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Published: 2017-09-15 14:48:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 552; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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Description Sometimes our worlds gently meet
the attraction has a palpable warmth
softly falling into each other.
Sometimes our worlds collide
there is friction and irritation
sparks fly and the heat burns.
When it´s time for our worlds to part,
with fire in us still lit
we go our separate ways
and we both know it´s love.
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Comments: 24

saturdaystorytellers [2017-09-25 20:42:08 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely so! Wonderfully written!

By the way, put me in contact with you to check out your work. I'll go and check out some more of your poetry now. While I'm about it, I'll set up a request for some of your poems to appear in my group's gallery. If you're willing, please do say yes, it'll be great to show off your work!

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diosrubra In reply to saturdaystorytellers [2017-09-26 19:05:01 +0000 UTC]

thank you for mentioning

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Supach In reply to saturdaystorytellers [2017-09-25 20:52:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh thank you. Yes of course, I´ll look forward to receiving your request. I´ll definitely be writing to Terrence to thank him for mentioning me to you.

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saturdaystorytellers In reply to Supach [2017-09-25 21:02:58 +0000 UTC]

He's certainly dedicated - DA can always use more people like that!

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Supach In reply to saturdaystorytellers [2017-09-25 21:17:33 +0000 UTC]

Yes that´s true and a very caring person too

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shelleypalmer [2017-09-17 14:57:22 +0000 UTC]

So true. When you have such a connection at the time of parting, it takes a while for the flame to die down, into a more comfortable warmth.  If love is there it wont extinguish though!

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Supach In reply to shelleypalmer [2017-09-17 16:33:41 +0000 UTC]

That´s right I think it´s okay to disagree sometimes it doesn´t lessen the love in any way . Thanks Shelley

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TalithaChristian [2017-09-16 23:49:41 +0000 UTC]

God is love, and love is more than butterflies and attraction. It is a decision to treat the other person as you would want to be treated. The two greatest commandments are "love the Lord your God with all your heart, soul, mind and strength" and "love your neighbor as yourself."

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Supach In reply to TalithaChristian [2017-09-17 08:02:02 +0000 UTC]

Yes indeed, I think what I am trying to say in this poem is that it is ok to disagree, Life´s sometimes not a bed of roses but when two people love each other and they both know it then it´s not the end of the world.

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TalithaChristian In reply to Supach [2017-09-17 08:30:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh I see. It's okay to agree to disagree at times. Part of love is learning to respect one another as people.

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seek-and-hide [2017-09-16 19:44:51 +0000 UTC]

As true as any relationship. Beautifully described.

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Supach In reply to seek-and-hide [2017-09-16 23:19:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much  dear Mayumi

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seek-and-hide In reply to Supach [2017-09-19 08:25:26 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!  

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LadyPleiades [2017-09-16 09:05:08 +0000 UTC]

Lovely! 

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Supach In reply to LadyPleiades [2017-09-16 09:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Trish

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LadyPleiades In reply to Supach [2017-09-16 16:35:13 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure!

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Maria-Schreuders [2017-09-16 08:03:11 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful written 

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Supach In reply to Maria-Schreuders [2017-09-16 08:05:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you Maria

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Maria-Schreuders In reply to Supach [2017-09-17 05:03:16 +0000 UTC]

You're so welcome dear Suzanne  

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xDonnervogelx [2017-09-15 17:06:22 +0000 UTC]

I love the way it's open for any interpretation to the readers themselves (=

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Supach In reply to xDonnervogelx [2017-09-15 17:23:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much   

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xDonnervogelx In reply to Supach [2017-09-15 17:24:17 +0000 UTC]

(=

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Lineke-Lijn [2017-09-15 16:48:59 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful.... 

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Supach In reply to Lineke-Lijn [2017-09-15 17:22:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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