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Published: 2016-04-21 15:53:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 6718; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 0
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Description sometimes you want to spit out your teeth
because you’ve been grinding them so hard
under a diaphanous coating of crimson lipstick;
but you know the floors already freckled with confetti-
aluminum and glass and paper-
and the eburnean pearls tucked away in your mouth
are not able to be recycled

and sometimes it’s rivulets on the back of your neck,
droplets dripping like honey,
because the rooms heating up from people swarming like bees;
as your cheeks burgeon like crimson roses
your oversized sweater becomes your only source of safety-
maybe from the constant touch of others,
as they bump around like lost passengers at a train station,
or maybe protection from those seeking pollination

you see mouths painted
with the liquid limerence, the daunting dalliance,
of any boy or girl with a tongue;
as their veins pump with effervescent liquid,
and their hearts turn to corks and bottle caps,
you can’t help but wonder what it’s like
to dance with something other than your feet

and sometimes it’s a rock in the bottom of your stomach
that causes you to take a seat;
as you cough up pieces of pebbles,
brackish water fills the veined rivers of your hands-
you skip the pebbles in the sapphire sea of people
only to realize you’re the center of the ripple,
as all the intoxicated seem to want a word
with the only sober person in the room
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Comments: 21

DandelionRaw [2017-06-09 09:46:58 +0000 UTC]

They really paint a picture, your words! Enjoyable indeed ~

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Tangled-Tales In reply to DandelionRaw [2020-02-19 01:32:18 +0000 UTC]

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Larathain [2016-07-01 14:43:32 +0000 UTC]

It is messy business, being sober in a sea of sobriety while the others succumb to another form of serious sanity in a sorrow solace sauce. Then again, it could be some concoction of celestial celerity, making your crimson coarse like the craven calamity called chaos. A heat that herds the hollow away, harried by the humor of inebriated hallows, a happenstance of humanity seeking to hurry your heart, another holy substance in the hilt of your helix holes, within the howl of ecstatic hilarity you hitch another holden hidden haven into your humble home of soul, head turning from here to hover, you have a new healed history in the hope of hell's holiday hint, and it helps you sing the horror halt hymn to had by haven't. - What it is to not be sober

Just thought I would play the devil's advocate here. Everything has it's place, and everything has a function to fancy in the fun of fulfillment. Experience and excellence exist in eternity, but the evanescence of eminence is in being eared to each empty eulogy of what is: being a "goody-goody". Being innocent and pristine to the minds of purists, or living the full morose malady of misery that is a life without experimentation in the realm of your hallow whole by having a holy-inspired conscience, change it by consuming concoctions of cool celestial consciousness, and call to chaos: claim callow and callous from the container of carelessness, catch the constant cold and carry it to cataclysm, and cure the calamity of corrupted causality from your cavity of creation.

Open your mind and find the light within.

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Tangled-Tales In reply to Larathain [2016-08-01 19:50:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the deep response! "Open your mind and find the light within." Can't argue with that!

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LuckySpirit14 [2016-05-17 22:12:25 +0000 UTC]

Not a mess at all. Interesting!
To me its like seeing the world for what it realy is and not wanting to be around people who do those things....

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Tangled-Tales In reply to LuckySpirit14 [2016-05-25 16:20:08 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh thank you for the feedback!

Glad you enjoyed it!

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LuckySpirit14 In reply to Tangled-Tales [2016-05-27 15:44:45 +0000 UTC]

 

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Nortstar [2016-05-16 16:01:33 +0000 UTC]

it was very nice

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Tangled-Tales In reply to Nortstar [2016-05-25 16:19:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Nortstar In reply to Tangled-Tales [2016-05-26 17:33:48 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome

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Flightless-Wingz [2016-04-22 18:53:24 +0000 UTC]

It's definitely not a mess. I mean, it doesn't look like it to me - it's very powerful I think Beautiful work! I really relate to it to, especially with my 21st b-day coming up in a few days @_@

I don't mind being the only sober one too much... I mean, I have no desire to drink, but it does get uncomfortable sometimes depending on who I'm with. One of my friends constantly introduces me as her "goody-two shoes friend" or calling me a saint or whatever just because I don't drink or use drugs or anything. It gets annoying, and I feel like I'm a unicorn to them... They're also trying to get me drunk and even want to drag me to a bar on my 21st just to get me "not totally trashed, but definitely messed up." It's ridiculous.

Other friends just get weird and loud, and we have a great time, and I forget that I'm the only sober one, which is fun.
 
I definitely don't regret never having woken up, unsure of what happened the night before, so that's nice XD

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LuckySpirit14 In reply to Flightless-Wingz [2016-05-17 22:10:59 +0000 UTC]

Stay the way you are! Stay strong you rock!!

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Tangled-Tales In reply to Flightless-Wingz [2016-04-27 00:27:38 +0000 UTC]

Well, I hope whatever you choose to do on your 21st- you enjoy it! Do whatever your heart desires: whether that be drinking or not!

It's definitely fun to watch drunk people haha. Especially when they are your close friends!

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TaylorNicoleReed [2016-04-21 23:43:55 +0000 UTC]

It's really weird, being sober when everyone else is drunk. Like, I'm not even sure how to describe it. Part of it sucks, because you end up breaking up arguments or solving drunk problems, but part of it's fun because you get to just sit back and watch everyone else do stupid things without worrying about finding yourself on the internet tomorrow. And part of it's kind of... lonely. You stick out, and obviously so. The other drunk people seem to pick up on that and usually ply you with drinks or want to have a very slurred talk with you because you're 'not having fun'. If I'm the DD for one of these, I usually just go somewhere else until the people I'm driving for are ready to leave. I don't like the isolation.

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TaylorNicoleReed In reply to TaylorNicoleReed [2016-04-22 21:09:48 +0000 UTC]

That is very true, lol. It definitely has its perks sometimes.  

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Tangled-Tales In reply to TaylorNicoleReed [2016-04-22 14:10:46 +0000 UTC]

I concur with a lot of what is said! It's also kind of cool to be isolated, sometimes.

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MadKingFroggy [2016-04-21 20:35:53 +0000 UTC]

I don't drink. I just pretend to be drunk and then watch as hilarity ensues around me! XD

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Tangled-Tales In reply to MadKingFroggy [2016-04-22 14:10:59 +0000 UTC]

Hahha, I have drank once since being 21!

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2016-04-21 19:18:14 +0000 UTC]

It's better than being drunk and making a fool out of myself.

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Tangled-Tales In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2016-04-22 14:10:22 +0000 UTC]

Hahah, I apparently like to dance a lot. And not very well.

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Tangled-Tales [2016-04-22 15:29:16 +0000 UTC]

As long as you have fun...

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