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saturdaystorytellers [2017-09-25 20:42:08 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely so! Wonderfully written!
By the way, put me in contact with you to check out your work. I'll go and check out some more of your poetry now. While I'm about it, I'll set up a request for some of your poems to appear in my group's gallery. If you're willing, please do say yes, it'll be great to show off your work!
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saturdaystorytellers In reply to Supach [2017-09-25 21:02:58 +0000 UTC]
He's certainly dedicated - DA can always use more people like that!
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shelleypalmer [2017-09-17 14:57:22 +0000 UTC]
So true. When you have such a connection at the time of parting, it takes a while for the flame to die down, into a more comfortable warmth. If love is there it wont extinguish though!
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TalithaChristian [2017-09-16 23:49:41 +0000 UTC]
God is love, and love is more than butterflies and attraction. It is a decision to treat the other person as you would want to be treated. The two greatest commandments are "love the Lord your God with all your heart, soul, mind and strength" and "love your neighbor as yourself."
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Supach In reply to TalithaChristian [2017-09-17 08:02:02 +0000 UTC]
Yes indeed, I think what I am trying to say in this poem is that it is ok to disagree, Life´s sometimes not a bed of roses but when two people love each other and they both know it then it´s not the end of the world.
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TalithaChristian In reply to Supach [2017-09-17 08:30:31 +0000 UTC]
Oh I see. It's okay to agree to disagree at times. Part of love is learning to respect one another as people.
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seek-and-hide [2017-09-16 19:44:51 +0000 UTC]
As true as any relationship. Beautifully described.
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xDonnervogelx [2017-09-15 17:06:22 +0000 UTC]
I love the way it's open for any interpretation to the readers themselves (=
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Lineke-Lijn [2017-09-15 16:48:59 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful....
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