0000 UTC]

I had a similar experience after seeing a Breadwinners oc. It was half duck half alicorn, had rainbow wings, and an special vore ability. All with a tragic backstory to tie the whole thing together. You can't make this sh!t up!

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Lady-Riptide [2015-06-18 18:25:23 +0000 UTC]

My dad just asked me if I could breath after reading this

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Phuindrad [2015-04-18 17:20:36 +0000 UTC]

Great, but will a Fire really kill an Mary Sue?Β  I hope so ._.
Btw: lol

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Natalie4516 [2014-08-14 23:31:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh i don't think so! (grabs a nail bat and strikes a headshot with it)

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HopelessRomantic999 [2014-06-09 06:53:11 +0000 UTC]

Glad I took that test. Now I know that my Hellraiser OCsΒ aren't Mary Sues. Thanks for the link, and this pop-up is pretty funny and exactly how a person would react to a real Mary Sue.

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LionclawOfColdBloods [2013-05-05 01:51:28 +0000 UTC]

*Is on my computer trying to write a fanfic when this message pops up.*

*calmly grabs the Mary Sue by the throat and stabs it in the head a million times, before placing a bomb in its mouth*

*I then throw it to the side, before continuing to write my fanfic*



All is good now.

It's dead.

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EmokoX [2013-02-17 01:30:09 +0000 UTC]

DIE YOU FUCKIN CUNT SUE!

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DarkRoseTheHedgie [2013-01-14 08:43:33 +0000 UTC]

TO YOUR BATTLE STATIONS!! -gets cannon ready-

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ANDREWJustice [2012-08-26 05:36:45 +0000 UTC]

*Me writing a story*. *This pops up*. "DAMN IT, NOT AGAIN"!

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Zelphyr117 [2012-01-18 00:57:35 +0000 UTC]

KILL IT. KILL IT NAO

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Jane-the-Unknowing [2012-01-13 02:49:11 +0000 UTC]

I Love that test!! And this pic!!

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Angelglitched [2011-11-18 11:49:56 +0000 UTC]

A Sue's sapping mah story!

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starlit140 [2011-04-23 08:56:41 +0000 UTC]

I just took the quiz for my OC character:

Score Breakdown
She's Got My Nose 18
She's The Anti-Cool 2
I'm Destined For What? 5
Healthy as a Horse 2
Momma HATES Her! 2
Total: 29


Nina is suspiciously similar to you as you'd like to be. She is not at all cool; in fact, she thinks cool is a temperature reading, and when she says "Oh, I just put on whatever old thing's lying around," she means "on the floor, where I threw it last night - but I turned the underwear inside out first." She may have sometimes thought that she was special, or destined for greater things, but probably dismissed the idea as a fantasy. She's got no emotional scars to speak of. And she's gotten no slack from you.

In general, you care deeply about Nina, but you're smart enough to let her stand on her own, without burdening her with your personal fantasies or propping her up with idealization and over-dramatization. Nina is a healthy character with a promising career ahead of her.

VICTORY!!!!!

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amythedancer123 [2011-04-14 21:35:46 +0000 UTC]

KILL IT WITH FIER. MOAR FIER PLZ.

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inthenameofSweden [2010-12-19 02:27:49 +0000 UTC]

What's considered a good score for a character?

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Stultuscaudex In reply to inthenameofSweden [2010-12-27 16:33:46 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, but I don't think I can answer that accurately~ I suppose the best thing would be to read their comments for each category and decide if you're fine with it or not~

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inthenameofSweden In reply to Stultuscaudex [2010-12-30 02:18:56 +0000 UTC]

Okay! Thanks anyway!

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Stultuscaudex In reply to inthenameofSweden [2010-12-30 13:55:52 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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Talenca [2010-10-17 01:33:48 +0000 UTC]

KILL IT WITH NEUROTOXINS!!!

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Stultuscaudex In reply to Talenca [2010-10-19 21:57:16 +0000 UTC]

PFFFT-HAHA! Too bad I hadn't thought of that! xDDD

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Talenca In reply to Stultuscaudex [2010-10-24 20:13:59 +0000 UTC]

indeeeeed

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Samantha-Deathwish [2010-07-31 05:15:32 +0000 UTC]

Cool! How do you these "alert" messages anyway? I wanna make one too!

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kitsune-queen1230 [2010-01-15 00:14:47 +0000 UTC]

This test is awesome!
My Bleach OC got a 20 on this.


I think I may be sharing your Mary-Sue addiction....

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Stultuscaudex In reply to kitsune-queen1230 [2010-01-17 21:24:38 +0000 UTC]


A 20 on which part? :3

It's hard not to get caught up in it. <:'D

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kitsune-queen1230 In reply to Stultuscaudex [2010-01-21 20:06:16 +0000 UTC]

Everything...counted up together

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Stultuscaudex In reply to kitsune-queen1230 [2010-01-21 20:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Oops! I'm sorry! My brain died a little bit before I asked that question. xDD
Ugghhhh. That was stupid.

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gartastic [2009-10-10 22:10:11 +0000 UTC]

major lulz XD

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Stultuscaudex In reply to gartastic [2009-10-10 22:19:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank yew!

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quamp [2009-10-04 17:13:47 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. it's funnier than my Mary Sue warning...

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Stultuscaudex In reply to quamp [2009-10-05 00:49:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. BAWW! But I thought your Mary Sue one was hilarious! 'I thought this was porn'. xDD

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quamp In reply to Stultuscaudex [2009-10-05 00:58:00 +0000 UTC]

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Infernal-Faun [2009-10-02 02:25:58 +0000 UTC]

thats funny

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Stultuscaudex In reply to Infernal-Faun [2009-10-03 01:14:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^w^

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Infernal-Faun In reply to Stultuscaudex [2009-10-03 01:58:57 +0000 UTC]

np ^^

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SabakuRose [2009-09-27 23:48:35 +0000 UTC]

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Stultuscaudex In reply to SabakuRose [2009-09-27 23:59:34 +0000 UTC]

...

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SabakuRose In reply to Stultuscaudex [2009-09-28 00:04:11 +0000 UTC]

xD

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yamitenshi360 [2009-09-27 18:17:04 +0000 UTC]

XD

OH! you should try 'the mary-sue litmus test' that one was fun. if not really long >>

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Stultuscaudex In reply to yamitenshi360 [2009-09-27 18:20:29 +0000 UTC]

I did! :'D Of course, I only tested Kufa because I was too lazy to go through it again. xDD! I thought that the one I put up was much funner. :'D

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yamitenshi360 In reply to Stultuscaudex [2009-09-28 23:16:52 +0000 UTC]

same, I only tested Hikari. and I must say, its a good thing I did. The first time I tested her she scored over 200. yeah. So I had to re-vamp the hell outta her. now shes just a border line sue. much better.

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Stultuscaudex In reply to yamitenshi360 [2009-09-28 23:46:26 +0000 UTC]

xDDD! lol Kufa's a borderline sue too. :3 But, she has problems with almost all Mary Sue tests because she's dead! Some of those questions I just don't know how to answer. xDD

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yamitenshi360 In reply to Stultuscaudex [2009-09-29 00:30:16 +0000 UTC]

XD when in doubt... IMPROVISE!

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Stultuscaudex In reply to yamitenshi360 [2009-09-29 00:36:20 +0000 UTC]

YESH! >:'D

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Kazeai [2009-09-27 13:37:22 +0000 UTC]


I love this.

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Stultuscaudex In reply to Kazeai [2009-09-27 13:43:54 +0000 UTC]

Your love is tainted. D: Thanks though. XD

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Kazeai In reply to Stultuscaudex [2009-09-27 13:50:28 +0000 UTC]

My love is always pure.

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Stultuscaudex In reply to Kazeai [2009-09-27 13:54:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, in some other dimension... >__>

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Kazeai In reply to Stultuscaudex [2009-09-27 13:58:29 +0000 UTC]

So whatcha up to?

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Stultuscaudex In reply to Kazeai [2009-09-27 14:01:36 +0000 UTC]

Homework. lD And, my mommy's makin' pancakes!!! 8D

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Kazeai In reply to Stultuscaudex [2009-09-27 14:03:39 +0000 UTC]

I WANT PANCAKES

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